Half Life 2 by Delta418

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Point Intersection

The train screeched to a halt as it entered City 17’s central rail station. Doctor Freeman awoke with a state of overwhelming confusion. The other passengers gave a startled look as he stumbled towards the train’s air locked doors.
“I didn’t see you get on,” a young man said. He scratched at an encoded patch sewn to his blue citizen uniform. Doctor Freeman looked about and noticed that everyone on the train, including himself, was dressed in the same manner.
“Damn, civvies…” the man uttered. Questions flooded Gordon’s mind, and a faint voice echoed in his mind. The words were lost as the train doors opened with a tremendous hiss of air. An automated voice crackled over the train’s intercom.
“Welcome to City 17, Precinct 12,” it said. ‘Please report to a civil protection officer for necessary registration and relocation.”
Doctor Freeman adjusted his black frame glass and stepped out onto the concrete station deck. He gave a glance to end of the train and watched the tracks disappear out of sight into the dark tunnel. Above the tunnel there were old apartment buildings with broken windows and bullet strewn walls. One thing in particular, however, nearly knocked Gordon off his feet.

The massive structure reached high into the sky with large cables, like tentacles, stretching out in every direction, spanning miles, eventually meeting the ground. It was a rather odd shaped building, he though. It shined in the sun like a shimmering sword that had been thrust into the ground. Gordon’s gaze was rudely interrupted by a bright flash of light and a slight humming noise. He stumbled, nearly falling off the stations platform once again. When he looked up, the remote protocol droid had hovered off. Up ahead in the distance, a Combine soldier stood guard outside of the stations central hall. He wore a dark blue uniform with various patches on his chest and shoulders. A large stick was clipped to his belt, along with what appeared to be a pistol and a radio of some sort. Strangely enough, on his head he wore a very large and very white gas mask.
“What the hell is going on around hear?” Gordon thought to himself. The guard opened the gate and pointed toward the stations front desk, as if trying to lure him into some strange trap.

“GET MOVING,” he yelled. The voice was low and gargled. He some how felt he had once heard it before. The guard reached for the stick on his side as Gordon hesitated to continue. The end of it lit up bright blue with a continuous crackle. Gordon quickly walked through the rusty, iron gate and into the station.
Inside the next hall, shouting echoed off cold, marble walls.
“Please, it’s all I have,” the voice cried. The guard struck the man with the end of his pistol and he collapsed to the floor. Another solider stepped out from behind a heavy metal door.
“CITIZEN, COME WITH ME,” he ordered. Gordon reluctantly followed him down the hallway into another small room. Gordon’s heart raced in a panic. Puddles of what appeared to be blood splattered the floor beneath a rusty folding chair. “I’M GONNA NEED SOME PRIVACY FOR THIS…” the officer said as he turned off the room’s communication unit. The guard reached behind his head and pulled off his mask. A flood of relief came over Gordon.
“It’s me, Doctor Freeman, Barney, from Black Mesa!”

“Damn it, Barney,” Gordon uttered.” I thought I you I was going to have to kill you!” He laughed. Black Mesa was an experimental facility some where in Western Europe. Barney was one of his assistants there. The chain of events was still not clear to Gordon, but finding Barney sure was a pleasant surprise.
“Where am I?” Gordon asked, still feeling the adrenaline in his veins. Barney informed Gordon that after the disaster at Black Mesa, Gordon had disappeared for a number of years. They had been hoping Gordon would get deported to City 17 just like the rest of them, but Gordon knew he had not been “deported.” He had no idea what did happen; in fact, he had no memory after Black Mesa. “So what’s everyone doing here?” Gordon had so many questions he could barely control himself.
“Well that’s just the thing, Gordon. We’ve been undercover here for month’s trying to figure out the agenda of the Combine. They’ve clearly suppressed the entire city and constructed that huge tin piece of shit they call the Citadel”
“I noticed the tower. I haven’t seen anything like this before. This place is high security. Who are they trying to keep out?”
“It’s not who they’re keeping out, it’s who there keeping in.” Gordon thought about the idea for a moment. “It’s rather strange that you showed up now.” Barney said. “The Combine forced martial law on the entire city just last week. The rebel force has been ambushing Combine soldiers for weeks, but they just keep hitting us back where we can’t touch them.” Barney paused to collect his thoughts. “Over the past few months, we’ve have collected quite a bit of information on the Citadel. It’s clearly the head of the operations, but the place is a fortress. It must be destroyed, but it would be a suicide mission to get inside there.” Barney suddenly leapt to his feet. A loud rapping on the door broke Gordon’s concentration. “Quick, into the back room!” Barney threw on his gas mask. “Get out of here as fast as you can. Try to stay away from check points. Just make you way to Doctor Kliener’s Lab!”

