Heavy Combine

[SnowBall]

Back again with annother drawing. Did this one in about 30 minutes. I used the Heavy Combine concept art that spitcodfry found for us. Tell me what you think!

 

[Ankster]

everything except the weapon is really good!

 

[essex]

Also his arms look a little bunched up and his face looks kinda strange. Good work though. I guess you like that pose.

 

[Saltpeter]

Looks very nice indeed.

 

[SnowBall]

Originally posted by essex
Also his arms look a little bunched up and his face looks kinda strange. Good work though. I guess you like that pose.

Might wanna look at the concept art.

 

[Nostradamus]

the way his right hand is, it loos like he's got it turned around or sumthing
the gun is just so damnsmall, that it looks idiotic... make it bigger..n omatter what the concept art says... i would anyway

but ovderall a good drawing job... make more difference in the linewidth, to make it more enjoyable to looks at...more shadows.

 

[CrazyHarij]

The whole figure itself is too flat. His head lacks detail. His weapon is not following the perspective of his body, and it's got different perspective on the different lines, the magazine is too small. the right arm is too flat, too short and doesnt look connected to his hand, the left hand looks plain weird, his arms are too short, the right leg looks off.

 

[SnowBall]

Originally posted by CrazyHarij
The whole figure itself is too flat. His head lacks detail. His weapon is not following the perspective of his body, and it's got different perspective on the different lines, the magazine is too small. the right arm is too flat, too short and doesnt look connected to his hand, the left hand looks plain weird, his arms are too short, the right leg looks off.

Answer to about half of those is its not shaded. The mag isnt too small, you might wanna look at pics of an oicw b4 you crit on one.

 

[CrazyHarij]

When i meant it's flat, i was referring to the lack of perspective in the drawing, especially the arms, head and the right leg. Shading is a way to 'fake' depth in a drawing, if it's not perspectivated.

And the mag IS too small. In fact, the whole weapon is too small compared to the rest of the drawing.

"Nice attempt, though"

 

[Tr0n]

Yea the wep is a little small.I seen pictures of full-sized adults where the whole stock is as big as there shoulder.

 

[SnowBall]

Originally posted by CrazyHarij
When i meant it's flat, i was referring to the lack of perspective in the drawing, especially the arms, head and the right leg. Shading is a way to 'fake' depth in a drawing, if it's not perspectivated.

And the mag IS too small. In fact, the whole weapon is too small compared to the rest of the drawing.

"Nice attempt, though"

I'll give you that

 

[CrazyHarij]

Anyhow i like the detail and texturing on his suit!

 

[SnowBall]

I really self taught myself how to draw (never had a real art class in my life) so, I still have troubles with porportions and perspective sometimes.