sv98 +tec9+skined walther wa for rivals

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[switch]

i like em. the corners on the top one look a little sharp, could be like that in real life tho, i dont know

and the second model looks a bit too clean could do with a bit of dirt and some darker colours imo. Nice models tho

 

[SidewinderX]

the SMG and the sv98 look good, no crits

The wa2000....
a) The metal should be a bit more specular, nothing real important right now
b)the wood seems poorly mapped on the upper part ofm the stock and on the the part underneath the barrel. did you jsut use a basic max uwv map (ie cyclinder) for those? The wood on the handle look fine though.

c) You might want to make the wood a bit darker, right now it looks like plywood.

 

[dawdler]

Yeah, the skin on that one is far to clean... Factory new, and polished by a private for a few weeks

 

[!-fgdf-!]

first it a matter of lights that used was bit to hard
second this are not final/hl2 shaders so...

 

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...and there are no bumps...

 

[BioWave]

The models are fine

Some of these people don't know what they are talking about

And as we have discussed before don't skin them yet as the importer may not support it. That maybe done in hammer (I guess :S)

 

[obscene]

Magnificent! Superb as always...

 

[Stormy]

did you boolean the holes on the SMG or the finger grips on the big snipz0r?

 

[Nostradamus]

nice, but i dont dig the wood texture

 

[!-fgdf-!]

the holes was boolean
p.s. god damned wood will be batter))))

 

[mindless_moder]

if u made that wood its good but if u just mapped an image thats real sucky theres hardly any detail in the texture.
do u usually render the guns without the triggers?
u should have stated that the skin is wip.

 

[SidewinderX]

Well, if you make a skin with a .bmp, i'm sure the engine will support it

 

[spin]

The first two models look good to me. The first sniper rifle has some nice mesh work, and the Walther looks good too (except for the texture). The Tec-9, however, has a few serious problems with the body and magazine area.

Here's a small image outlining the shape of the body:
http://dfuss.monsoon-studios.com/temp/tec9.jpg

How about some polycounts?

 

[!-fgdf-!]

the mistake you found (marked on top)
averything is good you just dont see this on this render
the mistake you found (magazine area)
yes it nead to be correct thx
tec 9-2995 tris ( thanks to this god damned holes in body)
sv98-2700tris

 

[simmo]

holy crap! the second one rules

 

[Fonk]

heyyy anything bullpup gets my vote =) v nice looking weaps