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I was bored, it's nothing great but I like it.

Today seemed to be like any other day, the normal smell of oil, and the low smog covering this small, barren city. Except, today was a bit different. I don’t remember where I am, how I got here, and what I’m doing here. There was no-one around, just a few empty beds with no covers, all the windows broken as if shot from the outside. As I move from room to room, I notice small patches of blood, spreading from the dining table to the kitchen. What happened here? I thought to myself. My head was pounding like it was hit by a truck.

There was no front door, just rusted hinges, wanting to hold something. I noticed bullet shells in the hallway, covering most of the floor. But no bodies, no blood….nothing. I looked up at a sign that pointed to the stairs, rusted, falling apart, I carefully make my way to the bottom of the building.

I finally reach the bottom, making my way through the maze of broken tables and chairs. The door of the building was broken down from the outside; it lay silently, surrounded by bullet shells. As I made my way onto the street, I noticed a few empty smoke grenade shells on the floor. Some were inside, one or two lay outside. There were two blown up vehicle wrecks, one against the wall and the other closer to the building. One was still on fire; the smell of burnt rubber filled the air, a smell that would eat at your brain after only a few minutes.

I lost my sense of direction; I have no idea where to go or who to go to. A slow wind started to pick up, leaves floating in the air like they have no care in the world. I heard a Combine helicopter in the distance; it’s definitely looking for something, it’s also coming this way. I quickly looked around me, looking for a place where I can hide. They might not be looking for me but I’m sure as hell not going to find out. I spot a dumpster about two blocks away, I decided to run. The helicopter seems to be getting closer and closer with each step I take, and with each step I take the slower I get. I kept on running, my body says no but my mind says yes. This is the part where your lungs have a small reaction with cold air and it burns, but your blood needs the oxygen so you keep breathing faster and faster. Your legs start to cramp up as they feel heavier every time your foot slams on the concrete. I wish I had proper shoes, but they are hard to find these days, so every step feels like I’m landing on the concrete from 10 feet up.

The helicopter is only a few miles away, but the sounds make it seem as if it is right behind you. I can see the dumpster’s lid is open, so all I have to do is jump and hope my aim is good. I quicken my breathing so I can somehow gather my last bit of energy to make this jump.

Only a few more feet I tell myself, I feel my legs beginning to rebel against the rest of my body. I know they don’t want to run anymore, but it’s almost over. I’m almost there. I gather my last bit of energy and take the jump, a jump that can decide my fate, whether I will either live or die. I jump, taking a small boost from a pile of bricks, not knowing that one might give away. I slip, slamming into the dumpster. It felt like I was hit by a bus, my entire right side felt numb. I lay there silently between the rubble and the dumpster. Moving only makes the pain worse. I could hear the helicopter slowly flying overhead, they obviously didn’t spot me.

I was about to try and get up when I heard the siren from one of their patrol cars. It’s the kind of sound that will give you nightmares, the kind that drives into your skull and makes you go crazy. I must be lucky today because it just drove by at about 50miles per hour. It is strange because patrols cars do exactly that, patrol the streets. There’s no way you can patrol a street at that speed, they must be looking for someone, or even some thing.

I did hear rumors that the Combine forces were experimenting with humans, trying to make them stronger, faster and better. In the end they all turn out like drones, mindlessly walking around what we call the Citadel, a tower that stretches into the heavens. No human can build such a structure, and no human did. I haven’t seen a Combine without his mask, but I know there’s nothing human under there.

The pain is rushing through my body; I start to shake, even in this hot weather. Everything seems to be blurring out, I must be going in shock, I hate darkness, it’s one of the reasons I don’t sleep. I try to stay awake, but my body won’t let me. I push myself behind the dumpster; I hold my legs in my arms. I can feel myself drifting in and out of consciousness, until finally, I pass out.

I don’t like the dark
 
That was awome, should have put it in the partly dead "Short stories" thread.
Love the narrative, easy to follow, sets a good sorroundings.
 
