Was the nuke in Opposing Force a good idea?

Will anyone review my 1337 mini-story? (Not double post, this post was posted a day after that post was.. w/e.) I need to know if I should continue it..

Chuckled here and there. Make a mention on how the potatoe chips explode in your mouth and then make a grunt say STFU that onions from white castle. And then make another grunt say ZOMGBBQH4x!!!1!FTW we are going to white castle and then make the pilot go sigh. Then the assasin gets pissed and jumps outta the chopper with the chips with a parachute.
 
Oh.. alright, well Im going to start a thread in fan fiction if you want to know what happens. YAY! :D
 
Damn all my Race-X Theories gone down the drain...

You guys wanna hear them again?
 
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