an honest opinion

[mabymc]

hi everyone!
I'm writing this post today because I'd like to show you a music video I shot and edited for a friend of mine.
I am not a professional videomaker and this is not a job but just a passion.
I just want to ask you your opinion about the video, what I did wrong and how i could do better.
I hope you will enjoy it and also I hope not to waste your time with this post.
Here's the video:

Thank you very much!!!

 

[Vegeta897]

I'd like to see a rap video that didn't contain the rapper walking at the camera and talking to it.

Track itself isn't bad, not that you're looking for feedback on it.

 

[Krynn72]

I'd like to see an explanation as to why you joined a video game forum just to ask for critiques on a non-video game video.

Video seemed good for what it is though. Well made, and the cuts/pacing seem up to par with professional videos, though perhaps slightly on the too-many-cuts side. Also, I'm not a fan of the costume.

 

[Vegeta897]

http://forums.g4tv.com/showthread.php?187621-an-honest-opinion&s=afb6d1366eb6070555665174ffb69ccb
http://www.techspot.com/community/topics/an-honest-opinion.187573/
http://forums.anandtech.com/showthread.php?p=34285166

He's one'a these guys.

At least we somehow rank up there with g4, techspot, and anandtech forums.

 

[Tollbooth Willie]

is that Josh from Drake and Josh in the thumbnail