I've decided to post a story that has been sitting on my hard drive for over a month now. I don't think many people read this forum but it seems a waste not to post it. I've re-written my original story, and as before, all the descriptions and enemies are based on the bink videos or screenshots on this site.
Below is the first part:
The heavy breathing is misting his gas mask. The shoulders move up and down vividly, his head darts from face to face, panicking. A ring forms around him and they force him to his knees. His comrades lie smeared across the walls and floor, distorted in twisted heaps, sprawled over tables. The soldier nearest draws a pistol; they shout at each other, voices fading in echoes.
I do to him what they do to us!
He might have information!
You are gesticulating wildly.
He wasn’t supposed to survive!
We can’t take prisoners!
We kill him - we become them!
The pistol swings towards him, a hand grabs for the arm. It is too late - he can’t –
Jo jolted back into consciousness. Has she even been asleep? The dream recurred nightly, but this time she had viewed the perspective of the dead soldier. Piotr had executed the prisoner after an arduous fight through the carcass of a hostel, where five warriors fell. The masked enemies had suffered heavier fatalities, although that hardly comforted her. They had once been peaceful citizens, but the irresistible march of the invader had combined them into its limitless ranks. Now they carried out daily acts of wanton cruelty, torture and killings on any who dared to violate the orders from the citadel, but Jo remained uneasy at the shooting of those few who surrendered. A cure had to be possible, to return them to their true state.
Her comrades slept deeply around her, using old rags as blankets, huddled together to conserve warmth. Only three of the seven originated from the city, the others had chanced across the desolate, ruined terrain of their homelands, heading for one of the last known bases of concerted human resistance. Tom came from the smouldering London, Lee from a fishing village in China, Jo and her compatriot, Mike, the infested United States. In the eyes of the Combine, they all looked the same and only desperate fighting kept them from its bio-mechanic grasp.
Lying motionless, her eyes wandered the brown capillaries of damp rot that meandered across the ceiling, gnawing at the fading white paint. Distant machine guns chattered and explosions thumped. Somewhere a gun ship whirred over the fray; complemented by the crackles and pops of the ubiquitous fires that blazed in the streets, spewing billowing plumes of smoke which hung over rooftops, smearing the sky with flakes of ash. Yet the routine cacophony of war did not perturb her these days. Only the vile cawing carrion birds disturbed the chill of the night.
A flat-footed tramping sounded in the street below, stopping irregularly as if the person had difficulty moving in the piles of rubble and debris that littered the road. Fearing a wounded civilian might be down there – soldiers rarely ventured into the open – she scrambled for her weapon and crept to the frameless window. Concealed in a dark corner she craned her neck to peer at the ruins.
“Don’t,” Piotr’s soft voice whispered off to her left, “Don’t disturb it.”
He moved closer, but his large dark eyes remained sunken in shadow. Dark patches formed around his dimpled mouth as a nervous smile twitched, and collected in the thick scar on his chin. A factory machinist before the invasion, he had joined the resistance after his family had disappeared a few days into the battle. Jo knew that although he yearned to find them, he felt his search was in vain. He had been shot four times, miraculously escaping each time with flesh wounds. He now showed a chilling ruthlessness toward the combined soldiers, killing any who crossed his path.
The person in the street crunched loudly through shards of glass.
She gave him a questioning glance - It?
He shook his head, and motioned for her to move away. Jo glanced at the pistol strapped to his leg, and shuffled back along the wall. It could only mean an alien, but this one had sounded so human. She had only seen dead aliens, rotting under the scorching sun or riddled with bullets. Everyone preferred them that way, as the strange creatures stirred a visceral fear unlike anything a terrestrial animal could elicit, yet Jo remained curious to see a living specimen.
Unable to sleep she wandered the hostel, testing each step in case the floor collapsed. Civilians had taken shelter in the building, grateful for the protection from the resistance soldiers. Several conversed in hushed tones around a fire, their shadows dancing on the walls. Jo paused outside their room, listening. Often the civilians inadvertently provided useful intelligence about enemy positions and movements, but also maintained a plentiful supply of rumours.
“Any news on how the attack is going?” one asked.
“We are very close to the tower here; I think they will reach the walls any day now – maybe even tomorrow.”
“Yes. Those bastards’ days are numbered. They force my young son, you know, to run errands behind the lines. He says these days they are jumpy, on edge, they know that the freed men are coming.”
“Who are the freed men?”
“My son says, the enemy, they are afraid of the free men. They have good weapons, good tactics, they fight for their cause by choice. I think they have surrounded the city, they will enter the battle when the resistance opens a path to the tower walls.”
