The Hunt

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Hi there, this is my first fan fiction so i hope its good, i have chosen to tell the story from a combine soldiers view, cause everyone has taken a rebels so enjoy! :cheers:
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Chapter 1: The hunt

I am Combine Elite Soldier 4864 aka. Mark Gross, from sector 23 inside the zone,
my job is to keep "law" and "order" in the streets of City-17, or at least it was....

It was getting dark, the rain was falling and the others were getting ready. We was ordered to look for Xen in sector 46.... I dint know what it was i just felt like something was wrong with this mission, something i couldnt explain, just something.... But i took my armor on and grabbed my spaz, and then whe left for the sector. A strider was our only backup, but these machines can inflict a lot of pain so i was fine about it. We walked for about and hour when we meet some ressistance, if you could say that, we engaged 3 zombies, which really wasent a big deal for 5 Combine Elites and a strider, so we just knocked em' down. But then Evan yelled "Antlions coming in fast!" in the radio, and then we took cover, cause we knew what they could do. I took a aim at the first, waiting for it to come closer so i could pull the trigger, BAM! its body flew 5 yards back, and then hell broke lose and bullets where flying thru the air killing 3 antlions. But then suddenly our strider got hit by a RPG, Rebels... The only throught running in my head at that time was those bastards! They took our strider down and attacked from the side, killing Troy. I then turned back and found out that i was facing a antlion! I then pulled the trigger, i could hear the scream, and then, i blacked out.... When i woke up i was feling wet ground and i couldnt hear the rain or bullets anymore, so i opened my eyes and saw Evan and "Tower". They told me that all the others were dead and the radios was destroyed, and it was first then i saw we were in the sewers, where they had pulled me down. They told me that a grenade had eksploded near me, knocking me out, luckely for me my armor absorbed most of the damage. I got up and we started walking into "its" claws, unaware what was waiting us.....

to be concluded..... :rolling:
 
You really need to write it into a word proccessor of some type before writing it, not just into the forum message box, as there is no spell check or grammer check. Has the potential for a good story, from the combines P.o.V. Just needs editing.

Cheers,
DeacoN.
 
Thanks but i only got wordpad not word :P
I think the hole thing goes to fast even with all the , and .
 
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