City 17-Zombies

[Brendan]

The other stuff i did when i was bored and hopefully this one will be better....The character's are based on me and my cousions


A man sits up in bed with a jolt, this had been happening all week due to the eerie noises outside kept him stirring in bed. The man flicks on the tv, dispite the bad reception he can make out Breen droaning on with another announcment, The man shuts it off and moves into the kitchen. He opens the fridge, there is practically nothing but some milk and a half eaten orange. He slams the fridge door and can hear in a crackling combine voice "Halt Citizen, come with me". Another combine midnight snag he thinks.

He opens the door and sees a combine hastling his neighbour. The man looks at the old woman being hastled by the combine, he holds up fingers 1,2,3 and leaps at the combine. The combines stun baton lights, but the impact knocks him to the floor. The man pulls a taser from the combines holster and gives him a jolt. His voice slowly dies away."Thank you dearie" mutters the old lady, "whats your name?" "Brendan" the man replys.

Brendan after having a chat with the old lady, begins to return to his room, but cannot see as to how he can go back to bed after this incident. So instead Brendan starts down the hall. A sizzle is heard followed by a blue light eluminating the stairs, Instantly Brendan bolts up the stairs towards the roof of the apartment building. Brendan stops and peers through the railing and sees that two more combine are progressing towards the unconcious one.

"Unit 341, down" one of the combine says in a static covered voice. "Citizen!" Brendan flys up the stairs and trys to open a door. Locked. The combine start up the stairs, one with his hand on his holster."In here" a voice yells and pulls Brendan into a dark room.*Click* "There, locked ain't no combine getting through there" the voice says. "Here i'll get the lights" *Flip* "By the way, the names Sam", "Brendan" Brendan replys.

"Sorry we had to meet under these circumstances, err..Brendan".
"Citizen, housecheck.Escaped rebel by the name of Brendan" A combine voice rings. "No one in here but me" Sam replys. The footsteps lead away down the stairs. Brendan walks to the window and peers out, while Sam grabs some weapons and loads a pistol. "I have to go, its not safe for me here" Brendan mutters.

 

[MarcoPollo]

i like it keep it up

 

[Brendan]

"We should head out and up the stairs, little people go to the attic anymore". Brendan nods, him and Sam unlock the door and sneak up the stairs. Brendan jumps up and grabs the latch to the attic, it slides down easily. Him and sam climb the ladder into the attic and look around, cobwebs and old furniture litter the room. There is one window at the end and the moonlight is shining through it. They continue toward the window leading out onto the roof.

Crack..Boom! the floor breaks and Brendan's leg is stuck in the floor. Sam runs and tugs on his arm to try to get him out. The latch lifts and a hand places a machine ontop on the floor."Scanner!" Brendan yells, just as Sam tugs him out the two jump behind a box. Flash, the scanner takes a picture of the empty room. "take this" Sam mutters and shoots at the Scanner which instantly turns. The only sound heard is the clatter of metal.

The window creaks as its opened. Brendan and Sam continue along watching there step. The two come to a hole in another roof and a man is sleeping in there. Sam aims his gun. Eaarh!. A creature leaps out of the darkness and latches onto the sleeping mans head. "Jesus" Sam yells as he falls back and starts to slide off the roof. Brendan reaches for his hand and clasps it. He pulls Sam onto the roof, just as the man with the creature latched onto its head stands up.

What the hell was that!?, They both wonder as they run along the roof. A smashing of glass is heard and another man with a creature attached to his head falls to the ground below.A man leans out of the window, this man with no creature and fires at the "thing" that fell out. He aims his gun up at Sam and Brendan, then lowers it. Without saying a word he jumps up grabs the gutter and flings himself onto the roof.

"Daniel" the man replys after being asked his name. Daniel is well armed with a Winchester and is skilled with the weapon. The three continue on the roof as Daniel tells his story. "Those things as you call them, were once human beings just up until the headcrab attachs to thier head. Then they become the living dead, just like in a horror movie full of zombies, but this version scientifically works, I have dedicated myself to stopping them.