The door burst open but Gordon was gone. He scrambled up the ladder and up into the loft. Gordon grabbed a crowbar from the dusty floor are threw it up at the window. It shattered into pieces letting the sun light flood the darkness. He kicked the edges out with heel and stepped out onto the roof’s ledge. A distant siren droned in distance. He could see the Citadel much clearer now. Hundreds of droids were pouring out from a large open in its side. Gordon snaked his way down a drainage pipe into the back ally behind the rail station. He weaved his way into the station and eventually outside into the city square. Gordon wandered aimlessly down the street trying to blend in, not having the slightest idea where he was going.
In a distant ally, he heard the screams of someone being beaten to, what he assumed, was death. Gordon quickened his pace. The more he walked, the more he felt like he was being hunted. Another droid snapped a bright flash into his eyes. It beeped obnoxiously and then let out a long whining screech.
“Not good,” Gordon said to himself. He looked down another ally only to see an enormous machine that seemed to have nothing else to do but scare the crap out of people. It stood high abode on three long, slender legs like a giant bug. It let out a low and thundering sound as if in distress. It chilled Gordon to the point of absolute fear. Gordon ran to the nearest building which happened to be an apartment building. Kicking in the old wooden door, he then dashed up the stairs, clawing his way up each and every step, until he could hardly breathe. A few stories below, foot steps of what sounded like a dozen soldiers echoed upward.
Above him, a radio blared, “SUSPECT SPOTTED IN PRECINCT 386. ALL UNITS RESPOND.” Gordon froze in his tracks and listened a minute longer catching his breathe. There was a long pause which fell to silence.
“SUSPECT… DOCTOR GORDON FREEMAN.”

“Holy shit.” Gordon leapt to his feet and ran down the hall of the 7th floor. Many of the doors were barred or boarded up. Frantically, he kicked in one of the doors and slammed it shut behind him. Inside, a man comforted his wife, who was hysterically crying.
“When will it ever end?” she cried. Her husband knew she was right. There was no stopping them. He looked up, finally realizing someone had come through the door.
“You’ve got to get out of here,” the man warned, “They’ve been coming around to every building, barging in like they own us and – hey, you’re Doctor Freeman!” Gordon ran through to the other end of the apartment, knocking over a chair in the process. The only exit was through the window. He stuck his head out and examined the gap between the two buildings, which was roughly six feet.
“You can do this,” he said rubbing his hands together in a strange type of plead. Gordon thrust himself from the windowsill with outstretched arms. He snagged the rail of the fire-escape with his right hand and dangled, like rag doll, nearly a 70 feet above the ground. He pulled himself up onto the scaffolding and climbed onto the roof.
Gordon ran for his life across the red shingle, leaping across the spanning gaps. Gordon knew it was only a matter of time before he was spotted, or he would surely get himself killed. He leapt from the high roof top onto a surprising low building. The weak boards of the unfinished warehouse gave way. Gordon fell 15 feet through the roof, landing in a pile of construction trash.Suddenly, the sound of foot-steps filled the warehouse’s silent and empty 5th floor.

“SUSPECT SPOTTED,” a soldier shouted.
“Oh, no you don’t!” a voice replied. The sound of gun shots roared off the metal walls. Bodies hit the floor, followed by the occasional grunt or groan. More gun shots. Silence soon returned with the sound of a single pair of footsteps.
Shock came over him. Was he injured? Had he been shot? Had he broken a bone? He kicked his legs and flailed his arms. Hoping for the best, he reached out for something to pull himself up with. Out of no where, something touched his hand; something strikingly..soft. He opened his eyes but could only see a silhouette against the flooded windows.
 
A Red Letter Day

“I’m Alyx,” a kind voice said, “You must be Gordon Freeman.” She pulled hard on his hand; bring him to his feet as the dust settled.
“How do you know my name?” Gordon asked, rising to his feet and brushing himself off.
“You used to work with my father at Black Mesa, Eli Vance.” She smiled, curling her hair behind her ears and holstering her pistol, “We saw you running across the roof-tops like Tarzan. Seems you took quite a fall. Are you alright?”
“I’m fine,” he replied in a slight daze, “Except, of course, for the fact that everyone is trying to kill me,” Gordon remarked. “Who do they think I am?” Alyx chuckled to herself.
“Everyone has been anticipating your return for quite some time, Doctor Freeman. We all admire your work, regardless of what we desire to attain from it.”
“Please, call me Gordon.” He insisted. He thought for a moment, “I have no memory of this place, how could I return?”
“There’s no time, lets just get to the lab,” Alyx said trying to avoid the ridiculously irrelevant question. She ran over to the stairwell and signaled Gordon to follow her. Alyx walked over to a large blue dumpster inside the basement and kicked it with the heel of her hiking shoes, sending it rolling into a dark corner. Behind the dumpster lay a small opening that turned out to be a fairly large tunnel. She pulled down a metal plate that covered the opening of the tunnel. They walked to the other end with happened to lead them underneath the street over to what Gordon assumed was another basement. “We’ve been helping people escape the city for weeks, but it’s a dangerous route to my father’s lab; through the canals. Today were finally on the verge of having a better way.” Alyx walked over to the bright blue vending machine. “Let me buy you drink,” she said, putting a dollar into the machine.

