Here She is..SchoolGirl..WIP 85% Done..!

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Finaly getting somewhere with this character Im making. Still plenty to do yet, and Im not looking forward to rigging her, hate doing that. Got to be done though..Its all the small things that seem to take ages when modeling something as detailed as this.
My plan is to have her as one of the 1st mod made characters available for all to enjoy and do with as you see fit.. I cant wait to see her running around with a double barrel shotgun, that should send her skirt flying hehe.. Sorry for the lack of a shirt on her as I havent done that yet, at least shes clothed..By the end of the modeling process, I should have about 5 outfits for quick swapping around and re-exporting.
Hope you all dont drool to much on your keyboards..

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Very nice work. The model has a good sense of form and flow, but I do have something to point out. The first thing I noticed was how unusually small the hands looked. It looks to me like the fingers are too short. The only other thing bugging me is the polycount. I don't see 7500 triangles in that wireframe shot. Do you have a hidden clone of it somewhere in the scene or something?

Anyway, great work all around.
 
Yeah, dont see all those polys either...
Anyway, the boobs dude! To small! I mean, if we gonna play with her (hehe ;)), she might as well be neat to look at :)
 
dunno how that has 7000 triangles. Because its so basic. Apart from the pony tails been to small and the hair been flat. Then it looks prity good. I need to make the forhead bigger. A Lot bigger. Like 2 times as big. Look at some female faces to get the prep correct. All together its a sicked model. Nice work.
 
hehe it kinda looks like a man in school girls cloths
 
You cant see the internal poly's as I have hidden them in patch options..Believe me its 7500..Three thousand are for the head alone..!
With regard to the hands being small.. ermm no.. Its the perspective pulled out making them appear small..And no again, the forehead does not need to be 2 times a big lol..please..And the ponytails are MEANT to be that size as are the breast's, not the size you think or want them to be, sheesh, all comments bar one from obvious Non-modelers..bah.. Please learn the subject before comenting on it..There are going to be a hell of a lot of HL1 modelers who are going to have a nightmare time learning to model a HL2 character..have fun.....
 
nice modelling and texturing, only thing is it scares me
/me hides
 
yes, the forehead does need to be bigger. if her hair line were ani lower, he eyebrows wud merge with her hair. seriously. i think that the head is a bit big, her neck is like 2/3 of he shoulder width, and a tad too long. very good so far tho, the textures on the knees r good. needs a little more shape around the shoulders, and maybe a bit of wrok on the arms, but very good shape. only problem is, y duz she hav a floral bra on if shes a school girl ? and is she sposed to be a sexy joking school girl, or a real schoolgirl. and wheres her top gone !
 
needs more breastage, needs more forheadage, needs less polys, needs more ass
 
Originally posted by Xtasy0
needs more breastage, needs more forheadage, needs less polys, needs more ass
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doesnt need more breastage, doesnt need more bum...

looks good the face's shape is a bit masculine, but other wise pretty good
 
As everyone has already stated....BOOBS NEED TO BE BIGGER :LOL:
 
i'd change the complete hair-cut. looks, eeerr, weird :afro:

and wtf do you need a schoolgirl for in hl2? :dozey: looks good anyway!
 
Great textures!
I wonder about the polys too... the body makes very efficient use of quads, she looks like she should be around 4k triangles.
But good work anyway... if you have any tips on how you made the excellent skin textures, let us know :D I'm wondering whether I should texture or not yet, because if I use normal mapping I won't want to include shading in my diffuse layer, but if I don't use normal mapping, it will look stupid without diffuse shading.

EDIT: Boobs do not need to be bigger. Maybe he's trying to make a girl that looks REAL, not a frickin silicone cartoon.
But I agree that the hair is a little strange. That's one of those things that's hard to get right, I always rotoscope pictures for it.
 
sheesh, all comments bar one from obvious Non-modelers..bah.. Please learn the subject before comenting on it..There are going to be a hell of a lot of HL1 modelers who are going to have a nightmare time learning to model a HL2 character..have fun.....
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Looks like someone doesn't handle criticism very well. A couple of people offer some assistance in what they see and you get extremely defensive. I guess we just wouldn't understand since we're all obviously not modelers. :rolleyes:

Maybe I just took it the wrong way, but that sounded very rude.
 
