AJ Rimmer
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Okay, so I played Half-life 2 and was re-inspired to write something, and so, here it is. My new fan-fic, I decided to start a new one out of two reasons:
1: get inspiration to write on my old one
2: My old one turned out to have some horrible plot inconsistencies I don't feel like tackling right now.
Chapter 1: A new format.
”Ready in three… two… one… initiating receivers, target-lock confirmed. Alyx, I’m ready!”
Dr Kleiner pushed all relays to max and made sure the target-lockers were dead on alignment, they were. He didn’t receive a confirmation from Alyx, but she was probably just too busy.
“Alyx, I’m getting a steady stream now, CY base looking good, massless field flux stable. All checks out, see you in a few…” The ensuing explosion shook the room. The stabilization field generator shook in its hinges and Dr Kleiner was knocked out by a lamp swinging down from the roof.
Something was hurting him. Something was quite badly hurting him. Something small. A bug? No, not in his lab. He moved his head and Lamarr drifted into sight, she had dug her dull claws into his leg to wake him up. The venom had created an infection. Easily treatable, but it did give a rather nasty rash on his wound. Lamarr jumped onto his head and for a moment, Isaac lost balance and slammed down on the metal floor again. The headcrab let go and ran around in circles around Dr Kleiner, showing how proud she was of having awoken her master.
“Lamarr? Oh good, you’re alright. Now let’s see here…”
Kleiner started reading the monitors when he remembered.
“Oh my god. Alyx! Gordon!” He threw himself on the comm.
“Alyx! Do you read me? Alyx! Gordon! Come in! Please answer me! Are you there?!” But no-one answered his calls. He looked around. The lab was a mess, small pieces of burning and twisted metal was scattered near the teleport pad. The big stabilization field generator was lying in the middle of the room, damaged beyond repair. Isaac sank together in the corner.
“Oh my god… First Eli… and now this!” He pulled off his glasses and was left alone with his dark feelings of guilt. Well almost alone, Lamarr was still tugging at his trouser leg.
He sat there for a full ten minutes before he flung up, desperately jabbing the controls.
“Where could they have gone to? If they didn’t end up here, where might they be? In the city?” Dr Kleiner looked down on the little headcrab as if she could somehow answer him.
“No, no of course not, had they been in the city, they would have come here, or to Black Mesa East. But where then?” Kleiner felt a chill go down his back.
“Oh no…” He stared at the little creature so gently trying to get him to play with her and merely whispered the three-letter word;
“…Xen…”
“Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep.” The small console bulb lit up and Barney pulled his chair close and checked it. The baton he was fiddling with hit the floor hard and loud.
“What is it?” The other CP asked him.
“Uhmm… 214 on the plaza, but they got units already on the way.
“Good.” Barney nodded slowly, while his mind was already in fifth gear.
“But some of the suspects escaped running down the tracks, better get someone and go after them, I would, but my knee you know.” The CP looked on Barney’s left knee and nodded as he slowly got out of chair.
“You’re lucky to have gotten away with that. I heard that Freeman guy killed about one hundred of our men.”
“Yeah… I heard that too…” The other combine closed the door and Barney hooked up the link to Dr Kleiner’s lab. Kleiner had never called him during his eight months undercover, never. He had called him a few times, but Kleiner never made a call directly to the station, so naturally Barney was a bit worried.
“What’s up doc?” Barney grinned.
“Barney! Thank god! Gordon and Alyx, they never came through! You have to find them! Have they been arrested?” Barney nodded and rushed to a console.
“I’m checking the combine Network now. No arrests coming up. I’m checking for news with the CPs at Nova Prospekt.” Barney read off the screen then turned to Kleiner.
“Report says they both escaped using classified transportation. No further details, they must have ended up somewhere else doc!”
“But where?” The doctor was almost in tears.
“I’ll start combing through the resistance network, they must be somewhere!” He fixed his glasses and was about to close the link when Barney stopped him.
“Wait doc, wait! What if…they ended up in… Xen?”
“No. Impossible.”