“Oh, no I’m fine, thank you.” She ignored him and proceeded to press a series of buttons. The vending machine opened up like a vault leading right into Doctor Kliener’s lab. “Oh, and by the way, nice to finally met you.” She walked into the lab.
“Alyx, my dear,” Doctor Kliener said, “what took you so long?” He rubbed his glasses and peered at Gordon. “Gordon Freeman, is that you, Gordon?”
“Seems Gordon had a little run-in with the civil protection group” Alyx said. “I found him wandering around outside. Bit of a trouble maker, isn’t he?”
“Well, we owe a great deal to Doctor Freeman, even if trouble does tend to follow in his wake.” Doctor Kliener fumbled with some dials on his lab station. “I must say, you’ve come at a very opportune time, Gordon. Alyx has just installed the final pieces on our resurrected teleport.”
“Please, I can’t take any credit for the break-through, Doctor Kliener.” Alyx said, respectfully.
“Oh Alyx, your talents surpass your loveliness.” She blushed.
“Well, is he here?” Barney said excitedly as he entered the lab. “Man, Gordon, you stirred up the hive!” Barney fumbled around with the communication center and then poured himself a cup of coffee.
“We’ll inaugurate the new teleport with a double transmission,” continued Kliener.
“You mean its working, for real?” Barney teased, “Because I still have nightmares about that cat.” Alyx’s eye widened.
“Whoa, whoa, whoa!” Alyx burst. “What cat?”
“Oh, we’ve made major strides since then…” said Kliener.
“WHAT CAT?”
“Major strides…” Alyx let the thought go and walked over to the communications hub.

“Gordon, since you won’t be taking the streets, you should probably get changed out of your civvies. Your suit is in the storage room right behind you.” Gordon peered into the dark and dusty room in search of a light switch. He stuck his hand out and bumped into some kind of very large glass object. A light suddenly came on inside the glass chamber, revealing, indeed, Gordon’s old hazard suit. He slipped into the suit, smiling for the first time in, well, he hadn’t the slightest idea how long it had been.
“I see your suit still fits you like a glove, Gordon,” said Doctor Kliener. “Well, at least the glove parts, that is.” A loud crash echoed from inside the storage room. Nuts and bolts pattered the floor as the commotion continued. Moments latter a small creature scurried out into the lab.
“Lamar,” Doctor Kliener shouted. He hurried over to the head crab and tried to calm its antics. It let out a hiss and leapt up into the storeroom loft, knocking over various crates and jars, leaving a cloud of dust in its trail. Lamar finally scuttled her way inside the air duct high above the lab.
“Oh fiddlesticks,” said Doctor Kliener. “It will be weeks until I can coax her out of that air shaft.” He shook his head and returned to his calculations, punching numbers into his computer as if he was trying to find something in particular. The sound of beeping and clicking and gurgling filled the lab.
“Ah, that shall do quite nice,” he murmured to himself. “This shall prove as a worthy way to help people escape the city.”
“Alyx, my dear,” said Doctor Kliener, showing her to the teleport. He flipped on the communication unit and began to talk to Eli Vance. “You’ll never guess who stumbled into my lab today, Eli.”

“Gordon Freeman? Is that you,” Eli said in near astonishment.
“Indeed it is, Eli. And we plan to send him packing directly to your lab in the company of your lovely daughter.” Again, he examined the data while Alyx stepped into the teleport. “Okay Gordon, when I tell you, you throw the reaction switch over by the auxiliary charger.” Gordon wished he could share the same confidence as Doctor Kliener, but he always had this inclination that teleportation was impossible. Barney stood idly by trying not to laugh. “Conditions couldn’t be more ideal!” trumped Doctor Kliener.
“That’s what you said last time,” replied Barney. Doctor Kliener started the machine, watching it come to life. Every piece moved in an orbital fashion around Alyx.
“Yeah, about that cat…” Alyx said nervously. The machine continued to shake as a loud whirling noise filled the room. Doctor Kliener checked the digital read-outs on his computer. “Perfect, throw the switch, Gordon!” The whirling machine started to glow, and soon enough it shined so bright it hurt Gordon’s eyes. Alyx lifted her hands and squirmed like cold water was running through her veins. Suddenly there was a tremendous explosion of light and a thunderous echo filled the room. Alyx was gone.

“Did it work?!” Barney asked in patiently.
“See for yourself,” said Eli, with his arm around Alyx.
“That was a little weird,” she admitted. Gordon’s stepped into the teleport. It was Barney’s turn to throw the switch.
“Okay, Barney.” He threw the switch and all was in order. With a loud bang, the air duct burst open and Lamar landed on top of the filing cabinet with a thud. It hissed and scampered around in circles.
“What now,” Doctor Kliener asked.
“It’s your friend the freaking’ head hopper!” Barney yelled in a very irritable tone.
“Lamar!” he called to his pet head crab. With that, Lamar leapt towards the teleport and landed in an explosion of light.
Gordon found himself being pulled back and forth in all different places. He was at Black Mesa East, then on a beach, then inside the Citadel. It finally stopped, landing him a few feet outside the lab he had just been in. Doctor Kliener ran to the window.
“Quick, you must get out of here!” he yelled. “Run!” Gordon jumped down from the metal grate and ran around to the other side of the building not knowing which way exactly to run.
 
