Character Concept

[chu]

Another character I drew a few days ago.

 

[nofx]

nice the folds is his skirt or whatever are not believable.
nice piece of concept i think you should get a smaller lead like .3mm or .5mm and go hit those details to make it pop
also consider putting this into photoshop and making a background to go along with like; hes at a battlefield and there's dead warrior laying all around but hell have to be scathed

what concept is this for?

 

[Garfield_]

really nice, and as nofx said the skirt doesnt look good at all, alos i think the head is ugly and unbelievable too. Maybe a knights helmet on him would make him look better / cooler :>

 

[Jangle]

I think it looks great.

 

[*~Alex~*]

wow thts some nice shading!

 

[Garfield_]

his head angle doesnt look realistic to the arm :/

 

[Shippi]

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[nofx]

He looks like the guy from system of a down hehe
and shippi is correct the face seems a tad tad to long maybe because of the beard or w/e

 

[chu]

nice the folds is his skirt or whatever are not believable.
nice piece of concept i think you should get a smaller lead like .3mm or .5mm and go hit those details to make it pop
also consider putting this into photoshop and making a background to go along with like; hes at a battlefield and there's dead warrior laying all around but hell have to be scathed

what concept is this for?

Yeah I am not too keen on the folds either. This was the second attempt and I should of stayed with the first. But these concepts are not definitive but just a general idea. The faces are pretty much place holders.

 

[Flyingdebris]

feet are a little too short.

The human foot is normally about as long as the distance between your wrist and elbow.

 

[Sulkdodds]

I find the proportion and positioning of the legs rather odd, and the folds have already been picked apart but I like the rendering and shading - especially his face. He looks like the last person you'd expect to be wearing a knight's costume.

 

[nofx]

Yeah I am not too keen on the folds either. This was the second attempt and I should of stayed with the first. But these concepts are not definitive but just a general idea. The faces are pretty much place holders.

I have just the fix for you

http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=14739

Should help you somewhat
dont feel bad or feel that you have a weak concept because the critiques you have a pretty awesome concept art
you got the over all jest and whoevers modeling, animating tis it will suffice.

 

[Cyanide]

Pretty decent overall. I think you need to push your shadows a little more, they aren't dark enough, so it takes depth away from the piece. The character's legs also seem too short for the rest of his body. Study anatomy.

 

[chu]

If I would of spent a little more time on this (I did it at work on breaks) I imagine a few of the weak points would not have been.

With the folds of the kilt I think it's that one smaller fold that sits above the knee that funks it up. Oh well.

 

[Top Secret]

LOVE the mohawk.

 

[ktimekiller]

looks like something from warhammer 40k

 

[Sui]

He looks like a Brotherhood of Steel member, straight out of Fallout

 

[Blackghost905]

That is awsome, Keep up the GREAT work