“Why?” Barney saw that the scientist grew angry.
“Because.”
“Because… what?”
“No! I can’t have sent my best friend’s daughter and the resistance’s last hope of victory to die on a lonely rock in the borderworld! I won’t accept that answer! I won’t!” Dr Kleiner close his fist and calmed down. He took a deep breath and turned to Barney again.
“I’m… I’m sorry… How soon can you get off your shift? We need to meet with the vortigaunt leaders.”
“I get off in about one hour.”
“Good. I’ll start looking around for Gordon and Alyx and call the leader of the Vortessence resistance. Come directly to my lab won’t you?”
“Sure thing doc!” Barney closed the link.
A ray of sun fell on the tiled floor and caught the snoozing headcrab on the small loft above the crowd. Dr Kleiner, Barney, Gallam-gahach, the leader of the Vortigaunts and his assitant and a Colonel Mavez were standing in the chill room. The morning sun was already casting its weak non-warming rays on them.
“Thankyou for coming.” Dr Kleiner spoke towards the two Xen creatures and the tall woman in full combat gear.
“As you know, there has been no word from Dr Freeman or Miss Vance. I have been checking around all morning, I’ve checked with what’s left of the underground railroad, the remains of Black Mesa East, Black Mesa North, Little New Odessa, New St. Petersburg, the surveillance room at Innsbrückstrasse, I’ve even called the last outpost in Ravenholm, no answer of course. The last anyone saw of them was at the Vortigaunt-base as Gordon left for Nova Prospekt. Since then… nothing.” Isaac lowered his head. Gallam-gahach spoke out;
“We no longer sense the Freeman in our space. He is beyond our reckoning… Beyond the thick veils of the void we see him… A greater challenge is his to solve now and a longer path we must tread instead for him…” Barney snapped at them both.
“What the hell does that mean? Do you know where he is? Do you even know if he’s alive?”
“We see him no longer, he is but a shadow to us. Whether he or the Alyx Vance lives, is a mystery as deep as the void itself.” Kleiner spoke again.
“Which leads us to our next priority. Dr Vance.” The vortigaunts nodded.
“The Vortessence has declared a day of sorrow for The Eli Vance. He has been taken into the Citadel… we see him suffer.” Kleiner shook his head and turned away. He stared into the glaring sun slipping through the boards of the window.
“Without Dr Vance, Dr Mossman or Dr Freeman we stand without a leader. Our entire HQ was annihilated yesterday in the strike against Black Mesa East. The underground railroad is knocked out, there is no way we can move in and out of the city any longer, without the teleporter, Black Mesa East or Dr Freeman, the only trump card we have left is you Barney.” Colonel Mavez finished her speech. Barney looked uncomfortable, shifting his weight from one foot to the other.
“Unless they already suspect me for letting Gordon escape.”
“No no, had they done that, you would have been sent to Nova Prospekt already.” Barney decided not to pursue that topic.
“We need to form a strategy. The Eli Vance is imperative to this struggle, he must be recovered before the combine can get to him. This is all that matters… The shattering of combine power must be achieved or all will be lost to that of what once was… The Free Man will never be forgotten nor forgiven, but his legacy can die and if we can we must prevent it! This is what lies ahead for us…” The vortigaunt went back into silence again, Barney looked at the colonel.
“I agree… We have to get Eli and Mossman back.” Mavez nodded.
“Yes, but how could we enter the citadel? That’s impossible, most Overwatch troops aren’t even allowed in, much less the Civil Protection!”
“I know, I know. Maybe we can fix the teleporter?”
“It’s no use, it’s fried, even if Dr Kleiner could fix it there is still a blocking field around the citadel.”
Dr Kleiner heard the voices drift off, he was still looking out the window. He watched Lamarr chase something in his sleep. A dropship went by, flying low and emitting its loud base-sound. He whispered something. Barney was the only one in the room who caught it.
“What was that doc?” Dr Kleiner turned to the group.
“We have to fight.” He looked down at the floor but raised his head to meet all the eyes staring at him.
