Ravenholm

[Jangle]

First page of a new comic I am making. It tells the story of how Ravenholm became how it is in HL2. Tell me what you think.
edit: I notice that the GIF compression has messed up the last image a bit, but I can sort that out later.

 

[$kelet0r]

freakin' awesome!!!
i love the styling

 

[Useful Dave]

Please use something other than GM Construct but otherwise good layout but too much white space

 

[Chrysalid]

Please include the line "I am Father Gregory; and you have already met my... congregation! ... mwahahahaha!" somehow

Nice start, btw.

 

[Jangle]

Please include the line "I am Father Gregory; and you have already met my... congregation! ... mwahahahaha!"

hehe he's not crazy yet

 

[AJ Rimmer]

Nice! Very nice! When Lost coast comes out, maybe you can use the church from that level cause, gm_construct is, well...

 

[Jangle]

Nice! Very nice! When Lost coast comes out, maybe you can use the church from that level cause, gm_construct is, well...

yeah, i know. i have another map which i'm going to use.

 

[zRuz]

Very nice man, keep it up

 

[Tollbooth Willie]

Great job! I am hoping to see more of this. You get: a robot servant.... And best of all...... A MONKEY!!!!! :monkee:

 

[Asuka]

I like the style but i dont like the lines.

 

[Sloth]

Good good
But i agree with the rest, use more than just GM construct.

 

[Jintor]

Not bad, not bad.

 

[Darkwolf]

weeeeeeeeheeheeeheeeee... yeah, like they said, GM construct wasnt such a good idea to use but its pretty well done

 

[Jangle]

weeeeeeeeheeheeeheeeee... yeah, like they said, GM construct wasnt such a good idea to use but its pretty well done

now lost coast's out im gonna use a proper church, and re-do the front page as well.