Beachvolley (?) girl...

[Sorze]

I just tried to do some stuff a little different than usual and this is what came out!
Get's me all mistyeyed and patriotic! (She is wearing the swedish flags' colors )

I'ts a colored sketch, nothing too fancy, but please give some c & c, pats on the back etc., you know the drill...

As for the background, I guess it's windy on the beach today, just thought it looked nicer than plain grey...

 

[63]

Looks alright Her nose looks like it was punched into her face though

 

[PunisherUSA]

Her kneecaps got sucked into her legs as well. Heads a little small. But for the most part, pretty good!

 

[Sorze]

Hehe, yeah I can see what you mean about the nose...

Kneecaps sucked into her legs ? Those are muscles over the kneecaps, but yeah, I'll think about that in the future...

Thanks for your replies guys!

 

[Dux]

Hey, cool. Guy's have already posted the little probs I saw with is, so, er - yeh.

[edit] Yeah, knee caps look a little exagerated.

 

[Glo-Boy]

Looks alright Her nose looks like it was punched into her face though

the bitch just wouldn't listen.

 

[Sorze]

Haha...

Sometimes they just don't listen...




*Stops being a male schauvinist pig.

 

[CrazyHarij]

Hehe, pretty nice. :thumbs:

Although there are some proportional and anatomical errors, the head is very small and the shape of the skull is sort of unrealistic. The left hand is very weird, big and the fingers seem to be too fat. her arm muscles are unrealistic aswell, and her clavicle does not connect correctly to her arm sockets. The torso/ribcage shape is a little weird, and her pelvis is very small compared to the rest of the body. The knees look VERY weird. :O

Other than that, the whole idea is very good and she looks very sexy, the coloring is very good aswell. GO SWEDEN!

www.fineart.sk should help you get started in anatomy, I recommend getting some books too, like Figure Drawing & Anatomy For The Artist by John Raynes and The Figure in Action: Anatomy For Artists by Louise Gordon.

 

[Sorze]

Thanks for all the help guys, 'preciate it.. I wouldn't have spotted half of all that mehself...

Hows this for proportions in the face on this new sketch? I checked out fineart.sk, it seems real good, thx for the link harij, but I'm a little lost.. I'm not sure how to navigate it, it's kind of a weird layout..

 

[The Terminator]

shoulders are a bit too big, and they need to be sloped downward more. Hands a bit big too, good job though.

 

[<RJMC>]

sexy....ah err is fine pic
the girl looks fine
I suck to draw humans faces