“What are you talking about Dr Kleiner?” Isaac’s eyes looked eager, he was getting steamed up.
“Dr Breen has captured Eli and Dr Mossman, he has destroyed the underground railroad and he has presumably captured or… killed Alyx and Gordon. In theory, he has declared his biggest offensive in his war upon the resistance, and as a result, I suggest we strike back!”
“That’s insane!” Colonel Mavez looked at him in disbelief.
“That is an unrealistic proposition…” Gallam-gahach spoke something in his own language to his assistant.
“Rock on, Doc!” Barney grinned at the bald scientist.
“Yes, thankyou Barney! I propose that we, at long last, strike back at the combine! A surprise attack!” Colonel Mavez stepped up.
“Kleiner, that is simply not possible. Our supply lines our cut, we can no longer move in or out of the city easily, we have no supplies to lead an attack, we have poor communication capabilities at best and we’ve lost one tenth of our forces today only! We are in no shape to stage an attack!” Mavez looked upset. She was very irritated by this scientist acting as an amateur tactician! The scientist still looked eager but he was put down by the colonel’s list of restrictions. Barney came to his rescue.
“But it makes sense, Breen thinks he has crippled us…”
“That’s because he has!” Mavez interrupted.
“Yes! But, we can use his belief in his own superiority!” Kleiner was winding up again.
“With Barney working undercover, we can still prepare a covert operation and initiate a surprise attack! If we act quickly!” Kleiner looked to Barney for further backup.
“Yes! Now is not the time to mourn fallen soldiers, it is the time to rise up! And to avenge them!” The colonel looked between the both of them and nodded slowly.
“Alright, but any kind of attack requires considerable supplies, supplies we don’t have!”
“Ahhh, but that’s where Dr Freeman and Alyx left us with a little gift!” Dr Kleiner walked over to a crate and dug around. He fished up a big map which he pinned up on the wall.
“Blueprints of the complex at Nova Prospekt, very very sketchy of course, old information. But, just before she left the combine security monitoring station, she sent me detailed lists of command codes. With them, gaining entrance to any part of the complex should not be hard.”
Kleiner pointed to a part in the lower right corner.
“Here, in the west wing, according to a vortigaunt prisoner, there should be a large ammunition depot.” He smiled at the small crowd who awaited the next part in his show and tell.
“With these security codes, blueprints and the crippling state the complex must be in after Gordon and Alyx’s blow there, taking Nova Prospekt should be easy for a larger dedicated squad.” Mavez shook her head and Barney looked disappointed.
“Bud Doc, we’re gonna need all the soldiers here if this is going to work! We can’t spare enough men!” Kleiner didn’t let this stop him, he had already thought of that.
“I know, it doesn’t matter because our supply lines into City 17 have all been cut. All but one.” He turned to the two Xenomorphs in the room.
“The Vortessence’s supply route is still intact, is it not?” Gallam-gahach stood quiet for a short while before he exclaimed;
“It is.”
“And the Vortigaunt’s base near Nova Prospekt is still there, is it not? How many soldiers do you have there?”
“We have one hundred Vortessence soldiers there and a hundred more to help us!” Gallam-gahach’s assistant answered Kleiner’s question. The men all stared at the vortigaunts.
“This task is ours, and ours alone, we shall complete it and never more shall we look at our own effort in this struggle in shame… Nova Prospekt will be taken in the name of the communion of the Vortessence and the supplies delivered to The City 17 whenever you need!” Gallam-gahach proclaimed ceremonially.
“Wonderful!” Kleiner smiled. Barney turned to him.
“So what’s the plan Doc?”
“I’m not sure. But I have an idea. Barney, when does the 12:35 from City 6 arrive tomorrow?”
“Uhhh let’s see… erm… 10:15.”
“Gallam-gahach, you have until 9:15 to deliver the supplies, can you do it?”
The creature nodded and brought his hands together.
“So be it. We shall fulfil your request, and our destiny… We shall leave at once, to prepare for the push!” They both left the room.
