Feedback needed again

[Dux]

Hi again, can I have some crits on this screenshot please, thanks.

 

[rec]

Gotta love the tracer-lines behind the fired rounds.

 

[dawdler]

A bit dark... But if you upgrade it to HL2, I suppose it will have alot better lighting.

 

[derby]

Dark is good and atmospheric, but I'm in a light room right now, I can't see a thing!

 

[Hudson]

very nice, i like it a lot.

 

[IchI]

Its a bit basic. Even for hl1 really. Well expect for the APC. I dunno its nicely done and u obviasly know what u are doing. The side bridge/ledge thingys look a bit weird. I can;t really think of anything significant because its actually good.

 

[blink]

Originally posted by IchI
Its a bit basic.

Originally posted by IchI
its actually good.

make your mind up fella

 

[ubehagelig]

It basically looks alright, but nothing about it excites me.

What you need to work on is giving the player a great desire to *see* what's up on the 2nd floor. That is, add something up there to peak the curiosity of the player walking around on the ground level.

 

[Farrowlesparrow]

I thik if the picture were viewed full screen it wouldnt look so dark.

Anyway, looks good i suppose, got an more angles?

 

[Dux]

This map is only 3 hours work (scripted tank smashing through the door to release grunts included)

Still a lot to do.