My attempt at music composition

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ive been fooling around with Fruity Loops and made a couple songs from scratch. Heres what i made:
Tundra- 2:00.1
Genre: Electronic somthin or other
You are walking through an icy, artic land. The wind swirls the snow which rises in thin white wisps contrasting the dark, cold night. After several hours the sky begins to lighten and you crest a hill to see a beautiful sunrise. The sun warms your face and chilled bones as it spreads its glorious rays.
heh, yah theres the story. now give it a listen.
feedback is appreciated.

i composed this a few days ago, and i m getting better at composing.

Edit: are the attatchments working?
 
Ya I guess the attachments aren't working right now. Which sucks because I want to hear this. ;(
 
Seems interesting, can't wait to hear it.
Maybe you could host the music on your webspace and then just give us a link?
 
Well it says attachments are working, so they should be working in here. Try again?


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it's quite good. i would've liked to hear some more background sounds and lower frequency sounds. right now everything seems to be on the same plane and it gets mixed up. apart from that good start.
 
Pretty good! :)

Two things:

1. Normalize the volume. It started off really quietly so I turned up my volume .. then towards the end it got really loud and I hard to turn it down.

2. I feels like the "intro" is too long. The whole thing is 2:00 and it feels like it keeps building up until 1:10. You could either make the intro shorter or the song longer.


Incidently there is a great song by Y.A.P. called Sunrise based on the same idea. :)
 
Not bad. There's some parts that stick out like a sore thumb, and other parts that can use support with different instrumentation (too low). But I think you got the right idea.
Good Luck.

Composers unite!
 
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