Would anyone look at my map and fix things and such

[D€vIL²]

I made a small unfinished map and theres things wrong with it that I don't understand like the settings for a dynamic light (thats stationary not moving) I just cant adjust it correctly, same with a couple other lights. so I would send the map VMF file (I think thats what its called) via e-mail and have someone take a look at it, anytakers?

im a newbie, ametuer, rookie mapper... whatever you want to call it, so this isn't like a great map, but im trying!

 

[ComradeBadger]

Read tutorials

Best way of learning :E

 

[D€vIL²]

thats how I have been learning, look at these picks, one has fullbright on and the other has it off,
this is my 3 attemt to map
"I build this map with THESE HANDS!!!!"
http://img71.exs.cx/img71/6774/practice0001.jpg
http://img71.exs.cx/img71/4971/practice0002.jpg

 

[Limpet]

I think it looks good except for the lighting being a little off.
For the street lamp try using a light_spot instead, and then maybe have a light with a low brightness set (no more than 100 I think would look nice).

 

[D€vIL²]

maybe that the problem, i was combining a light_dynamic with a light_spot