Couple of Character WIP's

[Yakuza]

http://server5.uploadit.org/files/Yakuza-Assassinman1.jpg

http://server5.uploadit.org/files/Yakuza-Karu2.jpg

C&C's on what I got so far....thx guys.

 

[The Dark Elf]

oooh i like, nice one

 

[IchI]

They are well drawn but lack real originalitity. Good work.

 

[burnzie]

wow, you got skills boy, but they remind me of Mortal Kombat charecters, you can draw real puurrrdy tho

 

[ukfilmer]

that's some goooooood drawin'

 

[Farrowlesparrow]

I have to agree....although they are quite well drawn they do appear quite generic in some aspects. Perhaps even a different pose would help with that (I realise these may not be final drawings but a couple of other drawings showing different stances would be gnice )

 

[Yakuza]

They are well drawn but lack real originalitity. Good work.

Could you be just a tad more specific. In what direction do I seem to be going? Thanks for the honesty. :cheers:

and thanks every one for your comments. Its tough getting back into the swing of things, after taking several months off.

 

[Yakuza]

I have to agree....although they are quite well drawn they do appear quite generic in some aspects. Perhaps even a different pose would help with that (I realise these may not be final drawings but a couple of other drawings showing different stances would be gnice )

Yeah for sure, these drawing right here are what I call idea layouts. I do realy simple poses just so I can get the idea of what kind of clothes,weapons, armor, ect........they are wearing.

 

[|Link|]

I think its exelent

 

[The Dark Elf]

I don't see a problem with them, i think they look good. And since I'm staff then my word is law haha joking, but seriously though, i think they look great.

 

[ComradeBadger]

And if Fenric likes something thats not from LotR, it must be good

Nice job there mate

 

[The Dark Elf]

Infact I'd be tempted to ask to use http://server5.uploadit.org/files/Yakuza-Assassinman1.jpg that one for the staff avatars in sourceworld :E

 

[Yakuza]

Fenric I have been hovering in these forums far more than I have made posts. You seem to be a stand up guy so I would have no problem with that. I did however plan on coloring the ninja guy with the cape and if you want to see that one when I get done thats cool too.

 

[The Dark Elf]

Fenric I have been hovering in these forums far more than I have made posts. You seem to be a stand up guy so I would have no problem with that. I did however plan on coloring the ninja guy with the cape and if you want to see that one when I get done thats cool too.

Excellent. Give me a shout when you've done a colored version, looking forward to seeing it