WIP: Shotgun

[-Psy-]

Shotgun rifle kinda thing. 2nd weapon I've made so far. 1723 polygons. I think it needs something to it. Not quite sure what though. Any suggestions?

 

[noldevin]

the handgrip, stock, and reciever (area above handgrip, between barrel and stock) could be a little thinner, i wouldnt want to have to get my fingers around that thing.
otherwise its good, ill give you an A for creativity. Nice for a 2nd model

 

[random.hero]

ergonomics
'The applied science of equipment design, as for the workplace, intended to maximize productivity by reducing operator fatigue and discomfort.'

now look at your design and apply that kind of thinking to it... starting with the grip. keep going

 

[mindless_moder]

random.hero u pretty much summed up exactly what i was going to say. ur handle is extremely rigid and ur gun in general doesnt have any consistency as far as the design and curves are concerned . the front just cuts off and ends in barrels that are all smoothed out and designed differently . itl ooks like u detached a bunch of things from a bunch of models.

 

[-Psy-]

heh I see what you mean. I find it difficult to model weapons as references aren't exactly high. I'll thin the handle, remove that crappy rear part, and curve the back a bit.