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This is based on the half life stories, obviously. This is my second attempt at a story on this site. I fixed some things with my writing, (including paragraphs.) Enjoy!
Keith silently sneaked from corner to corner, trying to avoid being seen. An officer down the hall was eating a sandwich. Keith slowly reached for his knife. He inched a few yards closer to the officer. In an instant, he kicked his back.
The officer fell on the floor, moaning in pain. Keith, getting ready to slit his throat, suddenly heard two quiet beeps. The officer smiled faintly and said, “With the press of a button.”
The officer’s smile faded, and his eyes closed. He was dead.
“It came from here!” Keith heard a voice behind him, followed by footsteps. He ran down the vacant hall until he saw a door. The door opened slowly before Keith could touch it.
A man stood in the doorway. “A Rebel,” He spat. “Don’t you know how many of you we’ve killed already?” He asked Keith. Keith sprinted farther down the hall before he could finish.
Keith’s memory appeared in his mind. His wife. His kids. His father. His father had all perished fighting for freedom. Keith loved his father. He did not know if his wife or children were still alive. He set out a week ago, longing to find them.
Keith realized he had run into a dead end. There were no doors to enter. Keith was doomed.
“Over here!” Called a female voice from outside of a window. “Quick, climb out!” She rushed. The window was closed. Keith tried to open it.
“It won’t open,” Keith said calmly, as if he was in no hurry at all. “Break it!” Yelled the woman. “Move back, please,” Keith gestured. The woman moved back a yard, trying her best not to fall off of the seventh floor.
Keith kicked the glass. The glass broke, cutting Keith’s bare foot. He didn’t seem to notice. They crawled across the border, while the Combine failed miserably at shooting them from the inside.
“Oh no!” The woman’s foot slipped off the building. She fell a good 4 feet from her head until Keith grabbed her hand. The woman, still hanging was breathing hard, and said, “Help.”
Keith pulled her up without a struggle. “Thanks,” said the woman. “My name is Alaina, by the way,” She said. “Keith,” Said Keith. He continued on across the building.
“Can you climb?” Asked Keith. “Depends,” said Alaina. Keith stood on two feet, and reached for the window above him. “You can’t reach that,” Questioned Alaina. He ignored the comment. Keith was six feet and three inches tall. He was very athletic from running, and fighting the Combine.
Keith easily lifted himself up onto the ledge. Alaina sat watching in amazement. He held out his hand for Alaina. “Really?” Alaina said, frightened of falling. Keith stretched out his hand more, gesturing for her to hurry.
He lifted her up, and she thanked him. They continued this until they reached the roof of the tall building. Alaina sat down, almost out of breath. Keith stood tall, looking out at the evening sky, and the city within it.
“Now what?” Asked Alaina. Keith reached into his cotton vest pocket. He took out a small device, and pushed a button. “Get down,” said Keith. Alaina lied flat on her chest. The button made the same two beeps that the Combine officer’s made. He must have swiped it on his way.
Before too long, a helicopter arrived at the roof. It hovered next to them. One officer was in the chopper. Keith said, “Thanks, officer!” The officer quickly reached for his gun, but not in time for Keith to stab him in the heart.
Keith threw the officer off of the helicopter. “Come,” he said. Alaina got up and ran to the chopper. They both boarded it, Keith piloting it. “Where are we going?” Asked Alaina. “Home,” said Keith.
The helicopter was flying east in seconds. Alaina noticed a sticky note on the window that read, ‘Note to self: Get fuel soon!!!’
Keith silently sneaked from corner to corner, trying to avoid being seen. An officer down the hall was eating a sandwich. Keith slowly reached for his knife. He inched a few yards closer to the officer. In an instant, he kicked his back.
The officer fell on the floor, moaning in pain. Keith, getting ready to slit his throat, suddenly heard two quiet beeps. The officer smiled faintly and said, “With the press of a button.”
The officer’s smile faded, and his eyes closed. He was dead.
“It came from here!” Keith heard a voice behind him, followed by footsteps. He ran down the vacant hall until he saw a door. The door opened slowly before Keith could touch it.
A man stood in the doorway. “A Rebel,” He spat. “Don’t you know how many of you we’ve killed already?” He asked Keith. Keith sprinted farther down the hall before he could finish.
Keith’s memory appeared in his mind. His wife. His kids. His father. His father had all perished fighting for freedom. Keith loved his father. He did not know if his wife or children were still alive. He set out a week ago, longing to find them.
Keith realized he had run into a dead end. There were no doors to enter. Keith was doomed.
“Over here!” Called a female voice from outside of a window. “Quick, climb out!” She rushed. The window was closed. Keith tried to open it.
“It won’t open,” Keith said calmly, as if he was in no hurry at all. “Break it!” Yelled the woman. “Move back, please,” Keith gestured. The woman moved back a yard, trying her best not to fall off of the seventh floor.
Keith kicked the glass. The glass broke, cutting Keith’s bare foot. He didn’t seem to notice. They crawled across the border, while the Combine failed miserably at shooting them from the inside.
“Oh no!” The woman’s foot slipped off the building. She fell a good 4 feet from her head until Keith grabbed her hand. The woman, still hanging was breathing hard, and said, “Help.”
Keith pulled her up without a struggle. “Thanks,” said the woman. “My name is Alaina, by the way,” She said. “Keith,” Said Keith. He continued on across the building.
“Can you climb?” Asked Keith. “Depends,” said Alaina. Keith stood on two feet, and reached for the window above him. “You can’t reach that,” Questioned Alaina. He ignored the comment. Keith was six feet and three inches tall. He was very athletic from running, and fighting the Combine.
Keith easily lifted himself up onto the ledge. Alaina sat watching in amazement. He held out his hand for Alaina. “Really?” Alaina said, frightened of falling. Keith stretched out his hand more, gesturing for her to hurry.
He lifted her up, and she thanked him. They continued this until they reached the roof of the tall building. Alaina sat down, almost out of breath. Keith stood tall, looking out at the evening sky, and the city within it.
“Now what?” Asked Alaina. Keith reached into his cotton vest pocket. He took out a small device, and pushed a button. “Get down,” said Keith. Alaina lied flat on her chest. The button made the same two beeps that the Combine officer’s made. He must have swiped it on his way.
Before too long, a helicopter arrived at the roof. It hovered next to them. One officer was in the chopper. Keith said, “Thanks, officer!” The officer quickly reached for his gun, but not in time for Keith to stab him in the heart.
Keith threw the officer off of the helicopter. “Come,” he said. Alaina got up and ran to the chopper. They both boarded it, Keith piloting it. “Where are we going?” Asked Alaina. “Home,” said Keith.
The helicopter was flying east in seconds. Alaina noticed a sticky note on the window that read, ‘Note to self: Get fuel soon!!!’