Not bad. I would say work on making your sentences a bit less clumsy (if you know what I mean) and keep tense consistent. Switching from past to present tense and back again can work - I'm assuming you were doing it deliberately - but to be quite honest it doesn't work here in my opinion. :)
 
Not bad. The only thing is the present tense, it doesnt 'fit' with what you've previously typed.
 
and I continue:

Chapter 2
1020h: On way to Alpha Base, roughly 18.7 Miles away.

I'm not sure what I hate most, when you wake up not remembering anything, or wake up knowing that you can die at any time. These thoughts went through my head as I tried to get my bearings. I need to get back to Alpha Base, the need to know what I saw. I can still hear the screaming, women and children being slaughtered by what could only be described as 'poisonous head-crabs'. They are definitely not the kind we first saw at Black Mesa, these are worse. Much worse.

The sun streamed through the smoke, I could feel the heat from the fires burning endlessly. I could hear sirens in the background, none are heading my way though. I wasn't sure where I was or where I was going, but I did know that I had to keep my back to the citadel, which seemed to be increasingly growing up towards the sky as if reaching further and further into space. There were a lot of activity around the huge tower; millions of scanners are being shot out from all sides. They must be looking for something, or someone. Could they be looking for Freeman? God I hope they don't find him.

I was getting thirsty, I haven't had any water for almost 3 days now and i knew I had to get something. I came across what seemed to have been an old bar, huge letters on the billboard spelled out "Old Ben". The door was lying on the floor about 6 feet from where it used to be. It was strange though that it was laying outside, it doesn't look like the combine pulled it away but rather blown out from the inside. There were no windows so it was impossible for the combine to throw in a grenade or even send in an RPG. This was of no importance; my goal was to get to Barney alive.

I walked through the bar trying to navigate through the wreckage. Bar stools and glass laid all over the place, maps together with tons of log books was all thrown in the corner. I decided to have a look, maybe this could explain what happened. I picked up a log book with the heading "Old Ben Save Us", was this bar a shelter? I started reading:

-"2349h: We started gathering all the intelligence we could. Maps, photographs and even video footage. Anything will help us against the enemy. We're blocked out all exits, doorways and windows. The soldiers are growing tired, but their efforts against the combine haven't decreased. We're trying to keep the moral of the soldiers up by passing around some drinks, not too much since we don't want them drunk."

-"0130h: The war outside has increased hasn't even paused, not for a second. Hundreds of combine soldiers with armed vehicles have passed this bar, maybe they don't even know we're here? We cannot take that chance, we need to keep up our defenses. We've setup snipers in the opposite building, they are near impossible to see with the naked eyes. They can warn us when combines are trying to enter this shelter."

-"0200h: No response from the snipers, we have marked them as MIA. They were only kids, they didn't deserve this. We've been continuously hearing strange noises coming from below us, we've tried to find out what it was but to no avail."

-"0220h: The noise from below has increased to an almost deafening sound, vibrations shocked throughout the bar, knocking down some of the drinks and bar stools. What the hell is happening?"

-"0230h: They buried from below; a smooth black figure appeared from a small tunnel. Shock-waves rippled through the bar, sending soldiers flying. Some of us escaped just in time, this is the last entry in this log book."

And what was it, what could've buried through the basement? I've never seen or even heard of some-thing remotely similar to this incident. Could this be a new species we haven?t encountered or are they using other tactics to kill us off quicker? Getting to know this new creature was the least of my worries, I needed to get to a military controlled section of the city. With my muscles aching and fighting against me, I grabbed an assault rifle, some ammo and 2 HE grenades and continued out of the bar and down the street in a direction that?s vaguely familiar.

Thunder rattled through the empty street, windows cracked and fell to pieces onto the floor. Normally I?d continue my journey, but I knew that we weren?t expecting any weather phenomena's for at least another week or two. My father used to be on the front end of our meteorologist department, so I have enough knowledge in that area.
 
Lol@late continuation.
 
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