“Yes, please, leave me alone, I need to think now. No, Barney you stay. I need your help. I think I have an idea…”
1: get inspiration to write on my old one
2: My old one turned out to have some horrible plot inconsistencies I don't feel like tackling right now.
Chapter 1: A new format.
”Ready in three… two… one… initiating receivers, target-lock confirmed. Alyx, I’m ready!”
Dr Kleiner pushed all relays to max and made sure the target-lockers were dead on alignment, they were. He didn’t receive a confirmation from Alyx, but she was probably just too busy.
“Alyx, I’m getting a steady stream now, CY base looking good, massless field flux stable. All checks out, see you in a few…” The ensuing explosion shook the room. The stabilization field generator shook in its hinges and Dr Kleiner was knocked out by a lamp swinging down from the roof.
Something was hurting him. Something was quite badly hurting him. Something small. A bug? No, not in his lab. He moved his head and Lamarr drifted into sight, she had dug her dull claws into his leg to wake him up. The venom had created an infection. Easily treatable, but it did give a rather nasty rash on his wound. Lamarr jumped onto his head and for a moment, Isaac lost balance and slammed down on the metal floor again. The headcrab let go and ran around in circles around Dr Kleiner, showing how proud she was of having awoken her master.
“Lamarr? Oh good, you’re alright. Now let’s see here…”
Kleiner started reading the monitors when he remembered.
“Oh my god. Alyx! Gordon!” He threw himself on the comm.
“Alyx! Do you read me? Alyx! Gordon! Come in! Please answer me! Are you there?!” But no-one answered his calls. He looked around. The lab was a mess, small pieces of burning and twisted metal was scattered near the teleport pad. The big stabilization field generator was lying in the middle of the room, damaged beyond repair. Isaac sank together in the corner.
“Oh my god… First Eli… and now this!” He pulled off his glasses and was left alone with his dark feelings of guilt. Well almost alone, Lamarr was still tugging at his trouser leg.
He sat there for a full ten minutes before he flung up, desperately jabbing the controls.
“Where could they have gone to? If they didn’t end up here, where might they be? In the city?” Dr Kleiner looked down on the little headcrab as if she could somehow answer him.
“No, no of course not, had they been in the city, they would have come here, or to Black Mesa East. But where then?” Kleiner felt a chill go down his back.
“Oh no…” He stared at the little creature so gently trying to get him to play with her and merely whispered the three-letter word;
“…Xen…”
“Beep. Beep. Beep. Beep.” The small console bulb lit up and Barney pulled his chair close and checked it. The baton he was fiddling with hit the floor hard and loud.
“What is it?” The other CP asked him.
“Uhmm… 214 on the plaza, but they got units already on the way.
“Good.” Barney nodded slowly, while his mind was already in fifth gear.
“But some of the suspects escaped running down the tracks, better get someone and go after them, I would, but my knee you know.” The CP looked on Barney’s left knee and nodded as he slowly got out of chair.
“You’re lucky to have gotten away with that. I heard that Freeman guy killed about one hundred of our men.”
“Yeah… I heard that too…” The other combine closed the door and Barney hooked up the link to Dr Kleiner’s lab. Kleiner had never called him during his eight months undercover, never. He had called him a few times, but Kleiner never made a call directly to the station, so naturally Barney was a bit worried.
“What’s up doc?” Barney grinned.
“Barney! Thank god! Gordon and Alyx, they never came through! You have to find them! Have they been arrested?” Barney nodded and rushed to a console.
“I’m checking the combine Network now. No arrests coming up. I’m checking for news with the CPs at Nova Prospekt.” Barney read off the screen then turned to Kleiner.
“Report says they both escaped using classified transportation. No further details, they must have ended up somewhere else doc!”
“But where?” The doctor was almost in tears.
“I’ll start combing through the resistance network, they must be somewhere!” He fixed his glasses and was about to close the link when Barney stopped him.
“Wait doc, wait! What if…they ended up in… Xen?”
“No. Impossible.”
“Why?” Barney saw that the scientist grew angry.
“Because.”
