New sketch

[eatbugs]

Hey guys, I know I haven't posted foor quite a while so I'll post my sketch of a half finished woman, don't worry I'll finish it off later but I thought Id show some of my drawings half done. Enjoy!

 

[JellyWorld]

Hey guys, I know I haven't posted foor quite a while so I'll post my sketch of a half finished woman, don't worry I'll finish it off later but I thought Id show some of my drawings half done. Enjoy!

that's a woman?

 

[SupremePain]

that's a woman?

I also seek the awnser to that question. Everything about the face screams that it's a man.

 

[Shippi]

It's not bad... but what's happening with the nose?

 

[Danimal]

It looks like a World of Warcraft style dwarf.

You were making a World of Warcraft style dwarf, right?

 

[G-Dub]

It's a guy... right?

 

[Sulkdodds]

It's actually a pretty good sketch . But it still looks like a man.

 

[Farrowlesparrow]

It's actually a pretty good sketch . But it still looks like a man.

The second sentence there...negates the first

 

[Sulkdodds]

It's a good sketch of a man!

 

[Mechagodzilla]

I think any manishness is a result of it being a bit messy.

For one thing, the bottom of her nose doesn't line up with the top bridge part. In fact, the whole nostril area is drawn as though it were being seen straight-on, while the rest of her head is turned to the left.

The jawline and ear also look lumpy and thick, I think due to odd proportions. And with the sketchy eyebrows, the combined effect is masculine.

Did you use photo ref? If not, I'd recommend it. You've got the basics down, as some have said. It just needs some refinement on the anatomy to get the right look.

 

[Asuka]

I dont like that style. Seems to simple and out of place.