Half-Life: Soul Fly

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Here's an old fanfic of mine that I found, I may actually write more, depending on how everyone reacts to this one.

Chapter 1: Awakening

Gordon Freeman awoke to the sound of a whispering voice, a seemingly lulling comfort to his nocturnal dreams. For once he felt calm, alert, and...rational. He looked over to see a man who appeared to be roughly in his mid-fourties, with long, black, untamed hair that lay on his sunken chest, and beady brown eyes that seemed to study his own with intelligence. "It appears who have come to yourself, Mr. Freeman", said the man, his tone slightly mocking. He took a now empty syringe from his gloved hands and waved it in front of Freeman's eyes saying "Salvation never looked so simple, wouldn't you agree?". Gordon couldn't do anything but nod. He sat up slowly, taking in his surroundings. The room he was in was covered in a Buddhist mural design, although the bright colors were slightly faded by the dull candlelight.

Several mountings on the walls glared back at him almost angrily, representing figures from oriental mythology. "An odd passtime for someone a leading a revolution among men, I'm sure you woud agree with that also", the man observed absently while dispatching the latex gloves he wore into a grungy wastebasket.

"Allow me to introduce myself, in case your mental state has rendered you forgetful. I am Dr. Greg Filter, pioneer researcher and lead scientist in your organization, which you have deemed 'Soul Fly'. And you", here he waved a finger mockingly "are a very, very powerful man who leads thousands of people across the world. You were also mentally insane until just now, and if it weren't for that serum I just injected into you, we would all be in very serious trouble".

The doctor was interrupted in his speech when a tall, muscular man walked into the room. His attractive features were dimmed by the thick, dark circles under his eyes and his sullen, absentminded expression. "How's the big man doin'?", the tall man asked irritatedly.

Dr. Filter gave an audible sigh, but turing to Gordon with an affable, almost humourous expression. "And this would be your caretaker William Becker, he has done his job very well, but his services will no longer be required", Dr.Filter's tone returned to its mocking nature. Becker's eyes flitted from Dr. Filter to Gordon. "Whatever, I was just checking up on him like you asked", Becker seemed to get irritated again, but he turned and left without so much as another word. "You'll have to forgive Mr. Becker, he's a bit under the weather at the moment", Dr. Filter grinned. "Come, we have much to cover in such a short time, the hour of your reckoning approaches". Gordon stood unsteadily for a moment, then regained his balance before catching up with the rather odd man who had awakened him, not from his sleep he realized, but from a now dormant insanity.
 
Any comments?, if its uninteresting or anyone has suggestions feel free to post 'em.
 
Liked it, write more. So far you havent given me much to work off of, so make some more.
 
Hmmm...does anyone find the insanity bit from Gordon's perspective too unbelievable and out of character?. This was just an experimental story/plotline so feel free to bash it (but constructively!).
 
Max35 said:
Hmmm...does anyone find the insanity bit from Gordon's perspective too unbelievable and out of character?. This was just an experimental story/plotline so feel free to bash it (but constructively!).
Actually I have always thought he was nutso from the get go. :laugh: I mean… A guy who doesn’t talk, with no training (hazard course is O.S.H.A. bs and we all know it), goes through a very traumatic experience and all of a sudden is a killing machine… He snapped. He is on the right side, but nuts. Kind of like Father Gregory….

Keep up the writing!
 
K, here's the second chapter, again comments are welcome!.

Chapter 2: "We've Got the Black Mesa Jesus"

Gordon continued to follow Dr. Filter through what appeared to be a re-commissoned airline hangar, his suspension of disbelief finally collapsing. They both emerged from the darkness into what appeared to be a large mess hall, while the windows were mostly covered with thick persian rugs, dozens of candles spread out across the multitude of tables set off a soft, yet slightly over-whelming glow. Several of the tables were occupied by men and women whose eyes purposely strayed from Gordon. "Don't worry, it is nothing unflattering towards you, they are trained to look away", Dr. Filter explained. Gordon continued to study them, however. Many of them wore sleek black uniforms, and on the backsides of the uniforms, was imprinted a skeleton of a large dragon, Gordon refused to see its signifance.

They had come to an open courtyard, with nothing but a few leafless trees dotting the landscape, and there was of course a large statue made of some mysterious black, crumbling stone that rose menacingly towards the sky. Its face was gourged out, leaving its identity to the observer up to the imagination. Dr. Filter caught Gordon's amazed glance, then he commented "I still don't know what spurred you to such aloofness and self-obsession, but it is hard to decipher this personal logic of yours behind that mask of irrationality", they continued in silence.

Gordon and Dr. Filter finally came to a large, cluttered room. The crumbling brick walls and flaking white paint that continually seemed to fall from them, eluded to its age. A few massive columns supported the dilapidated chamber, while a small number of masked guards rested underneath them, but upon his approach they straightened and saluted him. "Follow me, there is someone I think you should meet", Dr. Filter said, ignoring the guards completely. Gordon followed him to an airy antechamber with nothing but a large podium set high above the floor. Standing behind it was a bald-headed man with a tattoo of some unknown symbol on his right cheek. He was speaking to a small audience, his voice high and his words manipulative. "We are the true society, the shambles of humanity above, they are the rebels. They will not cease to fight, and neither will we. But there is one small difference between us and them, we have the knowledge of entire worlds in our grasp, and--", the man's voice cut off. "Well, it looks like we have the Black Mesa Jesus is our midst", even though the entire audience of armed men bowed to him respectfully, the man's tone remained humourous.

"What happened, Doctor, why isn't our vaunted leader resting?", the man asked, his voice almost sarcastic. "Gordon, this is Morgan Rave, your second in command. He has been commanding your soldiers during your stupor", Dr. Filter declared, then he returned his regard to Morgan. "It is come to my attention that our leader is now fit to take up the helm of authority once more", Dr. Filter's tone became cold and abrasive. Morgan laughed "I'm sure he is, but before our leader makes any rash decisions, wouldn't it be wise to re-acquinte him with the state of things around him. Many things have changed in his...absence, and perhaps his memory needs a little...refreshing".

"Very well, I have my work to attend to, Gordon I will see you upon your return, whenever that may be", Dr. Filter said and walked away. Before Gordon could move, a slimy grip entangled his right arm. He whirled around to see a Vortigaut, the alien creatures with their hunched appearances and their many glowing, red iries. But this creature was somewhat different than what he had remembered. It was slightly larger and its skin had taken on a black, shining texture. "We attempted to pass along the knowledge of our forebears to you, but instead you acquired the pestilence of ages, see that is does not consume your sense of self...again", it gurgled menacingly. It then released Gordon from its grip. "Come Gordon, let me show you what the world has become, and what we are fighting against", Morgan declared, Gordon followed him anxiously.
 
Why isn't this getting any replies?. If it is poor writing, bad plot, too short, or uninteresting say so.
 
lol!, this is probably too weird a fanfic for anyone to comment on, that's what I get for thinking outside the box ;(
 
no way man. It's these people I tried something different but i wasn't cherished. just remember......
 
well, originality is of course a good thing, but one should stay in the HL universe, which is what I failed to do, sort of. Oh well, this gives me time to work on my Bshift 2 fanfic. This was just an experimental piece of writing as I said, a failed experiment nonetheless.
 
There is no failed experiment. :D I like your style! Are there anymore chapters you got hiding there?
 
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