WIP: gm_smiverex_facility

[polly-pocket]

This is my first construct map, please DO be harsh seeing as I want to get good at these it is still at early stages. Constructive critism and compliments are welcome!

Screenshots (movie coming soon):





















Please tell me what to add/take away from it and how I could improve it and any noob mistakes. Its still a WIP, so don't think this is the final thing!

C&C?

 

[Unarmed]

the brush-based text shoulld go.

And then work on texture applicationa and more detail in general.