It did sound rude, and I am a modeler. I've even taken a 2 year class in animation, so unf!
 
sure as hell doesent seem like a school girl to me, the head scares the crap out of me.
 
In my own defense I will release a completed skinned and posed version in the next few days.. As my original thread stated this is wip 85% done..I agree with some of you that certain features need addressing so Ill get right to it..

And yes Spin..I do get defensive esspecially as its not helpful for my motivation to offer this model to anybody by looking at coments from people who cant even tell that its a patch model and post silly comments..Its obvious to me as a comercial modeler that there will be hardly anybody at the offset who will be spending huge amounts of their spare time making such difficult and time consuming models.. let alone possesing the abilty to make them..Lots of people are going to get a horrifying shock when they realise what is involved..Amateur made models will stand out a mile in the new engine, yes guns and props are so easy, but characters that posses 40 or so facial muscles, complex skinning, together with bump, specular,normal and difuse maps and a whole host of other bit and bobs, are a totaly different story..!!

Slap... Defensive Middle-aged Modeler....
 
good modeling, but you should take a look at some anatomy while doing it :)
 
You shouldn't need to get defensive. It's not like we're cutting down the model, we're just looking at it from an objective point of view and offering what we can see so you can make it better. I thought that was the entire point of this forum.

Originally posted by crabcakes66
needs larger breasts :p
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:rolleyes:
 
Originally posted by Anwar
more boobs... I agree
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why, do you really think a girl of the age depicted (about 12-13) would have bigger breasts, Nom, i dnt think so, i think it is a good model in that department, dnt wreck it by putting ballons onto her chest....
 
it looks strange

I think the chest is too small a tiny bit… maybe too low on the body also.

The waste seems a bit skinny compared to the chest and hips girls don’t have a body like that.

Hair too low.

I don’t know maybe it will look different with a shirt textured on instead of a bra.

Shame on her mom for letting her dress like that!


http://a761.g.akamaitech.net/7/761/...images/Seasonal/T2.C1.327.090203.Children.jpg

^ real example
Just look at their waste where on the body it begins to get more narrow.. I think that will help out your character a lot.
 
Tone the head down, and more boobs.
 
when i said whe needs larger breasts i was serious...it doesnt look right.

the waist, hips and butt look to mature to not have larger breasts......
 
I read somewhere it's supposed to be a 18-19 year old schoolgirl.
So yea, more chest would be good. :)
 
Slightly more boobs. Doesn't look 18 - 19 years old, more like 14, but a nicely done model.
 
I love this model! I think the proportions are fine, nothing wrong with small breasts for a schoolgirl. I can't wait to see the finished version!

Are you also going to be making a schoolboy model? I very much hope so :)
 
Don't make fun of the homosexual weirdos on this forum...

StoneEdit: *......AT ALL IT IS NOT TOLLERATED WITHIN THESE FORUMS*
 
Originally posted by x84D80Yx
your....
GHEY GHEY GHEY GHEY GHEY GHEY GHEY :bounce:
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LOL I'm a woman.

hehe. Not all the weirdos using this forum are male, you know ;) Or maybe it is the males that are the weirdos - since when is asking a question about a model taken as an indication of your sexual preference?

I asked about schoolboy models because I'm designing a mod that will require schoolkids, both male and female.
 
They want something like this I guess...hehehe.It's rendered model from NVidia so You can do sych a thing on Hl2...THERE"S SOME KIND OF NUDITY ON THIS PIC SO WATCH OUT,IF U'LL DECIDE TO LOOK AT THIS...
 

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why modeled that snake? she only has 1/2 a foot but its so well done. Looks sick.
 
Dude seriously your girl model is wrongly proportioned and looks like a damn minor, like a 13 year old girl.

Sorry to be rude but here is a much nicer reference to base your model:eek:

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And this ones only 5000 triangles aswell.
 
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