I think u guyz will like this one

What do u think of it

  • GOOD

    Votes: 2 18.2%
  • ok

    Votes: 3 27.3%
  • BAD

    Votes: 6 54.5%

  • Total voters
    11
This one is alot better!

However, I think you should make the color of the thing more orange-ish and less poopbrown. :)
 
it's still horrible...

the text colides with the logo

the ripple effect is horrible

colours are awful

the two extra characters didn't make it any better just worse

and you get a 0 rating on the creativity.

but keep on trying...eventually you'll probably get it right.
 
I see text in the back... dont know what it says. dont know what its there.
 
I dont find it enough to make me puke but it is 'garrish'.
Some things you might want to think about...
1. The faces have very tiny pieces showing. Have them at least partially visible out side the 'ring' (50% opacity or something...)
2. The ripple effect is a bit too severe. Try something a little less vigourous.
3. The text i presume reads "coming summer 2004"...put it in front of everything else. It seems to be kinda inivsible to some people...strange i can figure it out....

EDIT: what is that that you are rippling? Looks like it may have been a turd photo...How about a gritty rusty metal or something....
 
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