"your story?" Daniel asks Brendan and Sam. "everyday i wake up in a shithole of an apartment listen to Breen droan on and pick up the combine rations at my door, not much to tell" Brendan replys. "About the same resistance life style" Sam adds. "Think you can make it?" Sam asks as they come to an alley between the buildings making them forced to jump.

"Sure" Daniel replys and jumps across with ease. Brendan jumps and scrambles to his feet on the otherside. Sam leaps and lands directly on the edge and starts to fall back. Brendan and Daniel grab him by the shirt collar and pull him back onto the roof. Daniel grins "Can you make it?" he mocks, and they all grin

 

[MarcoPollo]

Still good but it seemed a little rushed with the carachter development but im just the peanut gallery...i still like it :thumbs:

 

[Brendan]

Sam brushes his shirt off. Brendan starts to set up some sleeping bags and calls Daniel over to help. The eerie noise that woke Brendan up rings out. Daniel looks up for a matter of seconds and looks back down to the sleeping bags. "Zombies" he replys practically reading Brendan's mind. The three had set up camp in a broken roof that they broke themselves. "Improvising" Brendan had called it. They all slid into the sleeping bags and tried to sleep on the cold floor for a change. Daniel kept his gun close. Earrh! A headcrab jumped through the hole they broke. Before Sam could even reach for his pistol Daniel had blown a hole clear through it.

"Looks like well be eating" Brendan joked as he picked up the headcrab. "Hurl it away" Sam commented, he ran up picked it out of Brendan's hand and threw it. Then he went back to his sleeping bag. Daniel after reloading his gun rolled over and went to sleep, Sam and Brendan soon followed. Brendan had an eerie dream of a zombie getting so close to him but then going back to where it had started to walk from.

The sun was blocked by a cloud, like a giant's shadow looming over the city. "These rations are awful" Daniel complained. The "rations" only consisted of a vitamin and an orange, an old orange to be exact. They all got out of the hole and headed to the edge and looked out at the city. Less people than normal were in the street. A combine standing near an alley was pulled away by something!. Daniel pointed his gun and so did Sam. Bam! Brendan followed the guns to the alley. Blood poured of the alley.

"Green blood?" Brendan asked as he sat on the edge. "Yes, after the headcrab attaches to you, it alters you, like i said you become the living dead. Daniel replied. "Creepy" Sam muttered. They began shimming down a waterpipe on the side of a building.
"Hopper, careful" Daniel said. Looking down Brendan saw a metal thing with a red light in the middle. When he got to close it turned green and hopped into the air. "Kick it!" Daniel yelled and Brendan did so. The hopper flew and spiked into a wall and exploded leaving a black mark on the wall. They all dropped to the floor and looked around.

 

[Brendan]

"Here, down on the ground you'll need it trust me..." Daniel gave Brendan a small pocket knife. They looked around, windows were smashed to a local general store and the isles were scattered with thier contents. Breen's head was flickering on and off a big television screen. and blood was literaly everywhere. Two combine rushed backwards out of an alleyway, firing bullets. The three jumped behind a bench and peered over. The combine were now crouched looking through thier scope firing wildly at the alley. Then they emerged it was three zombies moaning and still pushing forward, through the barage of bullets.

"Luckily the combine won, frankly i would rather fight a person than a dead beast that hardly resembles a human anymore". Daniel looked over the bench and raised his Winchester. Ying! the sound of a richocheting bullet a miss!. The combine turned and looked they didn't spot the three. A loud screech rang out as one of the combine dropped. The other ran down the street shooting behind him.

They went into the general store. They picked out some vitamins and some drinks. They went to the counter to see if anyone was still here. Flies flew around the counter and as they peered over they saw a flesh missing corpse. "Oh my god!" Brendan turned and was forced to vomit in one of the isles. "Clean up in isle 3" Sam joked. They went back out the window and chose to go down to see if anyone had gone to Town Hall. The long stairs would have been ideal for this situation.

