Unfriendly Circumstances

[G Man]

Hey All, This Is My New FanFic, If You Wan't To Comment, Just Post!
It wasn't over, not yet.... He could still see three combine soldiers by the car. Earlier the car had been filled with resistance fighters heading for a mission to a combine bockade. Henry had been providing cover for the car as it travelled down the road a mile or so from the blockade. It had all happened so fast, first there was no one on the street apart from the car,then a combine patrol suddenly appeared and opened fire. The car swerved as the driver was hit, and it smashed into a wall exploding on impact sending bodies flying. Thats where Henry comes in. He had his sniper rifle since he was 12. He was a member of the rifle club in his city. When the combine invaded he immediately joined the resistance wanting to take back his city....

 

[AJ Rimmer]

A little short beginning...?
Otherwise it's fine.

 

[G Man]

I'm Going To Make The Chapters Longer, First One Is A Test Lol

 

[G Man]

Chapter 2 - Distant Sounds...​

The soldiers were searching the car for any weapons, anything that could be used by them.... They couldn't see Henry, he was in an alcove between the roof of an apartment and a door to an attic in a shop. He was also hidden by the shadow the roof was creating. He could smell the musty smell of people that used to live here, now long since moved and taken into slavery by the combine. He didn't know what was in the house now, and he didn't wan't to find out. He had heard the gruesome tales of the things that lurk in the darkness of city 17....... The Combine soldiers were moving, what was going on? They were looking around cautiously... He Could Hear distant sounds.... Suddenly He Heard An Ear Piercing Howl. The Soldiers Looked up in surprise as a gruesome hunched human-like figure leapt at one of the soldiers. The thing crossed the street in one second and jumped at a soldier. Henry could see it all how the creature started riping at the soldiers flesh and as the soldiers comrades shot at it... This sight would stay with henry for ever.....

 

[Fuse Kazuki]

Awesome, keep it up

 

[G Man]

Chapter 3 - Cruel Fortune​

When the small battle was over the only thing left standing was a combine soldier. On the ground dead were two combine corpses and what Henry would now call a Howler. Henry took the easy shot and sent a spurt of blood issuing from the side of the soldiers gasmask sending him to the ground. He jumped down from the alcove onto the street and walked cautiously over to the the car and corpses.... He inspected the corpses and took a hand grenade from the pouch of one soldier. He also dropped his rifle and picked up the HK7 the soldiers were carrying. He wiped some blood off the gun and glanced at the Howlers corpse.... The sight and smell of this thing made him gag. He also noticed something on its head.... He had seen pictures of this thing... It was a headcrab. But it didn't look normal, its legs were longer and it had a purple syrup like substance dripping from a bullet hole in it. As the purple syrup touched the dead combine's jacket it started fizzing and burnt a hole right through it.... It had poison! He had to watch out for these.....

 

[ne0_shiny]

nice story :thumbs:
i like the length of the paragraphs because they stop at just the right time :bounce:

 

[G Man]

Lol Thanks
Tell Me If You Wan't More Chapters

 

[G Man]

Chapter 4 - The Overseers​

Henry also found a pocket radio in one of the soldiers pockets, they used these for quick transmissions. If he could tune it to the resistance frequency... He heard voices from the radio... "Any resistance soldiers.... we need immediate reinforcements... pinned down on way to....... Combine blockade... repeat..... we need urgent reinforcements... we are pinned down on Harley street..." The radio then cut out and static filled the air. Harley street was a few streets down! I could get to the fighters thought Henry. So henry started walking towards the general direction of Harley street.... His memory strained. Where was it? Was it first or second left then right at the crossroads? Damn.... He wasn't thinking straight. He still had the gruesome image of the Howler in his mind... Yuck, but I need to concentrate... Ok right, first left then right at crossroads. He could hear distant gunfire echoing around the streets when suddenly he heard an almighty explosion as a 50 foot strider fell on top of the building around the corner. The debris was ferocious, everything flew at him, bottles,shards of metal even a pair of shoes came hurtling towards him... How the hell did those guys take down that strider? They must have rockets Henry thought to himself... Great some more weaponry! He could use some rockets....

 

[BetaMaster]

My only complaint is that each chapter is far, far, far too short. You could probably combine each chapter into one chapter, and still have room for more. But that's just my style. Otherwise, it's good.