Anti-citizen Four

[Earl Danish]

Great fun reading everyone's stories..

Here's part one of a story I have been thinking of - hope you all enjoy it.

Warning: This one contains a small amount of moderately strong language.

Comments welcomed.

 

[Tenakalaz]

Nice one Earl. something written with care and enjoyable.

Hope some others take the time to read it, makes a change from some of the rubbish I read.

 

[Hunter_8472]

Wow! Excellent! I just hope there's more

 

[Earl Danish]

Thanks - really glad you both enjoyed it :] - and yeah I hope to finish it with another short part sometime soon.

 

[Program_boy232]

Very good, I like it. especially the manhacks (muhaha , I wish i could watch that) please continue the story.

 

[Earl Danish]

cool - i like that part too :E - thanks to everyone for the comments..

another part is being formulated - i will post it here when it's done. as i am getting ready to emigrate at the moment, it may be a little while before it gets done - but all good things etc..