The marble was still shining dispite the lack of sun. A man was slouched back against a colum. The three rushed up the big stairs to him. They checked his pulse it was very low. "Zomb-" The man's voice died along with his pulse. They opened his shirt and there was a big wound on his stomach. Brendan checked his wallet and his I.D. He was a cop sent from City 14. "So even the cops are having trouble" Daniel noted. Inside his holster was a Desert Eagle. Brendan unholstered it and opened the barrel it was loaded. In his other pocket were some bullets. Brendan took them

 

[Brendan]

"A whole barrel!, it takes a whole barrel to take down one!" Brendan yelled. "Looks like we've got company" Sam whispered and a starved looking zombie, much faster bolted out from behind a building. It leaped at Daniel who held out his Windchester and tackled it to the floor. It thrashed around and Sam held his pistol to its head, or what would have been its head. And unloaded, green blood splattered,

"This just gets more confusing" Brendan muttered. They continued backwards down the street firing at oncoming zombies. They dashed into an alley, where a man lay unconcious but breathing. Brendan shook him, he woke up with a start and armed himself with a piece of wood. He swung but Brendan jumped back.

"Josh? did you say" Daniel asked. The man nodded "Josh". Sam kept watch on thier alley. Brendan was looking in a building across the street for anyone. Sam looking across saw Brendan shake his head, then something jumped out knocking Brendan to the floor. Josh with a bolt of speed ran across and smashed the thing with his piece of wood. It thrashed a little more but Brendan unloaded a bullet into its starved looking stomach and it ceased.

The four regrouped and started to make a plan. "What if we go to the baseball field, lots of open space" Sam contributed. "No, where could we possibly go after that?" Daniel asked. "What about a train to City 20?" Josh added. Brendan just nodded in agreement, so did Daniel. But Sam hesitated. "My brother is still in this city and im not leaving until we get him". They broke out of huddle. "So it's decided we go to get..." "Matthew" Sam helped. "Yes and then we go and take the train to City 20"
"Looks like a long way" Brendan added as he peered down the street

 

[MarcoPollo]

^ sounds like 28 days later :thumbs:

 

[Brendan]

They started down the street in the direction that Sam had pointed them in. "He should be..Here" Sam peered hopefully at an apartment. Daniel walked up and pressed the button to the Microcom. "Anyone there" he asked. A voice came to the microphone, "Yeah wounded pretty bad though..." "On our way" Sam interrupted. The four ran up the stairs, Josh now armed with a glock that they picked up from a dead corpse. They kicked down the door to the room. Matthew was kicking a zombie corpse on the floor and holding his arm. "Come on" Brendan yelled. Just as a fast zombie ran up the stairs. The five ran into another room just as another zombie came out of the far room down the hall. They all crammed into a room as the zombie reached in. They all slammed the door and the zombie was cut in half.

"What the hell!" Josh yelled and the torso kept moving. Matthew kicked it and it grabbed his pant leg. Brendan wipped out his gun and shot it in the stomach three times. It moaned and dropped to the floor. Outside they could hear an impatient sort of screech from the faster zombie, which could not find them. Daniel opened the latch that allows people to talk with other people outside without letting them in and aimed his Winchester out. Just as the fast zombie ran by he unloaded and it fell and slid down the hall. Banging into the wall.

They left the building. A citizen ran out of a store, followed by a zombie and stood in the middle of the road. "Dont shoot!" she yelled. Bang! Josh and Sam unloaded a bullet into the zombie it dropped and died with a moaning sound. "That was my sister!, she could have been brought back!" The woman began to run towards the five, Boom! The woman with a clear hole through here head dropped twitching on the floor. The five turned around and saw a combine on the roof with a sniper rifle, reloading.

The five broke out into a run down towards the train. Ying! a bullet inplanted itself into the road. A giant bellow came from down the street and crows took off into the air. A giant mutant zombie ran after them with huge arms and a beefy chest. "What is that!?" Brendan asked. "I don't know" Daniel replied he aimed and shot. All it managed to do was slow it. Sam unloaded some bullets into it. So did Brendan and Josh. The thing pushed on.