“I hope so . . . I wonder what sort of weapon would break those walls. . .”
Below is the first part:
The heavy breathing is misting his gas mask. The shoulders move up and down vividly, his head darts from face to face, panicking. A ring forms around him and they force him to his knees. His comrades lie smeared across the walls and floor, distorted in twisted heaps, sprawled over tables. The soldier nearest draws a pistol; they shout at each other, voices fading in echoes.
I do to him what they do to us!
He might have information!
You are gesticulating wildly.
He wasn’t supposed to survive!
We can’t take prisoners!
We kill him - we become them!
The pistol swings towards him, a hand grabs for the arm. It is too late - he can’t –
Jo jolted back into consciousness. Has she even been asleep? The dream recurred nightly, but this time she had viewed the perspective of the dead soldier. Piotr had executed the prisoner after an arduous fight through the carcass of a hostel, where five warriors fell. The masked enemies had suffered heavier fatalities, although that hardly comforted her. They had once been peaceful citizens, but the irresistible march of the invader had combined them into its limitless ranks. Now they carried out daily acts of wanton cruelty, torture and killings on any who dared to violate the orders from the citadel, but Jo remained uneasy at the shooting of those few who surrendered. A cure had to be possible, to return them to their true state.
Her comrades slept deeply around her, using old rags as blankets, huddled together to conserve warmth. Only three of the seven originated from the city, the others had chanced across the desolate, ruined terrain of their homelands, heading for one of the last known bases of concerted human resistance. Tom came from the smouldering London, Lee from a fishing village in China, Jo and her compatriot, Mike, the infested United States. In the eyes of the Combine, they all looked the same and only desperate fighting kept them from its bio-mechanic grasp.
Lying motionless, her eyes wandered the brown capillaries of damp rot that meandered across the ceiling, gnawing at the fading white paint. Distant machine guns chattered and explosions thumped. Somewhere a gun ship whirred over the fray; complemented by the crackles and pops of the ubiquitous fires that blazed in the streets, spewing billowing plumes of smoke which hung over rooftops, smearing the sky with flakes of ash. Yet the routine cacophony of war did not perturb her these days. Only the vile cawing carrion birds disturbed the chill of the night.
A flat-footed tramping sounded in the street below, stopping irregularly as if the person had difficulty moving in the piles of rubble and debris that littered the road. Fearing a wounded civilian might be down there – soldiers rarely ventured into the open – she scrambled for her weapon and crept to the frameless window. Concealed in a dark corner she craned her neck to peer at the ruins.
“Don’t,” Piotr’s soft voice whispered off to her left, “Don’t disturb it.”
He moved closer, but his large dark eyes remained sunken in shadow. Dark patches formed around his dimpled mouth as a nervous smile twitched, and collected in the thick scar on his chin. A factory machinist before the invasion, he had joined the resistance after his family had disappeared a few days into the battle. Jo knew that although he yearned to find them, he felt his search was in vain. He had been shot four times, miraculously escaping each time with flesh wounds. He now showed a chilling ruthlessness toward the combined soldiers, killing any who crossed his path.
The person in the street crunched loudly through shards of glass.
She gave him a questioning glance - It?
He shook his head, and motioned for her to move away. Jo glanced at the pistol strapped to his leg, and shuffled back along the wall. It could only mean an alien, but this one had sounded so human. She had only seen dead aliens, rotting under the scorching sun or riddled with bullets. Everyone preferred them that way, as the strange creatures stirred a visceral fear unlike anything a terrestrial animal could elicit, yet Jo remained curious to see a living specimen.
Unable to sleep she wandered the hostel, testing each step in case the floor collapsed. Civilians had taken shelter in the building, grateful for the protection from the resistance soldiers. Several conversed in hushed tones around a fire, their shadows dancing on the walls. Jo paused outside their room, listening. Often the civilians inadvertently provided useful intelligence about enemy positions and movements, but also maintained a plentiful supply of rumours.
“Any news on how the attack is going?” one asked.
“We are very close to the tower here; I think they will reach the walls any day now – maybe even tomorrow.”
“Yes. Those bastards’ days are numbered. They force my young son, you know, to run errands behind the lines. He says these days they are jumpy, on edge, they know that the freed men are coming.”
“Who are the freed men?”
“My son says, the enemy, they are afraid of the free men. They have good weapons, good tactics, they fight for their cause by choice. I think they have surrounded the city, they will enter the battle when the resistance opens a path to the tower walls.”
“I hope so . . . I wonder what sort of weapon would break those walls. . .”