portfolio site launched

[Garfield_]

Just launched my portfolio, still work in progress but i thought id show it
www.impatrik.com

Note: there might be some language errors ;D

all crits and stuff are welcome

 

[nick_t]

Very nice site! A little red but the overall feel is very professional. Most of the site works flawlessly and it's really smooth and functional. However, you don't capitalize your "I's" in sentences so it looks bad (not sure if you do on purpose since you capitalize I in the beginning of sentences). Oh, and you used the word "stuff" in your Services section... not good imo. Anyway, I like your work and I hope to see more from you in the future!

 

[NonStopableForce]

404
www.dilorenzodesign.com

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-NSF

 

[Garfield_]

Very nice site! A little red but the overall feel is very professional. Most of the site works flawlessly and it's really smooth and functional. However, you don't capitalize your "I's" in sentences so it looks bad (not sure if you do on purpose since you capitalize I in the beginning of sentences). Oh, and you used the word "stuff" in your Services section... not good imo. Anyway, I like your work and I hope to see more from you in the future!

Yeah, im not really good at english, my mate will help me rewrite my content :stare:
and thanks for the comments ;D

 

[Garfield_]

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-NSF

I dont know what the issue about this is, several people had the same as you ;(

For those with this error, go directly to

http://www.dilorenzodesign.com/Patrik/1044336770/001_impatrik.html

 

[Pesmerga]

Yeah, im not really good at english, my mate will help me rewrite my content :stare:
and thanks for the comments ;D

I thought people in Coruscant had a FAIR UNDERSTANDING OF THE LANGUAGE?!

Good site, too. Nice and flashy. Needs more women on it tho. Particularly hot ones.

 

[Garfield_]

Haha no im one of those padawans in Coruscant, not learned too much english yet.
Im not human, alien guy

 

[Garfield_]

The site is now complete.

Tell me what you think about the music etc

 

[Shodan]

I don't really like the music, there is one thing, its a bit heavy for dial up users, there is a lot of flash going on.

 

[Garfield_]

Yeah its a flash site remember, its not heavy

 

[FictiousWill]

I get a red screen. Latest Firefox. It's probably me though.