Check out my first map

[broken89]

Well a few days ago i started messing with source SDK and well i have an early version of my map that i wanted to let you guys check out and tell me where i can improve and what you think.

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=WUBP98S5

 

[UK_Karlos]

Looks like an interesting map.
A segestion.. Hmm y dont u make the map look more like a cave instead of having all of that grass every where and try to add more shape to it instead of it just been square.

Its good for a first try.. Better then mine.. Lol:E

 

[DjBourgeoisie]

ew...

 

[-Psy-]

No lighting and no layout.

Badddddd

 

[Unarmed]

Hammer shots?

Come on.

 

[broken89]

heh

Well I see these aren’t the friendliest of forums but o well. like I said I haven’t spent much time on this map and I know the lighting is well it sucks and I wasn’t planning on leavening the grass texture on all the walls. But I do plan on improving this map ALOT in my free time (Note: I don’t have crap for free time cuz school sucks) But ill get it done eventually.:cheers:

 

[Unarmed]

Dont think we are unpleasant people here.... But hammer shots show sooooo little.

And the map aint gorgeous, even you can see that.

Compile with lighting. Then post. And if map is ugly we will say so, but we will also tell you how to improve... But hammer shots is a big no. Might as well draw an overview in paint and give us that....

 

[broken89]

Heh, well yes at this point detail/textures are my last priority im just trying to get kind of a rough outline of the map then progress. see what im saying?

but when i do get the map looking good ill post more pix.

 

[Unarmed]

Heh, well yes at this point detail/textures are my last priority im just trying to get kind of a rough outline of the map then progress. see what im saying?

but when i do get the map looking good ill post more pix.

May I then suggest using of dev textures and NODRAW while doing this and then maybe texture later?