The Train Station

“Man, I’ve never seen the Citadel like that before. They must be on full alert.” Barney looked down to where Gordon was standing, some 20 feet below him. “Here, take this crowbar. You’re gonna need to get to the lab on foot. It’s a dangerous route but the canals will take you right to it.” Gordon stepped back as the crowbar hit the concrete steps, chipping a small bit out of the tattered material. He bent down and picked it up. Gordon gripped it tight in his hand and proceeded to walk down the steps and out into the rail yard.

Gordon eased his way behind an empty box car. He peered around the corner toward the rail station only to realize that Metro Police were crawling all over. They weren’t just on patrol. This was a full-scale manhunt. When Gordon turned around, there was a droid hovering inches in front of his face. His first instinct was to cover his eyes, having become quiet familiar with these devices. Instead, he gripped the crowbar in his hand and lashed out at it. The droid shattered into pieces as if fell to ground, letting out a high pitched screech and finally a fizzing pop. He took a deep breath, leaning against the red boxcar, and hoped that he had not been spotted. He turned around and climbed up onto the boxcar. The stations many tracks all ran together into four main tracks. If only he could some how get to the other side of the station. Gordon knew he had to act quickly. He hopped his way across to the next train. Then, he swung body down into the open door on the train, falling onto a pile of pallets and empty crates inside.
“SEARCH THE CARS,” a soldier ordered. “DOCTOR FREEMAN CANNOT ESCAPE.”

“Great, I’m trapped now,” Gordon thought. He looked out of the crack between the doors, trying to get a hold on the situation. The sound of a raging freight train caught his attention. Maybe he could use it to his advantage. “A distraction,” he thought. “No, that’s insane, but it could work…”
Gordon stuck his head out from the boxcar; examining the tracks schematics. Another smile worked its way across his face. “This is insane,” he thought again. Gordon had noticed the entire station seemed to be leaning down hill, with multiple storage tracks running into the four main tracks. Gordon checked to see if any soldiers were near, and then climbed back up on top of the train. He ducked his head and scurried from car to car, crowbar in hand, until he reached the last car. The entire train was locked into a single backstop barricade. He hoped down and thrust the crowbar into the lock, prying open the four greasy, metal teeth. A loud snap startled him as the train groaned and reluctantly started to roll towards the fourth main-track.

Back in the lab, Barney searched frantically for his helmet. Hew knew if he didn’t get back on his shift, there’d be hell to pay. Doctor Kliener babbled on about Lamar, but then remembered the slightly more severe repercussions of Gordon’s situation. Nonetheless, Doctor Kliener had faith in Gordon to live up to his reputation. After all, what kind of doctor builds a hazard suit plated with third-degree bullet-proof plastics? He turned on the video receiver and told Eli that Gordon didn’t make it through. He told Eli that Gordon was on his way to the lab through the canals but there were no promises.
“WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE?” the soldier’s yelled. “STOP THAT TRAIN! BOTH OF THEM!”

The oncoming freight train blasted its horn, signaling it intended to pass through the station. Gordon watched as the line of cars inched closer to the fourth track. The freight train grew closer and Gordon suddenly realized if he didn’t act soon he wouldn’t be able to get across the track. He dashed toward to other side of the station, leaping over the fourth track; hardly beating the freight train. Never before had Gordon ran so fast or been as exhilarated as he was now. He landed on the loose rocks between the tracks and scrambled to get up again. The massive freight train flew by with tremendous speed, only to smash head on with a run off train from the storage tracks. The sound was near deafening as the runaway train’s petroleum tanks exploded in a violent fury. The stream-line freight train buckled and ruptured, screeching in all directions, and inevitably demolishing the entire cargo station.
Gordon made it to the far end of the track and tugged at the metal sewer grate. It lifted with ease and he scrambled down the shaft. A piece of wreckage thundered over the pipe sliding to a dusty stop, blocking off all light entering the tunnel...
 
The Hope of the Rebels

Seconds later, Gordon found himself in the dark: cold, wet, and gasping for air after being submerged in the worst smelling substance he could imagine. The goop stuck to his suit, causing him to gag. Another tanker exploded in the rail station above the sewer. He smirked at the “distraction” he had caused. Gordon’s suit abruptly started crackling, interrupting his moment of delight. The substance was radioactive waste, and it was pissing off his suit’s hazard system. Gordon trudged up to the dry concrete section of the tunnel and collapse on an old milk crate, smearing the substance off with old newspapers. He stopped, gazing at the paper in his hand. The headline read, “Doctor Breen to be Earth Spokesman and peacemaker with Combine Race.” Gordon cringed.
“That lying piece of shit.” He threw the paper to the floor. Doctor Breen was the administrator at Black Mesa research facility. Gordon knew he was a snake but this was ridiculous. He betrayed his fellow researchers, and now he has dragged the human race into genocide for self-benefit.

