Start of which could be a solid process.

[Naph]

I'll try my luck on edges with a palette later on, otherwise, very shoddy line work.

 

[Druckles]

Looking quite good. But the face looks a bit bland.

 

[Naph]

Looking quite good. But the face looks a bit bland.

I agree, but I tried adding lighting to the cheek, added laugh marks etc. But it just didn't seem right and pulled the guy away from his sterile look

 

[Krynn72]

Pretty cool. I like the color pallet you used a lot.

I think you definately need to add some detail into the face though. At the very least, give a hint of some shape around his nostril, because as it stands, I cant tell where the nose starts and the face ends. Also, where his lips meet and connect should have a pretty dark shadow.

One other thing i notice is that the wrinkles in his collar are all originating from a place where they wouldnt. There doesnt seem to be any pinching at the top of the collar for there to be any wrinkles like that.

 

[Naph]

One other thing i notice is that the wrinkles in his collar are all originating from a place where they wouldnt. There doesnt seem to be any pinching at the top of the collar for there to be any wrinkles like that.

He had a hook attached, through the collar and the neck. How ever, I removed it for it made the picture too dark :X I'll fix it (kinda invisible to me lol )

I'll try and do shadows to pronounce his face, rather than highlights. I can post the final adjustments if you're keen

 

[Krynn72]

Very keen.

 

[Naph]

k

 

[Druckles]

It's the cheek I think. It looks way too flat.

 

[Darkside55]

I like the colors you used. The tattoo's pretty cool too.

The ear's a bit off...move it down and back a little, to line it up with the jawline. Also, waaaay too much space between the nose and the upper lip. Humans don't have that much of a gap there, so unless this guy is humanoid and not of our species, you might want to fix it.

I like the eye, too.

 

[Naph]

He's supposed to be liquid, the tattoo is actually his vertebrate and the eye is some sort of light concealed inside. I like it too, it pronounces the bubbles inside of him.
The cheek is yes flat, but I now know it is because of the ear's placement (But it's based off my cheek bones)
Thanks for all the crit's to better it

 

[nurizeko]

Very arty, nicely done, good colours and use of them.