a little song i made

[evil^milk]

i'd been longing to record this song ever since i thought of it. It's not very well recorded but you can sort of see where I'm going with the song.

check it out, tell me what you think

http://www.filelodge.com/files/hdd4/58580/mistakes part 1.mp3

 

[Qonfused]

I really like it but until the second guitar comes in. I dunno just seemed awkward.

 

[evil^milk]

yeah - the second guitar ended up being kinda crappy, specially around the end. thanks for the comment though

 

[Shakermaker]

I actually like the combo. But I'd start earlier with the electric guitar. Two chords acoustic -> enter electric. Acoustic provides the rhythm so try and keep that. The electric guitar plays lead so it can improvise a bit but don't fiddle too much. Improvise around the main theme, don't just improvise. I like your stuff, keep it coming!

 

[DeusExMachina]

Worst song ever.

Nah, I'm kidding. It's good, I liked it, I appreciated the second guitar too.