Bored, So I had a go...

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Ok, It might not be right good, but I was bored.....


Thunder roard overhead as the rain came splattering down. It was a dark night and the moon casted shadows over the ruined street. Four Scanners floated down, passing the burnt out shells of cars and bombed out buildings, coming to a halt to examine a body strewn across the cracked pavement. Suddenly a voice cried "Now!" and about twenty men that had went unoticed in the shadows leaped out and aimed at the machines. One of them pressed the clackers and claymores riped apart the area where the scanners where. 3 went down in the blast and the remaining was hit by a HE round. "Good job lads!" shouted the same man who had shouted before. This man was Kevin Ranger, former captain of the Royal Marines. He had escaped from the UK when the combine had invaded with a few of his squadies. Barely alive and allmost out of ammo they had stumbled across City 17, where they had joined up with the local resistance. He,and his remaining men had been accepted gratefully into the resistance as their forces had been waining and all hope was being lost.
"Come on lets move out, they will be here soon!"
There job was to cause as much confusion in the Combine force and to scatter therir forces around so they were easyer targets.
"Head for point baker, Joe! Your on point"
The men groaned and cursed as they slung their gear and began to move towards the next AO. Most of them were tired, footsore and very wet. The idea of finding wet weather gear was laughable. Ranger summoned the radio-man and made a brief sit-rep to base, he was told to proceed.
The squad were now moving into the less inhabited areas of the city that were seldom patroled, but they had recieved intel that a large number of combine soldiers were amassing in the aerea. The tipoff from an insider had also said that they were due to move out to the west sector where there was a heavy battle was being fought, including captured tanks and enemy striders. Rumor had it that one was brought down by a mysterious man in an advanced orange PCV or something. Morale was high and they men were joking about it quietly to themselves, much to the anoyance of the Captain.
After about 45 minutes of wandering the wrecked city they came to a narrow street litterd with destroyed vehicles and colapsed buildings. The perfect place for an ambush as there is little coever for anybody down in the street. The pointman signaled over the comm:
"Sir, were about half a click from the AO, no sign of the enemy"
Ranger keyed his headset and gave the men their orders
"This is it lads, you know what to do, get to your possistions and dig in. I want a perimeter set up so those bastards cant flank us. I want claymores and trip-flares oround those cars, when they go up, blow the claymores. for the suckers that remain: put down supressing fire. Make sure the 2 MG's have a clear field of fire, we cant afford to let any get away and report us.... Good luck people, stay frosty. MOVE!"
He didnt need to say the last word as at once the soldiers sprang up and moved to their pre aranged possisions. The traps were layed and the machine gun, an old WW2 MG42 was set up on the second floor of an old shop overlooking the street below. The other was set up behind the wreckage of a burnt out postal van.
Mark Jones, a Private, had settled into a crater just in front of the Captian's posistion. He was joined by his close friend, Steven Hawkins.
"what the f*** are we doing out here man. this is enemy turf!" whisperd Hawkins
"chill out mate, we got the upper hand here. And if these re-inforcements get thru then that battle is lost and more of our guys will die" replied Jones in an exasperated tone. He looked down the empty street and saw that the rain was stopping, he could see the others looking up to the sky wearing smiles on their faces. Suddenly the comm awoke with chatter between the scout and the CO.
"This is Eye 1, I have contact with enemy troops, man theres a lot more than we expected!"
"how many"
"If we kill em all we wont have room to bury em all!"
"Roger, fall back, This is it lads you know what to do!
Jones pulled out a fresh magazine and slapped it hard into his L85-A2. Hawkins did the
same with his OICW. All of their fingers trembled on the triggers of their weapons as they looked through the sights at the gloomy street, expecting the combine unit to appear at any second.
A scanner apreard, followd by at least 70 combine soldiers, each heavily armed. They were marching 5 abreast down the middle of the road straight into the trap. Ranger made one last message through the comm
"Hold your fire! wait till their closer!"
The group had advanced past the cars, the leading soldier triggered the trip-flare, which shot into the sky casting a read light over everything. Instantly there was an massive explosion that riped through the area, the sound echoed for miles across the city. As the dust cleared, another flare went up and the order was given to open fire!
 
Good start mate! You should definately carry on with it, IMHO.
 
