Fan Fiction - a cry for attention

[Sulkdodds]

I have written some stories, which I would very much like you to read - and review. See, it boosts my confidence immensly to hear people's comments. Discuss it all you like here, but I would be very happy if you could submit a review.

http://www.fanfiction.net/~sulkdodds - My profile, with links to both stories and stuff about me.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1632857 - Paradise Lost, a Matrix fanfiction.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1634106 - This is just teh cs fanfiction I posted a while ago. There will be more of it soon.

Oh yes, and I'd like your honest opinion. As long as it's constructive critisism...

 

[Dedalus]

only read the first page of the matrix one, so far so good.

you wanted an honest opinion so i'll give you one: be succinct. there is a lot of excess you could cut down on. make your point, smack the reader in the face with it, then throw them into the next arena with your new points, and then smack them with those, then repeat.

 

[Sulkdodds]

Okay then. Only if you would be so kind, I would like you to express that opinion by scrolling to the bottom of the page and clicking the 'submit review' button . Personally I think God is in the details, but oh well.

 

[Dedalus]

ah i'm only saying that cos i'm in a rush here, got a million and one things to do. i'll give it a proper read later on *bookmarked*

i'm a writer too so i understand the need for feedback. all i can say is i hope the other episodes are set out the same as the first.

 

[Sulkdodds]

Oh, come on everybody else. Read my stories!

 

[BabyHeadCrab]

I know some kids who write fan-fiction

oh and im to lazy to read this now maybe later