Mp5 Navy

[BaNDiT]

This is my second model ever and my first gun model, tell me what u think. its not done yet

 

[dawdler]

It looks quite blocky... And its way unnecesary detail up front, the barrel bends in (or whatever the technical term is), with poly you NEVER can see.

 

[ShinRa]

Hand grip a tad too long, clip should be thinner and bit shorter, and since your not finished as you said, add some detail to the sides and a trigger would really help.

Great model and great work keep it up!

 

[BaNDiT]

thx for the comments, btw, this is not even close to finished. i just wanted to make the basic model for now. this only took like an hour and 15 min.

 

[BreakPoint]

Nice, i hope to be modeling guns soon. Good Job. You use any tuts to learn?

 

[Login_Here]

Originally posted by guinny
clip should be thinner and bit shorter

Yeah, and the hand grip should be a little bit more rounded, it looks a bit to blocky, but otherwise great work (just wish i had 3Ds MAX and the skills).

 

[Login_Here]

Check the butt, it should also be a little bit rounder and the hand grip also a little bit rounder, but as you said you have just started.

Heres another pic if you need.

The first pic should be the model you are working on.

 

[mindless_moder]

doesnt look like max looks like milk shape?
nice work so far put in a trigger

 

[Login_Here]

I want to learn how to make models ;(;( right now i can only provide pictures ;( and mostly on the MP5 (Yes, i am a MP5 fanboy...)

 

[BaNDiT]

thanks a lot for the coments guys. lol, i forgot the trigger as mindless pointed out.

 

[random.hero]

login, y dont u learn ??

 

[BaNDiT]

a new pic, i added some details and fixed some things.

 

[Login_Here]

Originally posted by random.hero
login, y dont u learn ??

Cant afford 3Ds MAX ;(;(


That looks much better BaNDiT, but could you make the handle a little bit wider, otherwise really good :thumbs::thumbs:

 

[Grey]

Login_Here - Try Wings3D then. It's a free standalone modeling app. http://www.wings3d.com ... Or you could get the demo version of Softimage XSI and learn that.

Looking good Bandit.

 

[Login_Here]

Thanks Grey, i really appreciate that

 

[random.hero]

or use GMax !! i use that !! and i make great models, not. its a free naked version of Max.

btw, does the XSi cheap version hav a renderer ??

 

[random.hero]

aniway, about the model. the barrel in the middle, above the reiever, looks like its been made thin, to fit the front grip, i think its supposed to b a circle, symmetrical on both sides. the stock needs more doing to it. and the rear sights need help. also, i dont really want to mention it, but the barrel along the top, seems to fat. that wud mean remodeling the whole top bit, which is a lot of work.

 

[IchI]

hmmm looks alright. Don't look very well modelled though. But its prity good for your 2nd model. This wasd my second model I ever made:

its prity crap but still

 

[EVIL]

its not crap.. its just.. stily

 

[Guest]

are you learning to model ur own porn, ICHI ?

 

[SidewinderX]

Bad boy