Across the way he saw a flickering light. Voices echoed off the damp walls. Gordon could tell they were not that of soldiers, at least not Combine soldiers. Dropping the newspapers, he hopped over the canal and started to walk vigilantly toward the tunnel where the light flickered and the voices echoed. As he approached, the voices became much clearer. Gordon leaned his back against the tunnel’s wet pipes that lined the walls, letting himself slide down to the damp floor. His hands rummaged around for firm ground as he leaned around the bend, trying to get a view of the men.
“What is going on up there?” an inquisitive voice asked. “I’ve never seen it this bad. The Combine are spooked out of their minds.”
“I bet they’re trying to finish off the Lambda,” another replied. A sense of defeat and dark sarcasm rolled off his tongue.
“No, this goes beyond rebel attacks,” the first man contemplated. “I don’t know what it is, but this city is trembling down to its foundation.”

Understanding the men were allies, Gordon rose to his feet and turned the corner, slowly stepping out into the fluorescently lit maintenance bay. The man looked up and nearly spit out his coffee. Almost instantly, his eyes fell on the bright orange symbol on Gordon’s suit: the Lambda. Both men let out a sigh of relief.
“Holy crap, you scared the bejesus out of me,” yapped the older man. Nevertheless, It wasn’t long before he had collected his thoughts, already working out several questions he demanded be answered. “So, who are?” he pried. “Are you the one making all that commotion up there?”
“My name is Gordon Freeman,” he remarked, “and I’m trying to get to the Black Mesa East facility. Can you guys help me out here?”
“Holy crap, its Gordon Freeman,” the man uttered, wide eyed. “We were beginning to lose hope for the resistance. This is incredible.” The younger gentleman grabbed his rifle and threw a pistol over to Gordon, noticing he was outfitted with only a crowbar. “Nice to finally meet you, Freeman. I’m Trent, and this is my father, Javin. We’ve been hiding down here ever since they expelled everyone on our block. Lucky enough, we were able to escape before the Combine hauled everyone off to Nova Prospect.” Gordon opened his mouth in an attempt to speak but was befuddled as a vortigaun slave bustled out from the distant darkness and peered up at him.

The Vortigaun creatures were an alien race discovered centuries ago. They were taken back to earth and used as slaves. Due to their resistance to following orders, however, they were released and inevitably joined forces with the Lambda rebels.
The creature walked up and continued to stare at Gordon in a rather critical manner. He scratched his scaly and rugged skin, then reached out and poked Gordon’s suit.
“So, this is the Freeman,” it murmured in a raspy, yet certain voice. “The Combine’s reckoning… has come.”
“Where did you say you were going?” the young man interrupted, raising an eyebrow, his gaze fixed on the flickering Lambda depicted on Gordon’s armor. Gordon hastily clarified where he needed to go, but he had very little knowledge of how to actually get there.
“I’m not sure what’s going on in this city, but you’re right Javin. Something huge is going down. I don’t know how I got here, or what I’m supposed to be doing here; all I know is that this city might be all that’s left.” Gordon paused, looking off into the distant blackness ahead. “The lab isn’t important right now. I don’t even know why I’m supposed to be going there. We were performing research in Black Mesa years ago, but research is the least of my worries now.” Gordon stumbled to his feet. “The Citadel is where we need to go.” Trent laughed and turned to his father.
“That, that, that’s impossible!’ Trent protested. “I can’t even express the insanity of such a mission. I mean, that place is surrounded by 30 foot, walking, iron walls that crush entire buildings. The base of the structure extends deep into the ground, and is dug out nearly 500 feet down on all sides.” The more Trent spoke, the more Gordon wanted to bring the Combine down. He could tell his reasoning was doing the opposite of what he had intended. “Look,” he said finally, “there are over 500 elite Combine soldiers occupying that building.”
“He’s right,” said Javin, “there’s no way to even get close to it. There’s a suppression field that extends in a quarter-mile radius from the base of it, as well. Step inside that, and you’re toast.”

