dunno how to call it

[slinter]

the sun came smattering down from the skies,
it focused, multiplexed right into my eyes,
touched the ground,
a screaming sound.
i was stunned, blinded, staggering, an instant pain.
the pulchritudinous reflection that shot into my brain.
...
by slinter

(to be continued, i dont have time to finish it right now, but the best part has yet to come)

 

[Cukel]

Right.

 

[WacK]

Dunno how to call it.. it's dunno WHAT to call it..

well, its ok

 

[Sloth]

I think it comes under 'prose' sorta like poems but not quite.
Cool stuff though.

 

[StardogChampion]

Did you try without using a thesaurus? I can bet that barely any of us know what "pulchritudinous" means.

 

[slinter]

oh, you kinda dont hate it, that makes me a happy slinter. its prolly too cheap to be called poem, its maybe more like music lyrics. and i didnt use a thesaurus, my teacher introduced this word.

 

[Thargore]

"Mood: Angsty". "Today I withered away in the shallow darkness of this excuse of a world. I saw a cat sitting under a willow tree, but it ran away when I approached. Sandy anus... Oh, heavy is the burden of bearing this excruciating existance, is the blade the only emergency exit? Woe woe!"

 

[slinter]

modern hamlet O:
but quoting doesnt count

 

[jerkasaur]

the sun came smattering down from the skies,
it focused, multiplexed right into my eyes,
...i was stunned, blinded, staggering, an instant pain.

Sounds like HDR to me..LOL

 

[Thargore]

Sounds like HDR to me..LOL

Dude, don't be racist..

 

[jerkasaur]

hey com'on, it was a good laugh...

 

[WacK]

hey com'on, it was a good laugh...

for shure m8 .. well.. a little lollish..

 

[slinter]

shush you all :hmph:

 

[Tollbooth Willie]

Sounds like HDR to me..LOL

Fer sheezle.

 

[Kamikazie]

Fer sheezle.

you brought up this thread for "Fer sheezle"?

seriously WTF! :|

 

[slinter]

i agree, it sucks lol D: wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee