lastHOPE_lambda
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RISE OF THE ORGANICS
Planet: Toa Alpa 3:31 p.m.
A young man lay atop a spore almost twenty stories high. He looked up into the distant sky, the sun set was a dazzling blue green color. A couple of lizard-like creatures peacefully chortled. It was a day just like any other, well almost. There had been a strange site in the sky. The young man had seen it earlier and climbed the spore to get a better look, but now there was nothing but the sky, the stars, and that one bright blue planet that he could just barely see in the distance.
He was beginning to fall asleep, the noise of the lizards almost like a lullaby. Then he saw it, an unholy rip through the sky. Only this one was bigger, big enough to suck him in. A horrible ripping feeling spread through him as he sped through the portal. It was almost as if his very atoms were being ripped apart and when the pain became so great that he thought he would die, it all stopped.
Planet: Earth 3:34 P.m.
He lay in a crumpled heap barely breathing. What was this foul place? The air was so foul, it almost made him feel sick. Even the ground felt…it felt wrong some how like it was being drained of its most important elements. He relaxed for a second and tried to calm him self, after a few minutes he gained enough strength to get up. There didn’t seem to be anything wrong with him, he found this surprising after all that pain he just experienced.
He looked around frantically, where was he? He knew every inch of Toa Alpa and this was not like anything he’d ever seen on Toa. The smell of blood stained the air and mixed with the pollution to make the most unbearable stench he had ever smelled. And what where all these odd box shaped structures sticking out of the ground? He began to walk toward one till he meet the edge of the side walk. He looked down at it and touched it, how odd he thought the rocks are spread like a paste on the ground. He was not sure what he would do or where he would even go everything was so wrong here. Then from behind him he heard a voice, “Hey are you ok?” he asked.
The young man smiled he understood this language it was an ancient dialect but still common among a lot of the people on Toa. He replied “What is this place?”
The man seemed confused and said “Not from around here?”
The young man turned around to face the man. The mans eyes widened slightly. He seemed to be starring at the left eye of the young man. He said “Dr. Kleiner will want to see this. Come with me hurry.” The man put on a strange white gas mask and began to run. The young man quickly followed behind him.
This is just the begining I didn't have time to type more sorry but tell me if ya like it hate it please be kind this is the first time I've written a fan fic I'll add more later k.
p.s. It didn't load the fonts I wanted:frown:
Planet: Toa Alpa 3:31 p.m.
A young man lay atop a spore almost twenty stories high. He looked up into the distant sky, the sun set was a dazzling blue green color. A couple of lizard-like creatures peacefully chortled. It was a day just like any other, well almost. There had been a strange site in the sky. The young man had seen it earlier and climbed the spore to get a better look, but now there was nothing but the sky, the stars, and that one bright blue planet that he could just barely see in the distance.
He was beginning to fall asleep, the noise of the lizards almost like a lullaby. Then he saw it, an unholy rip through the sky. Only this one was bigger, big enough to suck him in. A horrible ripping feeling spread through him as he sped through the portal. It was almost as if his very atoms were being ripped apart and when the pain became so great that he thought he would die, it all stopped.
Planet: Earth 3:34 P.m.
He lay in a crumpled heap barely breathing. What was this foul place? The air was so foul, it almost made him feel sick. Even the ground felt…it felt wrong some how like it was being drained of its most important elements. He relaxed for a second and tried to calm him self, after a few minutes he gained enough strength to get up. There didn’t seem to be anything wrong with him, he found this surprising after all that pain he just experienced.
He looked around frantically, where was he? He knew every inch of Toa Alpa and this was not like anything he’d ever seen on Toa. The smell of blood stained the air and mixed with the pollution to make the most unbearable stench he had ever smelled. And what where all these odd box shaped structures sticking out of the ground? He began to walk toward one till he meet the edge of the side walk. He looked down at it and touched it, how odd he thought the rocks are spread like a paste on the ground. He was not sure what he would do or where he would even go everything was so wrong here. Then from behind him he heard a voice, “Hey are you ok?” he asked.
The young man smiled he understood this language it was an ancient dialect but still common among a lot of the people on Toa. He replied “What is this place?”
The man seemed confused and said “Not from around here?”
The young man turned around to face the man. The mans eyes widened slightly. He seemed to be starring at the left eye of the young man. He said “Dr. Kleiner will want to see this. Come with me hurry.” The man put on a strange white gas mask and began to run. The young man quickly followed behind him.
This is just the begining I didn't have time to type more sorry but tell me if ya like it hate it please be kind this is the first time I've written a fan fic I'll add more later k.
p.s. It didn't load the fonts I wanted:frown:
