A piece of my graphics CW

[baron insig]

Oveall, im doing this, a cd cover, and a video of what it describes on there!

and a stand with a poster style thing and storage for games and demos

for AS level graphics coursework!

 

[xombine]

Hrm not too bad. Is the writing portion weighed heavily because you might want to reconsider the text on the back, its oddly worded imo. And also, the fisherman looks wierd in the middle of the sky. Other than that, nice job.

 

[CptStern]

the Day of Defeat text should be bigger bolder and with more emphasis on the title. The word Source should be just as Big as Day of Defeat, that way it's clear it's different than the original ..oh and if you're going to use a war type font try to use the real deal. Try using the default "Stencil" font in photoshop. The cover should ideally only have one main shot, leave the insert pics for the back cover as they detract from the cover as a whole


beyond the text everything looks great

 

[Vegeta897]

I agree with Stern, those secondary shots distract too much.

And the little descriptions badly need to be revised and reworded D:

"They'll never know whats hit them" That's not even proper English

No offence taken I hope.

 

[Qonfused]

On the cover, take off the guy and the in-game screenshot so that all that's there is the Title a background image. The back is... well, others have stated.

 

[$kelet0r]

i think you should completely redo the lost coast side - the DODS bit just needs improving

 

[baron insig]

well, with iths there is no back front,

one describes dod, one describes lost coast

there is text missing on the loast coast side, i did kinda wang in the text, to get the overall look, i am going to change the text, so it is more consceice (sp?) and condense it a lil

equally, the fonts used for text, are too bold when compared tot he title, so might be a good idea, to get rid of the curvyness and go for stencil,

i was thinking, of typing the text getting it the right size, duplicationg that layer, putting a kinda ruddy brown under it, and erasings top layer lightly so it looks a bit more Iron-ish

ill show you all when things happen!


ta for pointing out any discpreancies, i will take them in consideration, when my room loses the ever so feint stench of white spirit (paint thinnner)

edit: oh yeah Briliant C&C, MUCH appreciated