"Run!" Matthew shouted and they all bolted down the street, the thing still in pursuit. It was yelling constantly. The five jumped behind a car, and the thing rounded the corner. Still yelling it ran fast down the road. Daniel loaded his gun and patiently aimed. "Come on" he muttered to himself. Zing! the bullet whizzed right into the headcrab attached to the beast. It fell to its knees then to the ground with a thud. The five looked at eachother

 

[Brendan]

The five ran into an alley and layed on the floor peering out at the dead body of the mutant. A combine ran over to it poked it and rolled it over. He picked a microphone off of his suit and spoke into "Gonome, found killed near the train station" he put it back on. He pulled a bullet out of it, examined it and walked away.
"Gonome" Brendan stumbled over the unfamiliar word. They all stood up and headed to the train station.

They all ended up at the train station. Matthew hopped the fence and tried to start the train. Brendan looked around for a conductor or anyone. Josh and Sam waited lookout with thier pistols ready. Daniel sat checking his gun incase of dust that could jam it. "Found somone!" Brendan yelled. Everyone rushed over besides Matthew who was trying to start the train.

"Dead" Sam informed after checking his pulse. "Well does he have any identification" Josh asked. "Yes, his name is Scott Richards he was a train conductor, age: 31, So young to have his life ended..." They took the train keys and ran to where Matthew was trying to start the train. "Almost got it" he muttered. "No need" Josh replied and he jingled the keys. The sound of the train starting was massive and he pressed the nob forward and it started to roll

They started into a desert looking area, a creature that looked like an insect dug its way out and flew after the train. None of the five noticed it. The side of the train ripped open. "Holy!" Brendan yelled and leaped back. Claws dugs themselves in and Brendan unloaded at them. Something screeched and with a thud fell off. He slid the door open and could see a green creature with sharp claws at the front.

Brendan ran to the front where Matthew was driving. When Brendan entered the room Matt asked "What was that?" "I don't know" Brendan replied and described it. Sounds like an Antlion Daniel was telling me about. Sam and Daniel were in the back, leaning out the window unloading clips on the pursuing creatures.
Josh was in the conductor room being informed aswell about these creatures. "Well hopefully we make it to City 20, wouldnt want to be stranded here."

 

[Brendan]

Looking out on the small rocky mountain terrain beside them. Brendan saw a fast zombie leap onto the train. He could hear metallic screeching. Daniel and Sam ran into the room. "We got the last of the Antlions- What the hell?" "Fast zombie" Brendan informed them cocking his desert eagle. He unloaded 5 bullets into the top and the lifeless corpse slid down the winsheild. "I can hardly see with this blood" Matt cried.

A fast zombie ran infront of the train and exploded on inpact. "Such stupid creatures" Sam commented, "True, there only intent is the first instinct".. "Whats that?" Sam asked. "To feed" Daniel added darkly. The train sped on toward City 20. Dust flying behind it, they could hear the echoing howls of zombies.

The train sped toward City 20 and stopped with a screech everyone hopped out. "What now?"Brendan asked "I say we head to get some more combine rations, they are awful but the vitamin really fills you up" Daniel commented, "Sounds like a plan" Josh added and they headed down the dark street

 

[Brendan]

City 20 was completley abandoned, it was northern and the rumors of zombies had spread from north to south. As the five walked down the street Brendan picked up a newspaper "Giant creature spotted, Breen flees to City 17". "Coward..." Josh muttered. They continued to the center, a fountain lay the water red and overflowing. a corpse lay half in and half out of the water.

"Anyone!?" Matthew yelled. "Ssssh" Daniel said. "Im here im-", the man that just ran out of the alley flesh was melted and a skeleton dropped to the ground. A gigantic blue creature had shot two red beams out of it hands. The five ran for cover. The corpse of the man was kicked past the alley they ran into.

Behind them a fence was bent over, they all ran and easily jumped it. Into what used to be a playground. A loud screech greeted them and a fast zombie swung on monkey bars and launched towards Sam. Daniel wipped out the Winchester and killed the beast in mid-air. it dropped lifeless to the floor.

