New storyline Update for ponr

[mikeandike22]

I just released parts of the new storyline for hl2: Point of No return, this is mainly the script for wat the opening movie will be. goto http://hl2ponr.blogspot.com to check it out.

 

[mikeandike22]

Since i would really like your feedback, i will post the storyline for the intro movie here.

Alright i have been coming up with some story and stuff.
The game will open up goto, the main menu, and then when u hit new game it will start a movie that will explain to you the character's situation, this way the plot will mainly be out of the way in the game so u can just focus on killing ppl (of course their will be plot changes, cause the game would just be as boring as doom3). So after you hit new game, the movie will start and it will say,
"Opening Archive 1345: Graham Thompson (it types this out like a type writer), Playing Archive. My name is Graham Thompson I fought the xen aliens at Black Mesa (flash back), i saw some of the deadliest creatures walk out of that facility (shows Garg killing people, you are watching in first person, and after 2 of your men get crushed you are left alone, and you fire a grenade at it and hit it in its face), I was one of the few who fought against the combine invasion force(flash back, on a beach front in a trench, then a combine drop ship lands, combine soldiers come out and start shooting, people all around you are getting shot blood splatters on your face, then you call a retreat and run away shooting combine soldiers down), I was aproached by the combine and Dr. breene to train new combine forces, when i declined they shipped me here to the main center of city 17, to be terminated i presume. There i joined forces with Eli Vance and his followers and trained and recruited more people to fight the resistance, but i was betrayed. We were given orders to raid a combine compound north of the river, when we got there there was a small force keeping guard, we killed them all, but once inside we heard a drop ship land, and more than a hundred combine super-soldiers march in. They had us kneel on the ground with our hands behind our head, then through the door came Dr. Mossman a person i had seen many times at black mesa east, behind her was Dr. Brene. They went through the line and picked who was going to be laborers or cops while this was hapening i looked over to the guy next to me and he was shaking and had wet himself, and i said to him 'keep your decency you ****ing pussy'. Once all the people who were chosen to work or become cops, they loaded us up on trains, as the trains pulled away, i heard gun shots and ppl screaming, then saw the bodies hit the floor and thrown into the river." The closing movie after you beat the game will say "Archive closed", we will try and leave the story open for a sequel as much as possible.

 

[hellyeah]

sounds ****ing sick. Can't wait to play that game

 

[mikeandike22]

thanks, right now we are focusing on getting a good storyline and game layout(maps, extra physics, etc). We are making the graphics as well, but we thought that having a good story would be way more important than having graphics, just look at doom3.