With that, the Vortigaun walked over to Gordon, this time restraining himself for prodding at Gordon’s suit.
“Freeman…I have a proposition for you,” he said. “The Vortigaun are at your service,” he continued, bowing his head. “It appears you are looking for a way into the heart of the Combine. If it is any help, I know a secret path out of the city where you could then get a much better vantage point on this attack.”
“Through the canals?” Gordon offered. The Vortigaun laughed.
“Oh no,” Javin said. “The Combine overran that a few days ago. There are probably checkpoints and soldiers every inch of that canal by now.”
“Good thing I ran into you guys first,” Gordon seemed rather upset by the news.
“Shall you hear Vortigaun or not?” the creature interjected. Gordon waved his hand in front of him and nodded his head. The Vortigaun nodded in return, and then looked to the three of them. “Secret path is very dark and dangerous, however, fear not; I shall lead you down safe passage through the mines of the Reshianic.”
“The Reshianic?” asked Javin. He had never heard the term and seemed more curious about the name than the implications of the idea. Javin decided to let it go and managed to stay on subject. “Where exactly do these mines start? And how do they manage to get out of the city?” he asked. Gordon, too, was taken back by the idea, yet couldn’t help wondering the very same thing.
“They just do, and who ever dug it is dead now but we’ll thank them later,” he gave a raspy chuckle. “We shall travel at nightfall.” The Vortigaun walked over to a make-shift work bench and pulled out on of the many maps of City 17 protruding from a musky cardboard box. He pointed to the train-station, suggesting their rough location. His long, lanky fingers dragged westward; towards to an area marked as an abandoned fuel refinery. “This is where we shall enter. The facility was built on top of this very mine shaft, although it might be sealed to some extent. The Freeman is prepared, no less, with that metal thing of his,” said that Vortigaun, humoring only himself. “We have little time to discuss, as the dusk is upon us. Sleep now; we shall leave in less than 4 hours; the Vortigaun wish not to sleep in the mines.”
 
Into The Mines of the Reshianic

No one slept that night, or at least the way sleep had been intended to be attained. Gordon sat up all hours of darkness, in silence, waiting to hear a break over the droning Combine scanner. The radio sat motionless on a wooden crate under the bright light that shined from above; the rest of the room lay in darkness. Gordon sat in the corner, whirling his crowbar on its end as if it would carve a hole in the concrete floor. He flinched as his name echoed across the airwaves. Moments later, there was silence. Its presence startled him. He nudged Javin who had become near hypnotic; his mind flooded with worry and fatigue. The Vortigaun rummaged about in the darkness, and then too noticed the silence. He walked over to the radio and listened. Not a single broadcast was transmitted. Trent awoke from a useless half-sleep and sat up.
“We shall go now. Quickly,” urged the Vortigaun.

The midnight air was delightfully warm and crisp, in contrast to that of the damp, underground refuge. They walked along the service street leading west through a very desolate part of industrial City 17. Abandoned factories from decades past stood like monoliths against the vaguely lit backdrop hovering about the Citadel, miles away. The Vortigaun led with such determination, walking with a vigilant and yet brisk pace. He hunched his back, staying low in the shadows. Gordon and Trent tried their best to keep up with the strange creature. Finally, the Vortigaun’s pace slowed. He disappeared into a dark, shadowed alcove between to buildings.

“Freeman,” the Vortigaun called in a low voice,” your assistance…uh, is needed.”
Gordon walked into the darkness holding out his hands. His eyes adjusted as the moon slipped out of his sight.
“Thrust that bar of yours into the door latch,” he said. The screeching metal made Trent jump. He looked about in a panic fearing they might have been spotted. Gordon leaned hard and the latch gave way, popping open in a violent, splintering nature, again, startling Trent. The large metal door creaked open revealing the pitch-black insides of the ancient coal factor. The Vortigaun disappeared inside and immediately started wandering all over the building. Gordon ducked his head inside and fumbled around aimlessly in the dark. There was silence, then a loud crack. The room exploded into a vibrant green radiance. The Vortigaun stood in the center of the room anxiously, holding the bright liquid flare. Trent and Javin had followed Gordon inside and were now looking about in all directions. The intricate shadows crawled over the various pipes and rails and other metal structures.

“The shaft must be around here somewhere,” said the Vortigaun, “It’s been so long.” He walked over to one of the factories many conveyor belts, causing the shadows to again creep in a circular fashion. He examined the factories schematics and seemed to have arrived at a rather acceptable answer. The other three wandered slowly around the room, staying in the light. “Here we go,” the Vortigaun continued. Another loud crack filled the air, followed by a thunderous crash and a powerful hiss of frigid air. Gordon stopped in his tracks and looked down towards the floor from where the sound boomed. To his surprise, however, there no longer was a floor. A gaping hole now stood in the middle of the factory’s foundation. The large trap-like doors hung down into the darkness, still swaying slightly. “Good God, Freeman,” remarked the Vortigaun, “you trying to get yourself killed? Be more careful next time.” The Vortigaun couldn’t control himself and broke out into a mischievous laugh.

“Alright, let’s get moving already,” said Gordon impatiently. He grabbed a flare out from his pack and broke it over his knee. He tossed it into the shaft, illuminating the walls of the vast cavern as it fell to the ground. It landed in a pool of water and managed not to shatter into pieces, oddly enough.
“Four seconds,” he remarked. “That’s what, five-hundred feet?” he suggested. “That might take a while.” He looked up the ceiling of the factory. A broken elevator cable dangled lifelessly.
“I wish we could make that kind of time,” added Javin. The Vortigaun laughed once more.
“The Freeman almost did!” he ragged.
Gordon was the first to climb down into the abyss, followed by the Vortigaun, then Trent, and finally Javin. The steel service ladder was ice cold, as was the air. Gordon turned up the insulator on his suit and continued to descend. Nearly a hundred feet from the cavern floor, Trent’s pace slowed dangerously.
“Oh my God, it’s absolutely freezing down here,” he blurted. “I can’t take this anymore; I need to get off this damn ladder.” Javin looked down towards the ground and insisted that everything was going to be fine.

