cave-scene

[mindless_moder]

just a scene i was working on thought id share it with yall.
this will be my room in the stone project
lol
im still figuring out the texture merging but as far as the stretching is going i like the stretching so nyah.
ill probably use this scene as a map and show u the rd ingame tests on this map and others.

 

[dawdler]

Cant see very much

 

[mindless_moder]

true thats coz caves are dark im gonna put some cobwebs and stuff the only source of light is a lill coming from the back from the sun and the lil orange one from the front that is coming from a flaming torch.
can u crit wht u can see?

 

[SidewinderX]

hrm, i htink there's a tutorial that's alot like you scene, look at that for some ideas.

 

[IchI]

u can make such a better cave with the 3dbuzz tutorial.

 

[mindless_moder]

huh? i didnt use a tutorial side if thats wht ur implying this is just a scene i wanted to make BY MYSELF so could u guys pointo ut the things that are wrong for me?

 

[dawdler]

Cant point out much. For example, now when I have just started the computer (monitor isnt warmed up fully), its all black with a hint of the texture on the floor. I cant see shit otherwise. It doesnt even look like a cave
One thing I do remember though, its to smooth. It doesnt really look like a true cave... Caves arent round normally.

REALLY need one rendered without specific lighting, just bright ambient.

 

[mindless_moder]

well when i said natural cave i meant that its not man made think of an animals lair.

 

[IchI]

make a tube apply a bend modifier then add noise. After that apply nurms. The apply a quick material with a rock texture and apply a bump make to that. Taking on average about 3-5minutes.

What can we point out?

lol

 

[SidewinderX]

no i wasn't saying it was the tutorial's woork, but i was jsut reccomending that you can look at that for ideas and methods.

 

[mindless_moder]

hmm ichi it wasnt that easy i didnt work with any modifiers besides editable poly ur trying to degrade my work there is no noise no bend no nothing.

 

[ankalar]

There's a seam in the texture.

 

[SidewinderX]

there's a texture?

 

[Stone]

Originally posted by SidewinderX143
there's a texture?

yes, the seam is at the top left...really noticeable....

oh and people, i've just updated the thread for what this is for, so go check it out

 

[mindless_moder]

thank you all for all of the encouraging and wonderful crits i mean u guys really told me exactly wht was wrong in the scene thanks a whole lot guys.