“Because… what?”
“No! I can’t have sent my best friend’s daughter and the resistance’s last hope of victory to die on a lonely rock in the borderworld! I won’t accept that answer! I won’t!” Dr Kleiner close his fist and calmed down. He took a deep breath and turned to Barney again.
“I’m… I’m sorry… How soon can you get off your shift? We need to meet with the vortigaunt leaders.”
“I get off in about one hour.”
“Good. I’ll start looking around for Gordon and Alyx and call the leader of the Vortessence resistance. Come directly to my lab won’t you?”
“Sure thing doc!” Barney closed the link.
A ray of sun fell on the tiled floor and caught the snoozing headcrab on the small loft above the crowd. Dr Kleiner, Barney, Gallam-gahach, the leader of the Vortigaunts and his assitant and a Colonel Mavez were standing in the chill room. The morning sun was already casting its weak non-warming rays on them.
“Thankyou for coming.” Dr Kleiner spoke towards the two Xen creatures and the tall woman in full combat gear.
“As you know, there has been no word from Dr Freeman or Miss Vance. I have been checking around all morning, I’ve checked with what’s left of the underground railroad, the remains of Black Mesa East, Black Mesa North, Little New Odessa, New St. Petersburg, the surveillance room at Innsbrückstrasse, I’ve even called the last outpost in Ravenholm, no answer of course. The last anyone saw of them was at the Vortigaunt-base as Gordon left for Nova Prospekt. Since then… nothing.” Isaac lowered his head. Gallam-gahach spoke out;
“We no longer sense the Freeman in our space. He is beyond our reckoning… Beyond the thick veils of the void we see him… A greater challenge is his to solve now and a longer path we must tread instead for him…” Barney snapped at them both.
“What the hell does that mean? Do you know where he is? Do you even know if he’s alive?”
“We see him no longer, he is but a shadow to us. Whether he or the Alyx Vance lives, is a mystery as deep as the void itself.” Kleiner spoke again.
“Which leads us to our next priority. Dr Vance.” The vortigaunts nodded.
“The Vortessence has declared a day of sorrow for The Eli Vance. He has been taken into the Citadel… we see him suffer.” Kleiner shook his head and turned away. He stared into the glaring sun slipping through the boards of the window.
“Without Dr Vance, Dr Mossman or Dr Freeman we stand without a leader. Our entire HQ was annihilated yesterday in the strike against Black Mesa East. The underground railroad is knocked out, there is no way we can move in and out of the city any longer, without the teleporter, Black Mesa East or Dr Freeman, the only trump card we have left is you Barney.” Colonel Mavez finished her speech. Barney looked uncomfortable, shifting his weight from one foot to the other.
“Unless they already suspect me for letting Gordon escape.”
“No no, had they done that, you would have been sent to Nova Prospekt already.” Barney decided not to pursue that topic.
“We need to form a strategy. The Eli Vance is imperative to this struggle, he must be recovered before the combine can get to him. This is all that matters… The shattering of combine power must be achieved or all will be lost to that of what once was… The Free Man will never be forgotten nor forgiven, but his legacy can die and if we can we must prevent it! This is what lies ahead for us…” The vortigaunt went back into silence again, Barney looked at the colonel.
“I agree… We have to get Eli and Mossman back.” Mavez nodded.
“Yes, but how could we enter the citadel? That’s impossible, most Overwatch troops aren’t even allowed in, much less the Civil Protection!”
“I know, I know. Maybe we can fix the teleporter?”
“It’s no use, it’s fried, even if Dr Kleiner could fix it there is still a blocking field around the citadel.”
Dr Kleiner heard the voices drift off, he was still looking out the window. He watched Lamarr chase something in his sleep. A dropship went by, flying low and emitting its loud base-sound. He whispered something. Barney was the only one in the room who caught it.
“What was that doc?” Dr Kleiner turned to the group.
“We have to fight.” He looked down at the floor but raised his head to meet all the eyes staring at him.
“What are you talking about Dr Kleiner?” Isaac’s eyes looked eager, he was getting steamed up.
