Hmmm I typed this up and I dont really know why

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(Strange musical chimes begin to play and the screen starts to blure)

The last time I saw Jupiter, I was in the middle of a blood war with the Zaganare.

(The Music stops and the screen cleares up)

An Image of Jupiter is suddenly displayed with a star screen behind the planet.

jupiter.jpg


A small vallartar ship is is now displayed with Jupiter in the background, the screen zooms in on the fighter and now you only seen the cockpit.

fighter!.GIF


(You seen through the transparentstill canopy)
A man is slowly waking up from a month long sleep, He checks the readouts on the control board only to find that he has drifted on course and that he is now in the middle of Zaganare territory.

Suddenly the man and you hear a loud beeping soud comming from his earphone speaker that is inside of his helmet.

The man looks at the control boards radar screen to see three small blips moving toward a small icon that represents the vaalartar fighter.

The man flipps severial switches and takes hold of the control wheel and switches the fighter navagation systems to manual and and powers up his sublight laser cannons and shields.

The fighters targeting controlls starts scanning the incomming blips and slowly produces and image on the controls boards target lock screens.

(The screen now shows a woman who is in the middle of cleaning house)

june%20cleaver%202.jpg




(The screen now shows a sign that says something about technical difficulties)

(The screen now shows three Zaganare protector class fighters.

sa43.jpg



I dont know what happens next or why I had the sudden impulse to type this up. Maybe I need to stop reading SiFi books or something.

Anyone want to try to tell me why i typed this up or what it means. Or to just tell me what i spelled wrong.
 
Flips, several, controls, coming... you spelled all those wrong! AHHHHHH!
 
go get a cam corder and some movie editing software and have yourself a blast
 
?????????????? 2001?????

What???????

Hey i typed that wile i was in a daze or something.

What am I taking what from??? the pics?? I just searced google for them and pics the ones that felt right.

Maybe the rest will come later.
 
that was quite mysterious. sounds like it could be from Solaris.

best thing: if you're gonna carry on with it, use as little dialogue as possible. if you plan on somehow making this into a film (eg. flash), then you'll notice that most things will be quite clearly demonstrated through pictures. i'm sure you can find someone on these boards profficient enough in flash to help you out. might be a good idea to team up. TheNerdNews productions presents....

to the other complaining about his use of pictures: it's called sourcing & referencing. a good way to get your ideas accross.

so when do we get some more? interesting seeing how someone else responds to spontaneous creativity.
 
O ok the Jupiter part. If I changed it to mars you would have said something about doom or red planet.

The best I can remember 2001 did not have a fighter craft in it and Jupiter being part of an enemy House/Impire. (Im not sure with)


I know some people that are very good at flash, but at the moment I want to finnish the story. Or maybe figure out what the start of it is.

I dont know but it soulds kinda cool to me and im the one who wrote it.
 
yeah go for it. i reckon what you have right now makes a great intro. sets the scene, introduces the protagonist, puts him in a situation...perfect.
 
Maybe its a scene out of a movie or seomthing.

It reminds me of John Titor. Btw, I think hes legit, I mean, everything is sort going to hell atm. FOr the US that is.
 
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