There was an allmighty roar as 15 l85's, 2 L86 LSW's, 2 Heavy MG's and 1 PSG1 opened fire. The street was lit up by hundreds of tracers flying in both directions, the cracking of the weapons echoing through the empty streets. After the blast from the claymores, the remaining combine had reacted instantly to the situation and had thrown themseves into prone possisions or behind wrecked vehicles. About half of the group was ripped apart by the blast and all that remaind was chared chunks of flesh and twisted shards or armour. A combine grenadier manged to fire off a HE round from his M203, it flew in a high arc over the battle and hit home: the building that contained one of the Mg42's exploded, killing its crew instantly and sending debris everywhere. The men looked on horified at the sight of two of their friends being hurled through the air and landing in grotesque heaps on the rubble. There was a cry of hatred and several of the men began to empty entire mags into the advanceing Combine. "Short controlled bursts! Short controlled bursts! Watch your ammo!" Cried the Captain into the comm. Several men were hit and began screaming in pain, the Medic got up from his foxhole and sprinted across the road towards the wounded as if the tracers missing him by centimeters did not exist! The eyes of many soldiers stared on, awed by his bravery! 5 minutes had past now and the Combine had been allmost wiped out when the last 13 decided to try and rush the enemy possitions. Combine will never be captured, and they will never retreat. They would rather die. They were easy targets in the open, so the marines clicked into semi-auto and placed bullets into the soft Gasmasks: the slumped to the ground and skidded to a halt: The battle was over. The scanner however had drifted away over the rooftops un noticed.
"Good job lads!" shouted the Captain, and he was greeted with cheers. Worried they would lose concentration he shouted "Hold! keep your guard up! Johnson, make sure their down, search them for any Intel. Collect all their weapons and ammo! The rest of you secure this AO!"
The Medic, a young man called James Hunt, rushed over to the captain as he had been hit in the lower leg by schrapnol. "whats the damage Hunt?" Asked Ranger as the Medic patched him up, "We lost Jenkins and Tomson on the machinegun, Also Jones, Peters and Crowe lost it." Replied Hunt with a tone of fury in his voice. "We got several wounded, nothing serious, but Deckers' badly burned: we need a medevac"
"Sorry I cant do that, this AO is way too hot. Just try and stabilise him the best you can" Breathed Ranger. "Shit! We're 6 men down, low on ammo and now we lost the god damn Machine guns!" He thought to him self. "Shit!" he said out load.
The medic finnished treating him and returned to Deckers. Ranger got up and walked over to his fallen comrades, He reached into their clothes and extracted their dog tags. He would have to leave the bodies here. He dreaded to think what the xenofauna would do to them. A tear formed and was wiped away, 3 of these men had been very close friends.
"Sir!, I have a papa-oscar-whiskey over here!" shouted Jackson. Ranger sprinted over and looked down at the wounded combine trooper. It was an oficer! A major Intel coop! He gave his orders "Secure this POW, for transit, if he tried to escape blow his head off. Right men Listen up! We move out in 5 minutes, grab your gear and saddle up! RADIOMAN!" Owens ran up to the captain and handed him the headset."Get me HQ on the horn"

"Hotel six, this is Fist Alpha"
"***ist a****** sig***is bad **ad***ples** re****"
"This is First Alpha, say again, signal is bad, We are at point baker. Mission succes, we are moving out, over?"
"****b**advised****repo***of* stri***are**ple****resp**"
"Damit! This radio is dog shit! Hotel Six please come in!"
"**********"

"sorry sir, i cant get a lock on the signal, its as if were being jammed" Breathed the Radio man.
"what? How can that be? How can they be jamming us if..... if they dont know were here!" he whisperd with a look of fear on his face" He got on the comm:
"Listen up! Did you see anybody enemy troops report our possition?"
There was 14 replies of "No sir".Then it hit him. The scanner! He had asumed that it had been taken out by the blast. It must have survived!
"Move out now! They are on to us! head for the nearest sewer entrance! Forget the prissoner! Move! Go Go GO! They began running as fast as they could towards the end of the street where a large explosion had ruptured the sewer system.
At that moment, several things happend at the same time: The radioman was hit by a sniper round,A shell landed behind them taking out 3 men and knocking the rest off their feet sending a shower of debris over them. The the soldier nearest to the sewer entrance yelled in terror at the top of his voice...
"STRIIIIIIIIIIDDEEEEEEEEERRRRR!!!!!"
 
Wow!

Well done with gettin the right name of the british rifle (Such a cool gun, if not a little funny lookin)

Good work mate. Keep it coming.
 
A strider was approaching fast, its massive energy cannon ablaze. Men were scattering in all directions trying to find cover, many being hit and torn apart. Ranger dived behind a wrecked car,just in time as the strider zeroed in on him.
"Squad! Get to the sewers and stay out of the open! MOVE!" He shouted into the comm.
The Strider was now right over them, its huge legs feet away from him. With covering fire from the soldier who had taken refuge with him, he sprinted across the road dodging fire and hurled himself into a crater that containd the body of the team engineer. He grabbed a chunk of C-4, set the fuse for 5 seconds and threw it towards the Strider with all his might. The demo pack flew in a great arc and detonated next to one the machines leg joints, there was a massive noise as the joint shatterd and the crippled strider lost ballance and smote the ground.
Just as ranger turned to run, another combine unit rounded the corner and opened fire. An RPG wizzed past him and hit the building on his left. He was thrown clear by the force of the explosion and landed flat on his face, his ears ringing and his vision blurring. He looked up and saw his men fleeing and being cut down, he tried to get up but his injured leg collapsed under the weight.
Further down the street, the combine who had fired the RPG had discarded it and was fireing at the fleeing allies with his G36. He noticed the injured captian trying desparately trying to claw his way across the rubble and escape.
Combine 01993 raised his rifle, aimed and fired. He watched as the rounds peirced the mans back, he saw the look of suprise on his face, He saw the man fall dead to the ground with a pool of blood forming below the him.
Combine 01993 did not care, and continued with the counter-attack.


The End.
But if sombody can add more then feel free.
 
The only thing I can say that was done wrong is you mentioned the guns too much, we dont need to know the exact gun their using.

Instead of saying L85A2 just say rifle
 
Gripping story indeed! But as Dalamari said, to much gun details. Especially that random MG42 you threw in.

Another thing I don't quite get is why Valve called the rocket launcher an RPG. Isn't it actually a stinger? RPGs are what the russians made, e.g. RPG-7, commonly seen used by militants in poorer countries.

If you had allowed the men to run into Gordon when the strider came, that would have been best. Personally, I most enjoy fanfics that combine mostly original material with small bits which lead into known scenarios/situations in that universe.
 
Poin taken, but I wanted to add some more depth to the weapons, not the usual M16's and the like. His squad was wiped out so maybe Gordon is going to have some new friends to play with after all :cheese:
 
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