(wip) phalanx tower

[leadphalanx]

Here is a map I started a while ago, It's going to be a futuristic- castle/tower/thing. What you see in the pics is just the very top section of the tower, and keep in mind it isn't done. Please give me some constructive critisism.

 

[Angry Lawyer]

Holy crap, that's really quite good.

-Angry Lawyer

 

[Pajari]

Looking extremely good. Reminds me of Halo a bit, and in a good way.

 

[Dodo]

the bump map isnt that good... lots of little white speckles all over the place ...

-dodo

 

[63]

Your textures?

 

[leadphalanx]

the white specals are not because of the bumpmaps, that's just the picture losing a little quality because of being resized, and my gfx card doesn't support anti-aliasing.

and yes I made all of the costom textures

 

[Osilo]

Try turning the specular down a bit. The screenshots make it out too be overdone.

 

[Crispy]

Pretty nice concept. Yours? It reminds me ever so slightly of the Borg mod for Quake.

If you could concept another tower in a more medieval style I might be interesting in talking to you

 

[leadphalanx]

Yea the concept is mine, I drew most of it out on paper first a long time ago, and finally got around to making it.

 

[giant384]

Holy Crap That Is Beautiful

 

[The_One_Free_Man]

any other screen shots? id love to see what it looks like from outside of the towerl. nice textures your really talented.

 

[silentbob]

really nice,

heres some stuff to help you on (if you want)
- i like the fire, maybe add more fire/smoke stacks around? on top?
- more randomness on the ground floor to use as cover, boxes, futuristic-barrels
- and then the 3D sky box, maybe mini towers in teh distance to make it look like its in a fleet of them or something..

dunno but theres my $0.02

 

[WAR_Nuker]

you made a terrific map.

only problem i see is the bottom (white) skybox texture. unless you cant ever see that in game, thats pretty tacky.

 

[63]

All skyboxes are like that :|

 

[leadphalanx]

Here's a little update:

No map is complete without one of these-

And yes. it's brush based, and I am still working on making the flames look better.

 

[Crispy]

Err. I'm not so hot on that.

(what is it with me and puns today?)

 

[Quak_66]

this looks freakish good.

 

[$kelet0r]

ace!!
lovely work
it'd be amazing as a futuristic hangar on an alien planet or simply a temple
can you add ramparts and mini towers leading from the main building like a star while keeping the main structure intact (cos its soo bootiful)