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I had to do a short story for school, so i thought to myself "What has an epic and compelling storyline that i could use as the back bone for mine?...DUH, Half Life!" It connects the ending of portal to hl2 ep3.I need some ppl to critique or slam my work. I had to tone it down for school too, but here it is in installments.
It felt good. It felt good to be out of that stuffy base. It felt good to have the sun illuminate our route and not florescent light. But the best part was the wind in my hair. I had never felt the cool gentleness that was the summer breeze. Heck, it felt great. The only downside to this was imminent danger. The trade off for being outside the two foot concrete walled base was safety. I wouldn?t have picked this mild comfort over the dank base had I known what was going to happen.
The car bounced along, causing its passengers severe nausea. Well, car is not exactly the right word; large hunk of scrap metal made to be used as a car was a better description. As I drove our pile of junk along, the two men in the back seat, Buck and Steve, were arguing over a map. "I'm telling you it was a left back there." Yelled Steve over the engine's deafening noise. "How was I supposed to tell, this area's geography has been completely changed ever since the invasion." Retorted Buck, loudly. "There was an arrow pointing right!" Yelled Steve. "Yeah and we went right!" Shouted Buck now frustrated at Steve. This time Steve practically screamed "Agh! Remember the Vort' said to go left at the arrow pointing right!?" "Oh, yeah." Said Buck meekly. "WHAT? I can't hear you." Steve yelled, though it was obvious that he could because he had a wide grin on his face. "Will you two shut up already? Jeez, you're like an old married cou-." "Look!" Yelled both men simultaneously. As I turned to face forward a bush off the trail to the left of the car exploded as an eight foot tall robotic looking tripod leapt out of the brush. "Oh no," I whimpered, "it's a hunter!" I swerved to avoid the mechanical beast, but we began to fish-tale. We would've hit it, but at the last second I regained control. The jalopy's tail end smashed into the monster's legs, knocking them out from under it and sending its box like head into the cold, hard earth. Buck and Steve howled with joy. But their elation was cut short as three more of the robots jumped out of what was left of the bush and followed in a fast and steady gallop, as I knew would happen. I tried to get the cars turbo going, but it wouldn't respond. "Looks like we're going to have to the old fashioned way boys" I yelled. At this moment Buck and Steve's training kicked in as they pulled out their submachine guns and began to fire at the box that was the robot's processing core. This could've proved successful, had every shot hit, but the car's unstable movement was enough to put more than a few bullets off their intended course. "Damn this car!" Yelled Buck. A sound like a mouse being snatched by a hawk pierced the air as a small blue light in the lower part of the front robot's box lit. "Get down! It's priming its rounds!" I shrieked, as a hail of dart like rounds impacted the car's outer frame. "Well that was a whole lotta' nothin'," Said Buck, as he yanked a small dart out of the roll bar above his head, "hey, why is it shaking?" "Get rid of it and get down!" I screamed as all the darts began to shake, and then explode. Buck was hysterical, "That thing almost got me!" He whispered almost at tears. Not understanding how upset Buck was, Steve added "Yeah, sure is a good thing we got you with us, Jess." With that comment Steve unleashed a hail of gunfire upon the lead hunter. Fortunately, this time more than half of the nine millimeter rounds impacted upon the hunter?s box head, and at least three hit its glass eye. The hunter fell!
It felt good. It felt good to be out of that stuffy base. It felt good to have the sun illuminate our route and not florescent light. But the best part was the wind in my hair. I had never felt the cool gentleness that was the summer breeze. Heck, it felt great. The only downside to this was imminent danger. The trade off for being outside the two foot concrete walled base was safety. I wouldn?t have picked this mild comfort over the dank base had I known what was going to happen.
The car bounced along, causing its passengers severe nausea. Well, car is not exactly the right word; large hunk of scrap metal made to be used as a car was a better description. As I drove our pile of junk along, the two men in the back seat, Buck and Steve, were arguing over a map. "I'm telling you it was a left back there." Yelled Steve over the engine's deafening noise. "How was I supposed to tell, this area's geography has been completely changed ever since the invasion." Retorted Buck, loudly. "There was an arrow pointing right!" Yelled Steve. "Yeah and we went right!" Shouted Buck now frustrated at Steve. This time Steve practically screamed "Agh! Remember the Vort' said to go left at the arrow pointing right!?" "Oh, yeah." Said Buck meekly. "WHAT? I can't hear you." Steve yelled, though it was obvious that he could because he had a wide grin on his face. "Will you two shut up already? Jeez, you're like an old married cou-." "Look!" Yelled both men simultaneously. As I turned to face forward a bush off the trail to the left of the car exploded as an eight foot tall robotic looking tripod leapt out of the brush. "Oh no," I whimpered, "it's a hunter!" I swerved to avoid the mechanical beast, but we began to fish-tale. We would've hit it, but at the last second I regained control. The jalopy's tail end smashed into the monster's legs, knocking them out from under it and sending its box like head into the cold, hard earth. Buck and Steve howled with joy. But their elation was cut short as three more of the robots jumped out of what was left of the bush and followed in a fast and steady gallop, as I knew would happen. I tried to get the cars turbo going, but it wouldn't respond. "Looks like we're going to have to the old fashioned way boys" I yelled. At this moment Buck and Steve's training kicked in as they pulled out their submachine guns and began to fire at the box that was the robot's processing core. This could've proved successful, had every shot hit, but the car's unstable movement was enough to put more than a few bullets off their intended course. "Damn this car!" Yelled Buck. A sound like a mouse being snatched by a hawk pierced the air as a small blue light in the lower part of the front robot's box lit. "Get down! It's priming its rounds!" I shrieked, as a hail of dart like rounds impacted the car's outer frame. "Well that was a whole lotta' nothin'," Said Buck, as he yanked a small dart out of the roll bar above his head, "hey, why is it shaking?" "Get rid of it and get down!" I screamed as all the darts began to shake, and then explode. Buck was hysterical, "That thing almost got me!" He whispered almost at tears. Not understanding how upset Buck was, Steve added "Yeah, sure is a good thing we got you with us, Jess." With that comment Steve unleashed a hail of gunfire upon the lead hunter. Fortunately, this time more than half of the nine millimeter rounds impacted upon the hunter?s box head, and at least three hit its glass eye. The hunter fell!