RakuraiTenjin
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I just got laid off yesterday. I already have a few leads and I expect to be employed again fairly soon because I was apparantly the bomb at my work. didnt really realize it till the flurry of goodbye emails lamenting them 'letting the wrong people go.' I got a lot of support from executives there but I need a clean resume to present to these HR's from other companies.
Please take a look at this and correct any grammar or unclear parts. It was thrown together fairly quickly but I need to submit it to several places before 3 of the position openings close on 8-30-10. Be brutal, I need this to be clear and eye catching to stand out among a throng of thousands of retards' resumes.
Also if anyone knows of a fairly accurate typing test website for 10 key and alphanumeric typing tests point me to it. Dont say "google it" because google led me to a few that are not really accurate or test truly how an employer does. I need an accurate number for the resume to match what I test at.
Please take a look at this and correct any grammar or unclear parts. It was thrown together fairly quickly but I need to submit it to several places before 3 of the position openings close on 8-30-10. Be brutal, I need this to be clear and eye catching to stand out among a throng of thousands of retards' resumes.
Also if anyone knows of a fairly accurate typing test website for 10 key and alphanumeric typing tests point me to it. Dont say "google it" because google led me to a few that are not really accurate or test truly how an employer does. I need an accurate number for the resume to match what I test at.
Cover Letter said:To Whom It May Concern:
I am very interested in the Administrative Coordinator position at your Phoenix location. I have administrative experience in the construction field, and extensive coordinating and dispatching experience from my work with the ~~~~ “~~~~~” trades. As a young worker pursuing my degree in the administrative field, I feel that I would be a valuable asset to your team.
During my three years with ~~~~, I climbed from a fresh out of high school data entry clerk to a full-fledged construction coordinator. I was responsible for maintaining the production schedule of our concrete department for the entire Arizona region, as well as ensuring all materials and vendors arrived to the jobs on time and under budget. Extensive networking with field and administrative personnel from the concrete department and other trades, such as framers and plumbers, was necessary to meet the daily needs of the job. Research and coordination, resource planning, and accurate communication were an integral part of this position. The open position ~~~ has available has really “jumped out” at me as it seems as if it were tailored specifically for my skills and abilities.
Home builders are going through a very turbulent time, and I am looking for a stable company with which to continue a long and successful administrative career. ~~~ is the perfect match, and I have a valuable skill set to contribute.
Please do not hesitate to contact any of my references. I have extensive contacts from my former employment and can provide any additional contacts or information that you may require.
Thank you very much for your time,
RAK
Resume said:RAKURAI TENJIN
123 FAKE STREET
~~~~, AZ 99999
Phone: 999-999-9999
E-mail: [email protected]
Summary
Experienced coordinator with a knack for problem solving. Successful background in driving process improvements and waste reduction. Ability to adapt and manage time in order to meet deadlines and individual project requirements. Positive attitude with a workhorse mentality.
Education
High School Diploma
~~ High School, ~~~~, Arizona
2003 – 2007
Experience
Construction Coordinator
|||||, LLC
February 2009 – Present
• Created daily work schedules based on production quotas for concrete slab pours and inspections for the Arizona region. Researched future production quotas and requirements in order to ensure proper manpower, vendors, and material would be available at that time.
• Networked with field superintendents via Nextel radio, phone, and email to ensure work and inspections were completed on schedule. Gathered and verified accuracy of information from the field about completed jobs in order to create daily work schedules.
• Placed orders and provided logistics support for material shipping and transfer- aggregate for pickup by haulers and concrete from batch plants to jobsites. This work required the use of Microsoft Word, Excel, Access, Oracle Purchase Orders, and networking skill.
• Helped to keep projects within budget by tracking all materials movement and utilization. Created accurate reports of material, tool, and supply usage for operations managers.
• Remained on call via Blackberry and radio to receive and dispatch materials orders for daily concrete pours from job superintendants. This is a high intensity, fast paced aspect of concrete pouring with time management being essential due to dealing with perishable materials.
• Performed accurate data entry of job information into databases for all termite pre-treatments performed on new homes as required and audited by Arizona law. Progressed job information in Oracle Job Movement and Microsoft Access Databases. Created an accurate history file and maintained a filing system of all treatments as required by Arizona law.
• Voice recorded the next day's daily work schedule and periodic safety reminders for field employees on a recorded dispatch phone line.
Admin I
||||, LLC
January 2008 – February 2009
• Performed payroll and supply usage data entry for construction coordinators.
• Assisted with logistics and schedule creation, scanned and distributed schedules to personnel.
Realtor’s Assistant
|||||, Realtor
July 2007 – November 2007
• Answered phones, took detailed messages, scheduled appointments.
Achievements
• Reduced waste at ~~~~ by helping to implement improved processes for material pickup by subcontractors.
• Reduced downtime and created a more ‘even flow’ of production at ~~~ by creating a new process for schedule creation and manpower research.
• Awarded certificate of appreciation for service “Above and Beyond” from ~~~~ Concrete Department.
• Awarded Employee of the Month for April 2010 at ~~~~.
• Recognized as a Super Scholar for “Exceeding” in all three AIMS tests (A.R.S. 15-701.01)
Computer Skills
• Proficient with Microsoft Office Suite.
• Ability to use network resources and external data in order to research and improve upon daily tasks.
• Keyboard Typing Skills – 70+ WPM, Ten Key 10,000+ KSPH