Depressing Words

[Teh_Poet]

She looks outside the window,
She thinks that she’s alone.
Blind of the ones who love her,
His adulation unknown.

I'm still working on the first line, though.

 

[mabufo]

null

alone

binary

empty

left wing nutjobs (edit: hey who put that there!? =0 )

 

[PoeticRocker]

Just a word of advice:

Make sure you have backup copies of your poems somwhere besides your computer. One time the computer crashed and i had to format, luckily i wrote the verses on other pieces of paper. And good luck with your new poem!

 

[Teh_Poet]

Just a word of advice:

Make sure you have backup copies of your poems somwhere besides your computer. One time the computer crashed and i had to format, luckily i wrote the verses on other pieces of paper. And good luck with your new poem!

Yeah, most of the time I write my poems on the computer, and write down each verse as it finishes.

 

[Calanen]

despair
meaningless
hopeless
desperate
gray
helpless
worthless
defeated
loser
despondent

 

[Teh_Poet]

Here's another verse.

He’s trying to reach for the stars,
But there’s a long way to fall.
He can not cover all of his scars,
Some memories he can’t recall.