“Dr Breen has captured Eli and Dr Mossman, he has destroyed the underground railroad and he has presumably captured or… killed Alyx and Gordon. In theory, he has declared his biggest offensive in his war upon the resistance, and as a result, I suggest we strike back!”
“That’s insane!” Colonel Mavez looked at him in disbelief.
“That is an unrealistic proposition…” Gallam-gahach spoke something in his own language to his assistant.
“Rock on, Doc!” Barney grinned at the bald scientist.
“Yes, thankyou Barney! I propose that we, at long last, strike back at the combine! A surprise attack!” Colonel Mavez stepped up.
“Kleiner, that is simply not possible. Our supply lines our cut, we can no longer move in or out of the city easily, we have no supplies to lead an attack, we have poor communication capabilities at best and we’ve lost one tenth of our forces today only! We are in no shape to stage an attack!” Mavez looked upset. She was very irritated by this scientist acting as an amateur tactician! The scientist still looked eager but he was put down by the colonel’s list of restrictions. Barney came to his rescue.
“But it makes sense, Breen thinks he has crippled us…”
“That’s because he has!” Mavez interrupted.
“Yes! But, we can use his belief in his own superiority!” Kleiner was winding up again.
“With Barney working undercover, we can still prepare a covert operation and initiate a surprise attack! If we act quickly!” Kleiner looked to Barney for further backup.
“Yes! Now is not the time to mourn fallen soldiers, it is the time to rise up! And to avenge them!” The colonel looked between the both of them and nodded slowly.
“Alright, but any kind of attack requires considerable supplies, supplies we don’t have!”
“Ahhh, but that’s where Dr Freeman and Alyx left us with a little gift!” Dr Kleiner walked over to a crate and dug around. He fished up a big map which he pinned up on the wall.
“Blueprints of the complex at Nova Prospekt, very very sketchy of course, old information. But, just before she left the combine security monitoring station, she sent me detailed lists of command codes. With them, gaining entrance to any part of the complex should not be hard.”
Kleiner pointed to a part in the lower right corner.
“Here, in the west wing, according to a vortigaunt prisoner, there should be a large ammunition depot.” He smiled at the small crowd who awaited the next part in his show and tell.
“With these security codes, blueprints and the crippling state the complex must be in after Gordon and Alyx’s blow there, taking Nova Prospekt should be easy for a larger dedicated squad.” Mavez shook her head and Barney looked disappointed.
“Bud Doc, we’re gonna need all the soldiers here if this is going to work! We can’t spare enough men!” Kleiner didn’t let this stop him, he had already thought of that.
“I know, it doesn’t matter because our supply lines into City 17 have all been cut. All but one.” He turned to the two Xenomorphs in the room.
“The Vortessence’s supply route is still intact, is it not?” Gallam-gahach stood quiet for a short while before he exclaimed;
“It is.”
“And the Vortigaunt’s base near Nova Prospekt is still there, is it not? How many soldiers do you have there?”
“We have one hundred Vortessence soldiers there and a hundred more to help us!” Gallam-gahach’s assistant answered Kleiner’s question. The men all stared at the vortigaunts.
“This task is ours, and ours alone, we shall complete it and never more shall we look at our own effort in this struggle in shame… Nova Prospekt will be taken in the name of the communion of the Vortessence and the supplies delivered to The City 17 whenever you need!” Gallam-gahach proclaimed ceremonially.
“Wonderful!” Kleiner smiled. Barney turned to him.
“So what’s the plan Doc?”
“I’m not sure. But I have an idea. Barney, when does the 12:35 from City 6 arrive tomorrow?”
“Uhhh let’s see… erm… 10:15.”
“Gallam-gahach, you have until 9:15 to deliver the supplies, can you do it?”
The creature nodded and brought his hands together.
“So be it. We shall fulfil your request, and our destiny… We shall leave at once, to prepare for the push!” They both left the room.
“Yes, please, leave me alone, I need to think now. No, Barney you stay. I need your help. I think I have an idea…”