Breen The Bum

[the_rebel_medic]

This is my first pose, but I hope you like it

Our Benefactors were unimpressed with Breen and pulled a "G-Man" Leaving the suit

 

[Galactor]

he's legs are sorta posed weird, like he's squatting over to reach the trash can. If you had straightened those, the pose in and of itself wouldn't have looked at all bad, but you should have done this is Cs_office's garage with a blurred background or just a good amount of fog. Would have made the ambience a bit better. That and paint some dirt, or some other decal on the suit, so it at least looks like it's his last possession. Not too bad for a first try though I'd say, I've seen worst.

 

[Ennui]

Sucks. Seriously, it looks like he's taking a dump. I'd work a bit more before you post screens.

Nothing personal though mate

 

[the_rebel_medic]

No offense taken Ennui and thanks for the advice Glactor

 

[MadGuy]

Looks to me like his getting ready to jump in...
already setting his hands on fire, to get used to it..