“Look,” he said,”we’re almost there.” Trent looked reluctantly down to the base of the cavern. His heart began to race uncontrollably.
“Where the hell is the flare?” Trent shouted. Gordon stopped and looked down as well. The light flickered randomly, and then began to shift across the floor.
“It’s,” Gordon stuttered,”its, its, moving.” The Vortigaun stopped abruptly and asked what the hell was going on. Gordon let go of the ladder with one hand and leaned against the iron-mesh cage wall. The light stick stood still for a moment, and then was violently tossed against the cavern walls, shattering into pieces and oozing bright green goop onto the ground. The Vortigaun lit yet another flare and handed to Gordon. “What is this place?” Gordon cried. He ran down the ladder to investigate, jumping the last few rungs. Gordon landed hard on the rock floor. He held out the flare in front of him and tried to get a good look at the situation. Crowbar in one hand, flare in the other, he advanced towards the only thing he could see, the broken flare.
 
From Below

He knelt down and rubbed his fingers in the glowing liquid, then on the moss-covered walls. He picked up the crowbar and looked about him. When he turned around, he was struck in the chest by a tremendous force, knocking him to ground some 15 feet from where he had stood, not to mention, dropping the crowbar. Gordon gasped, sucking in the icy, stale air. He stumbled to his feet and began to run. Heavy footsteps galloped behind him. Gordon stopped and turned to get a glimpse of his monstrous attacker. The green light glistened in the beasts eyes. It hunched forward and charged Gordon. He realized the creature was most likely tracking the light in he held in his hand, and not actually chasing him. With seconds to spare, Gordon tossed the light aside. The beast collided with the wall with a booming crash. Gordon was out of flares and it was pitch-black again, his only hope was to find the ladder and get the hell out there. Or was it? The beast slowed its rampage and began to, what Gordon assumed, was lick the goop off the wall where he smeared it.

“If only I could see the damn thing,” he said. Suddenly, an idea struck him. Gordon ran over to the other broken flare and picked up a hand full of the liquid. He stretched his arm back and flung it in the direction of the sound. It splattered into tiny specks of light. The constellation of neon chemicals shuttered and then stood on end. They fell down again with a loud thump. The liquid had outlined a much larger creature than Gordon had hoped for.
“Uh, oh.” He looked around for something to defend himself with. To his surprise, about ten feet in front of him was his smeared crowbar. The beast reared its head and let out a thunderous roar, which echoed off the walls and probably out into city 17. It charged towards Gordon’s bright green gloves, which he happened to be frantically waving. Gordon dove for the crowbar and rolled back onto his feet. In an act of sheer adrenaline, Gordon leapt forward and stabbed his crowbar down through the air. It struck the beast on the top of its head and sunk in nearly 6 inches, causing it to collapse to ground in a sliding fashion. The beast gargled and groaned, finally letting out a deep exhale which stirred the dust. Cheers echoed from above.

“Was that a bug?” called the Vortigaun. He quickly hoped down to the floor and held up another flare. He examined the creature with great interest. Trent and Javin reluctantly worked their way down as well. Gordon ripped the bar out of the ant-lions head and collapsed to the ground in an attempt to catch his breath.
“He killed it,” noted the Vortigaun. ”The Freeman has done well.” Gordon rose to his feet and stood next to the Vortigaun. “Now listen,” he continued, “this is our last flare, don’t smash it on the ground like the last five.” The Vortigaun handed Gordon the light and then picked up the crowbar.
“I thought you said it was dead,” added Javin.
“Indeed, but what lies inside is of great importance to our mission.”
“You mean you knew about this thing the whole time?” cried Gordon.
“Of course not, but in order to get out of hear alive, we will need those Pheropods.”
“So what if we didn’t kill one of these bastards? What was the plan?” Gordon pried. The Vortigaun ignored him and stabbed the creature in the chest, reaching inside the dead ant-lion. Trent nearly threw up.

He pulled his arm out and pulled out three small pods. “Pheropods,” he said again. “They produce a very strong scent. To other bugs, the smell is so familiar; they will mistake you for a bug. How remarkable, indeed.” Trent grabbed one of the pods with his bare hands and smeared it all over himself frantically. Apparently he was more afraid of being eaten, then getting a little messy. The warmth felt good, and would surely hold him over for another few minutes. “There will be more bugs,” the Vortigaun said, giving a pod to Gordon and taking back the flare. “Never the less, fear not, for we are now bugs as well.” With that, the Vortigaun rose to his feet and walked briskly into the main tunnel of the coal mine, flare in hand. Gordon followed behind gripping his blood-spattered crowbar.

