The Gate to Nothing

[S.L.]

I made this a week ago, while I was walking home from school, and looked at my front gate and thought it'd be nice for a design. I already had the ideas in my mind so it didn't really take that long. Feedback is appreciated.

 

[Vegeta897]

Hmmm... That's pretty neat. Could use.. more though.

 

[S.L.]

Thanks for the feedback. And what more can I do to it?

 

[Ennui]

i like it, but it feels sloppy. like you went for a minimalist grunge look but messed up somewhere. centralize the white space somehow.

 

[Vegeta897]

Yes, you should have more outside of the gate. Draw the ground and maybe think of some creative things to put there. This will accentuate the "nothing". Right now it looks like there is nothing on both sides :|

 

[Que-Ever]

I like it, but I suggest you A: fix up the blurriness a bit, such as on the far right on the gate, so it's all a bit more consistent, and B: remove the title at the top.

 

[JNightshade]

I actually like the blurriness, but you definitely do need to get rid of the title.