The gigantic creature busted through the alleyway into the playground. It kicked a carousel, which nearly hit Matthew. The five broke into a run. Daniel moving backwards shooting it, the bullets were futile. The beast was unstoppable. They went into an apartment building and slammed the door just as it shot the beams like before. The door set up in flames and some of the furniture inside.

The five ran up the stairs towards the roof. A citizen ran out, startled he went back inside his room. The five got onto the roof, turning night all that was seen was crows flying by the moon. A big crash of metal sounded, and peering over the edge the five saw the giant beast knock down a strider. "I've heard of this, they call it..." Daniel said. "Gargantua"

 

[Brendan]

"I've got an idea" Daniel said. "Thats crazy!" Sam exclaimed, "you'll never make it". Daniel tied a rope to himself and Brendan held the otherside. Daniel broke into a run and jumped right off the side of the building. Clunk! he landed directly ontop of the Gargantua and began firing into the blue shell with his Windchester. It moaned and thrashed, Daniel was thrown off. Brendan began to slip, but Sam grabbed him. Daniel hanging off the building on the rope fired into the Gargantua's eye. It moaned and fell, The blue shell was penetrated by the end of the strider leg it had knocked down.

Brendan and Sam pulled Daniel back up the building. They all stood in the darkness, guns ready. Earrrh! the sound of a headcrab leaping. "Aaah-" It latched onto Matthew who ran around, Brendan and Sam picked up bricks off the roof and threw them at the headcrab, it died and released its grip.

Sam ran and pulled it off Matt, who had no damage done. He was in shock but okay. "Somehow the darkness in City 20, is alot deadlier than we all thought" Daniel added. They jumped a roof and could now clearly see the road below. Abandoned cars and blood scatered the road. In one car a dead zombie sat perched in the driver seat.

A crow sat on a dead corpse and pecked him eye out and flew away, at night City 20 was like hell unleashed. The sick view made it hard for any of them to sleep. They sat staring at the sky. Woosh! suddenly a bat like creature flew overhead. Brendan and Matt unloaded on its wings, it was headcrabed. It fell and slid, it scraped at the roof and fell off it screeched as it died. They all slept uneasy that night

 

[D.L]

that was great. Any chance of a sequel?

 

[Brendan]

The sun shone brightly to their suprise, dispite the sun everyone felt cold inside and really kept to themselves. The five continued along the roofs, until they came to another alley. Eaarh! a zombie covered in headcrabs looked up and threw a headcrab, but this one was black with a red cross on its shell. Josh unloaded a few bullets into it.The headcrab fell to the street below and curled up.

Daniel, Brendan and Sam made it across fine, because of thier experience. Josh went for his jump, in mid-jump he began to plunge. "No!" Matthew cried and looked down helplessly at Josh who was plunging rapidly. Thunk! Josh landed in a dumpster full of garbage bags. The zombie covered in crabs lurched closer.

Brendan tied a rope to an air vent and the other he threw down the side of the building. He began decending with Daniel covering with fire at the zombie. Sam followed down the rope concentrating on Josh to see if he may move. Brendan dropped to the floor and unloaded fire on the zombie which fell back but regained balance.

"Wake up!" Brendan yelled and shook Josh, Sam was yelling something wildly and holding off the zombie. Daniel decended down the rope. Josh groaned and moved onto his back, then sat up. "Lets move!" Brendan signaled. They all moved into the bloody street, it was dark but they headed where the wind was, the smell in the air was awful

 

[Brendan]

All five ran far down the street, they unlatched a sewer hatch which would take them to the combine training facuilty. "Without a doubt, in the facuility there will be directions to the hidden citadel where Breen is hiding" Josh added, They all nodded. Splash! they all landed in the green tainted water. "Careful, leeches.." Brendan said as he climbed to the side.

Now on the side on dry land, the five continued along into a darker, larger room. Shadows began moving rapidly, the five formed a circle everyone facing out into the room, guns poised and ready. Bang!, Brendan let off the first shot, Gun shots filled the air. Shadows were dropping and light was returning.

"Aaah-"Somone yelled. "Whos missing!?"Daniel yelled, "Im still here"Josh yelled, "Me too" Brendan called, while unloading a few more bullets, "Me three" Matthew called. "Shit sam!" Daniel yelled and he progressed into the darkness, the rest followed. Bang! unloading bullets behind them into the darkness.

Chunk!, the air vent grate fell apart. Everyone crouched and went in, Matthew covered the grate with wood as they went. "I think its this wa-" Fwoosh, suddenly the airvent tilted downwards. Everyone began to slide down and smashed through the grate at the end. "Where are we?" they all asked.

 

[Brendan]

"Holy Fricking Sh-" Somone yelled it was unclear in the darkness. "Fire!" Brendan yelled and a barage of bullet was shot into the darkness, "Running low on ammo!" Matthew yelled. Ying! bullets ricocheted of the walls. Bang Bang!, "This way!" Daniel yelled, the three left ran to a lighter hallway, "I got a clear shot of the grate up above, it should let light into the room" Baom! The grate clattered to the floor and light flourished the room

"Oh shit!" Daniel yelled and unloaded on a gonome standing in the middle of the room, It ran half blinded by the sudden light. Moaning it ran into a wall and stumbled back. Daniel unloaded some bullets into it, Brendan shot wildly. "This way!" Daniel yelled and they all nearly dodged the gonome. The wall crumbled and buried the gonome underneath the bricks.

There across the room was, Josh moving his head and moaning. The three ran over and gave him some painkiller they had taken from the general store. The four traveled into the light hallway. A ladder leading up to the surface was broken in half and blood scattered below.

Daniel being the tallest jumped up and grabbed the ladder, he then continued and opened the latch. He threw down a rope to the other 3, who climbed up and got into the streets. There was a gonome holding Sam unconcious in his hand, blood was on the floor below.The four raised their guns

 

[Ravioli]

Wow, dont you ever stop writing?


and i think you should be thankfull and answer the others response, othervise they wont do it!

 

[Brendan]

Bang, bullets flew through the air, the giant beast roared and ran down the street. "Go!" Daniel yelled, bullets were pouring into the skys, blood was spurting out of the beast but it kept going. Suddenly the gonome turned around and charged, Daniel,Josh and Matthew all dodged, Brendan stood there shocked. Thump! the impact caught him in the chest, he went flying throught the air and hit on a light pole. Daniel uncrouched from the cement barrier he was hiding behind and fired.

The gonome roared loud, windows began to crack and birds took to the sky. The gonome began to fall, almost certain to crush Brendan. Dust flew in the air as the body hit the floor with a thud. Luckily, Brendan had rolled out of the way and just barley escaped it. The gonome released its grip on Sam, who was bleeding from the head. "Over here" said a crackling voice.

"No, you can't do this" Brendan yelled as he was grabbed by two men in white suits, looking around saw that Josh and Matthew were being grabbed as well. Daniel was being shocked with a stun gun.Then they did Matt and Josh. From Brendan's point of view everything went black.

The five woke up in a white room with a mirror at the end, suprisingly not tied up. "Aaah!" Josh yelled and hit at the window. A voice came into the room "Your probably wondering where you are, You are in no harm i can assure you". "This is a hideout made for only the top rebelion forces, you five have been chosen to join our army, Tommorow we will rush the hidden citadel". The voice crackled off

 

[Brendan]

"Loading", "Almost ready, captain", voice were chattering in a sqaure room, where rebels were loading up and checking thier gear. "Squad One, line up here" a masked man was pointing and shouting. "Squad Two" Here. "You five, we have been monitoring your skills and you will be the elite squad and will lead us into battle, find your guns and equipment"

Brendan whistled, "I like this" he picked up a large metal sword, I'll keep my Desert Eagle but i need more bullets. Daniel picked up a crossbow, made of wood, he picked up a lot of arrows and stepped aside. Josh stepped up and picked up an M4A1 and looked through the scope then stepped aside. Matthew picked up an M16 and kept his glock. Sam picked up an MP5 and cocked it.