Seven hours later, there was a light at the end of the tunnel. It glowed of the cold rock walls with an erie wooing. Their pace quickened but was soon overrun by the steep grade of the air shaft. Javin and Trent clawed up the steep rail tracks like a flight of stairs. Gordon grabbed onto the cable once used to pull the coal carts up to the surface. The sound of waves and the smell of salt-water wooed them out of the hole. Gordon fell upon his face onto the warm ocean sand. Trent and Javin collapsed and soaked up the suns warmth. They had made it through the longest night any of them had ever experienced. They had escaped from City 17.

Gordon sat up looked around. They seemed to have ended up in a cove of some sort. He studied the buildings that lined the coastal inlet. Power lines rose high above the deserted warehouses and power plants. The Citadel finally sat low on the horizon. However, Gordon nearly died at the sight that followed. High up one of the buildings brick chimneys stood an enormous, orange, spray-painted Lambda.
“Black Mesa East,” he uttered.
 
There they are guys. Every piece of the puzzle..in one nice thread. A mod can delete the other threads.
Now, time for reading and reviews. Please, tell me what you think about it so far. Any suggestions as to where it should go next. I honestly just want to right one hell of a city fight. With striders and snipers and injuries. High drama. High strategy. Tanks...there will be tanks as well. Im thinking...saving private ryan...Combine style. hehehe. I want this story to really go somewhere.
 
WARNING: MASSIVE STUPIDLY LARGE UNREADABLE BLOCKS OF TEXT ARE BAD FOR YOUR EYES

Also Gordon doesn't talk, no matter what. Fo' shizzle.
 
People requested it be done this way so STFU and go somewhere else.
 
There ya go. All slpit up and nice and neat. Now,time for reading and reviews. Please, tell me what you think about it so far. Any suggestions as to where it should go next. I honestly just want to right one hell of a city fight. With striders and snipers and injuries. High drama. High strategy. Tanks...there will be tanks as well. Im thinking...saving private ryan...Combine style. hehehe. I want this story to really go somewhere.
 
Black Mesa wasn't somewhere in western europe, it was in New mexico.

I think it'd be better had you not chosen Gordon as the main character, and you've got a few story points wrong.
 
Oops. Oh well. I never play HL1 because its so old. I wrote this story for shear enjoyment, and I wasn't to concerned about details. Im more curious about what people think of my writing style. If the events and atmosphere of it are interesting and "cool". I didn't want to explain to many details cuz i knew i'd screw it up, but i felt i needed to give some explanation.

I am thinking about writing a new story about a girl maybe, but it would be hard not to resemble Alyx and to stay away from the storyline. Maybe jsut the story of some rebel. Or even a combine who changes his mind.
 
Didn't play Half-life because its old? Shocking. Honestly, it is far better than alot of the crap being churned out these days.

Well, if you're not aiming for accuracy on the story then I guess it is no good correcting those. You're writing style isn't bad, but suffers because I've a hard to reading something where Gordon says: "Holy shit."

You'd be far better off if you were to do something more original, that is less of a retred and takes place elsewhere. New central and side cast etc - you'd be able to be more creative. There are other Combine cities across Earth (well, not many) or you could do it in the wasteland (Most of Earth is wasteland)

But I suppose it is up to you.
 
Ooo, I got it...Xen, Someone stumbles into Xen and ends up bringing down the entire civilization. New characters, new races and vehicles and stuff. I'll create the combine world.The new characters will be prisoners from Earth, taken shortly after the explosion at the end of HL2. The combine failed at city 17 and are now about to do something even more unthinkable..I jsut havent the slightest clue...Travel through time maybe... to a more vonerable point in history.
 
DElta418 said:
Ooo, I got it...Xen, Someone stumbles into Xen and ends up bringing down the entire civilization. New characters, new races and vehicles and stuff. I'll create the combine world.The new characters will be prisoners from Earth, taken shortly after the explosion at the end of HL2. The combine failed at city 17 and are now about to do something even more unthinkable..I jsut havent the slightest clue...Travel through time maybe... to a more vonerable point in history.

Don't include time travel, pleeeeeeeeease. Awful idea.

The entire Xen population has already been brought down by Gordon, well, at least Nihalinths lot. There would only be xen wildlife now. Also, the explosion at the end of Half-life 2 would have cut the combines connection with Earth, they would not be be able to teleport here there and everywhere.

The Combine aliens themselves aren't on Earth, and now the Overwatch is left confused and leaderless (There is still Breen, I suppose). Plus, there are the other cities. With the reactor destroyed and the Citadel following, the Combine may just move on to conquering more races, it is what they do.
 
Okay, back to original idea. NYC slowly becoming controlled. The combine squeeze harder than ever and a group of characters stand up and destroy thier occupation of NYC.

It sounds way to much like HL2... :monkee:
 
Just remember to space it out... nothing makes me want to read less then massive blocks of text...

Intelligent spacing is surprisingly useful. Also, I apologise for seeming a bit hostile in my first post.
 
No problem. It just didn't seem like anyone was reading it at all. I can't think of any ideas for a new story.
 
DElta418 said:
No problem. It just didn't seem like anyone was reading it at all. I can't think of any ideas for a new story.

Course you can ;)
 
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