Dark Passage

anyone...please? i have some more wrote if any ones interested
 
Hmmm, not too bad IMHO.

Sort of is too close to what the vids show. ;)
 
you've got to develop it into something unique.
 
yeah its only beginning, if you want to see the next few parts?
 
thanks, but i am gonna take Sparfa's advice, its parrots the vids to much. Hell i have started again, all post it later
 
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