The squads ran down the street, Elite squad first and Squad One following and so on. The combine jumped out from behind buildings and fired. Matthew fell back and picked two off, Sam began to fire. Daniel aimed with patience and shot the arrow embeded itself into the combines chest and he dropped. Brendan ran and sunk his sword into a combine while fighting off two more. Josh unloaded lots of bullets, in a giant spray. Combine began to fall

"I need help over here!" one of the field medics yelled. Brendan pushed on, he stabbed a combine in the chest, kicked him off the sword and shot him in the face. Daniel released an arrow into a mutated zombie the combine had made, It moaned and dropped. Josh took down two assasians coming at the squad. Matt sniped a few combine on the citadel roof. Sam shot down a few more. The streets filled with shadow the citadel was just ahead.

 

[Brendan]

The five moved apart as squad one came with a giant wood log and smashed the citadel door down. The squads poured in looking left and right, firing at the combine. The five rushed in, dead bodys littered the ground. A combine fired at Brendan, Sam picked the combine off quickly. Matthew took combine out coming from far down the hall. Josh got some combine looking over a railing up above.

Squad One followed as they headed for the elevator. The elevator opened and combine stood shocked by all the people. Daniel fired and the arrow stuck a combine in the wall. Brendan ran into the elevator and stabbed two combine, Sam rushed in to the elevator, Josh and Matthew followed. The five continued up the elevator nearing the top where Breen was escaping in a helicopter.

Ding! The elevator came to a stop and the door opened. About twenty combine were aiming thier guns. The five froze. Brendan ran forward and kicked a gun out of one of thier hands, Daniel shot and the arrow went through 3 combine. Josh shot and took down four more combine. Matthew fired and blew a combine into another crowd. Sam fought through and shot.

Shink, Brendan pulled his sword out of a dead corpse. The five began to walk toward the doors out to the roof. Crack! vents broke and combine lowered in on rope firing. The five took for cover, The five unloaded, the combine dropped. "Lets go, Breens waiting for us" Daniel said and grinned

 

[Brendan]

"Breen!" Daniel yelled and fired the arrow missed. Sam unloaded fire, Breen cowered behind an air vent. Josh ran up and from the other roof top and combine fired, it hit josh in the chest. Blood dripped from his mouth and he dropped. "No!" Matthew yelled and went to his side. The doors opened behind the five and combine poured onto the roof top.

Daniel fired into the crowd, Sam unloaded fire. The combine pressed on. Matthew while holding Josh with one arm, aimed and fired. The bullet pierced through a combined head and continued through a whole line, that whole line dropped. Brendan ran towards them slicing and stabbing. The helicopter came into view.

Bullets sprayed from the helicopter, littering the rooftop, Daniel fired and picked one off he fell to the streets below. "Arrgh!" Matthew fell beside Josh. Sam fired at the helicopter, it landed on the other building.Combine poured out and fired, Sam grabbed his arm and blood dripped down. He kept firing and Daniel kept unloading.

Brendan ran towards Breen, and picked him up by the collar. He brought him over near the edge of the citadel. Breen gulped and opened him mouth. "To kill me is to-" Blood poured out of his mouth as he was impaled by the sword. "From Citizen, to hero" Brendan said to him and kicked his lifeless body off the Citadel. The other two came to join him, They both picked up thier injured companions.

They stood in the sun, as the clouds parted. The world was free of Breen's constant command, and everyone could go back to there normal lives. Brendan held up a bloody sword into the air. The rebels on the ground cheered, all five of them began to grin.

 

[Gordon's Brother]

man thats good but thank people for their comments dont just ignore them

 

[MarcoPollo]

^^ Why? Do you have to BUY compliments now? I think it is just because you are an attention whore. Btw Your sig is annoying and $ does not go after the number...if your going to fake a quote at least fake it right.

 

[Brendan]

Thanks for everyone's compliments (Please don't bug me to do this again), I will be doing a sequel, in a bit. My fingers have a mind of thier own so when they want to write, they will write. Thanks :thumbs:

 

[zombiehead]

wow cool story cant wait for the other one keep up the good work :smoking: :smoking: i liked it becase it was about the half life zombies it was very cool :smoking: :smoking: :thumbs:

 

[MarcoPollo]

thats going in my sig^^