the foward grip need some work.....it looks a little to fat and short...... and needs to be rounded on each end a little....It shouldnt be shaped like a coke can.
if its outa focus is cause of the damn jepg. im workin on it. im not good at rendering so im getting some one else to do it. keep in mind its not for HL2 its for bf42
ffs, if this is in Max, then when u save the render, change the settings. in the render window, wen u click the save button, it comes up with a dialog box, its gives u options and stuff, change the smoothing to 5, and the quality to largest. thatll fix ur bluriness.