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(basic background info)
Its about a man named Alfred Murdock. He is a homicide detective and is about 23-25 years old. His dad lives with him and he spends allot of time taking care of his insane dad because he doesn’t trust an insane asylum. His dad has allot of panic attacks and he hears his dad beg for his life to some being he claims to see. But when Alfred tries to talk to him he just denies it.
(The Story)
One night he hears his dad screaming in his room "Noo!...Nooo! I didn’t tell anyone!" Alfred runs to the room and opens the door. He sees nothing but pitch black and can barely see an outline of his father on the bed. He hears something so he pauses and listens in, he hears deep breathing and groans from the opposite side of the bed. He then hears footsteps getting closer to him, he still pauses then sees a tall dark figure walking towards him and the creature lefts his arm. Alfred stands their in disbelief. The figure then jabs his fingers in Alfred’s eyes and rips them both out. Alfred immediately drops and blacks out.
He then finds himself in a hospital with a doctor above him. The doctor begins to say "Hello, Alfred do you now were you are? Alfred says "No.. were am I..what happened?" Then the doctor says " Well, apparently you and your dad were attacked by a wild animal... the police aren’t really sure how...Alfred... let me be brief" he than sat down next to Alfred and said "The animal ripped out your eyes...your neighbor heard a loud noise and called the cops and the cops called me and my emergency team"
"We than put you on a donors list for new eyes but then we realize we had some under our noses... we used your fathers eyes"
most of the story will be displayed like a comic book style like thief, max payne.
Then after that he starts to see weird things like creatures and demons all around him but nobody knows they were there.
If interesting in joining please contact my by:
AIM= xxoperativexx
msn messanger/ email= **********@msn.com
members so far:
me= story writer/modeler/ maper (soon to be when sdk released)/sound fx editor
sage=story writer/ sound editor/ video editor
deathmaster=coder
???(forgot name lol)=comic artis
[Edited by Dawdler: mail blanked out, PM instead, posting a mail adress on a public forum isnt a very good idea most of the time]
(basic background info)
Its about a man named Alfred Murdock. He is a homicide detective and is about 23-25 years old. His dad lives with him and he spends allot of time taking care of his insane dad because he doesn’t trust an insane asylum. His dad has allot of panic attacks and he hears his dad beg for his life to some being he claims to see. But when Alfred tries to talk to him he just denies it.
(The Story)
One night he hears his dad screaming in his room "Noo!...Nooo! I didn’t tell anyone!" Alfred runs to the room and opens the door. He sees nothing but pitch black and can barely see an outline of his father on the bed. He hears something so he pauses and listens in, he hears deep breathing and groans from the opposite side of the bed. He then hears footsteps getting closer to him, he still pauses then sees a tall dark figure walking towards him and the creature lefts his arm. Alfred stands their in disbelief. The figure then jabs his fingers in Alfred’s eyes and rips them both out. Alfred immediately drops and blacks out.
He then finds himself in a hospital with a doctor above him. The doctor begins to say "Hello, Alfred do you now were you are? Alfred says "No.. were am I..what happened?" Then the doctor says " Well, apparently you and your dad were attacked by a wild animal... the police aren’t really sure how...Alfred... let me be brief" he than sat down next to Alfred and said "The animal ripped out your eyes...your neighbor heard a loud noise and called the cops and the cops called me and my emergency team"
"We than put you on a donors list for new eyes but then we realize we had some under our noses... we used your fathers eyes"
most of the story will be displayed like a comic book style like thief, max payne.
Then after that he starts to see weird things like creatures and demons all around him but nobody knows they were there.
If interesting in joining please contact my by:
AIM= xxoperativexx
msn messanger/ email= **********@msn.com
members so far:
me= story writer/modeler/ maper (soon to be when sdk released)/sound fx editor
sage=story writer/ sound editor/ video editor
deathmaster=coder
???(forgot name lol)=comic artis
[Edited by Dawdler: mail blanked out, PM instead, posting a mail adress on a public forum isnt a very good idea most of the time]
