The Clean Suit Chronicles

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I thought of this while playing OPF.


Chapter One: The sound of explosions.


"Look Sid I dont care if you if the Xen crystals are cracked a little just do your job!"

"Fine, but when we die it's your fault."

Sid Braxter was always getting picked on by Chris Kintiey, as Sid walked to get his clean suit on he saw a small red dot on the floor; as he aproachd a drop from the ceiling droped and hit the ground. "Hmmmm" Sid ponderned. He kept walking and grabbed his cleansuit and put it on. As he walked back the spot was bigger. The leak of this red liquid was draining faster. Sid picked up the paste and got to the Thermo-port lab. Chris was tapping his foot on the ground and glared at Sid. "O.K. slow poke lets get this show on the road!"
Sid stepped into the cage. The cage was merely titanium colored red and some Xen crystals hung above him. "3.2.1." Chris hit the button. Sid didn't know what happened it felt as if he was dropping. Faster, and faster he dropped. "CHRIS! GET ME OUT TURN IT OFF ZAP ME TO THE NEAREST TELE-BOOTH!" Chris wasn't there just static. He looked down and saw stars forming a circle, but they wern't stars they we Xen crystals! The all glowed making a very bright light. As Sid dropped he felt a burning sensation all over his body. He started screaming! He closed his eyes and clenched his teeth, but the pain stayed. He cooled down, "what happned he thought?" He opened his eyes and saw a small man in a labcoat looking at him. He was on his back looking around appernetly this was not somwhere he wanted to be. "Are you alright?" This man screamed. "Yes, but i'm burned I think." He groaned; "well i'm glad I was here, you where in the thermo-port lab and the whole lab caught on fire, I came in and found you hovering over a bunch of glowing crystals!" Sid panicked and started crawling back but as he crawled away he felt no land under his hands. He looked back and saw a black screen patched with blue twists and golden stars. The man helped him up," As I got you and dragged you out of the room the glowing things rose up and made a line form, it wooshed down and cut a big chunk of earth in half!"; "but all the sudden we started floating away into the beyond!" Sid was mesmerised by this tale,"What is your name?" Sid asked, "Andy. Billfingers." Sid made a muffled laugh. "I'm Sid Braxter." They shook hands and sat down. "What do we now?" Andy asked. " "Wait."


Chapter Two: The Waiting Game.


"Sid i'm bored." Andy said. "Here lets look around since we have nothing to do but wait". Sid found some broken little parts of machinery, and Andy found a thermo-kit. "Sid! I found somthing!" Sid looked at it and opened it.
In the kit was a call box, some food and water, and two large radio-powered batterys. Sid picked got a little crumb of the food and threw it into space, it didn't float instead it had the same gravity of earth! "Andy, go find me a large nut!" "What kind of nut sir?" "A METAL NUT!!!" Andy rushed off in search of one. "Sid found out one of the machines he found was magnet, the other was a small launching device for launching small objects into miniturizing funnel portals. Sid put one battery into the launcher and the other in the magnet.
Andy came back with a nut. "Thank you Andy." "No problem Sid!" Sid put the nut in the launcher and turned on the battery. Sid launched the nut into space quickly pointing the magnet ray towerds it direction. WHOOSH! The small piece of land went flying off into the "who knows where". "SID I'M FREAKING OUT HERE!" Andy was screaming horrificly loud. They stopped, Sid didn't point the magnet a different way it stopped by it self. They started to drop. Faster and faster they dropped; Sid looked down and saw a ring of bright stars. He started to feel like he was on fire again. He screamed clenching his teeth crying almost. "ANDY GET OVER HERE! Andy hauled his own ass just to get to him. "GRAB MY HAND" Andy grabbed his hand and then Sid jumped. As he fell into the ring a small green orb appered. He fell and fell and then ZAP!

Stay tuned for chapter three: Metal space!
 
I'm quite sorry to say, but I quit reading "The Clean Suit Chronicles" right after the first sentence because of the horrible spelling and grammar. Atleast copy and paste the writing into Microsoft Word or some other text that features a spell check before posting online for thousands of potential viewers :)
 
Grammer = teh suxx0rz

Go continue the BM Janitor writings, that was fun.
 
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