That's so god damn stiff and boring. He's standing up, there's no gunfire, no bullet impacts, nothing. Just a soldier standing up screaming next to some soldiers sitting down.
It's a wip & its a teaser, we blurred the other parts that arent finished.. actually there is a fight going on behind that screaming guy. This is just the right part of the original image
I think it looks really good, but whatever you did to that background spoils it, as a teaser I'd not have done that blur to it, i'd have just left it how it was, or come up with some other standin background.